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    My Short Story Please Read and give some feedback

    Chapter 1: Just Business 9:15 a.m Bank of America: 2035 4th Ave, Seattle, WA. The sun was up now and the city was already bustling, the inhabitants of the city followed their morning routines, stopping to buy coffee at a local cafe and browsing through magazines at a newsstand, preparing...
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    Poll: A short story

    Actually I added the corrections and some of Do-Po's imagery of them shooting the teller.
  3. Ernest1

    Poll: A short story

    Thanks I will add more later and I'll try to show what they are doing more.
  4. Ernest1

    Poll: A short story

    9:15 a.m Bank of America, Seattle, Washington. The sun was up now and the city was already bustling, the inhabitants of the city followed their morning routines, stopping to buy coffee at a local cafe and browsing through magazines at a newsstand, preparing for the day?s work. The leader of...
  5. Ernest1

    Poll: My Short Story Please Read and give some feedback

    9:15 a.m Bank of America, Seattle, Washington. The sun was up now and the city was already bustling, the inhabitants of the city followed their morning routines, stopping to buy coffee at a local cafe and browsing through magazines at a newsstand, preparing for the day?s work. The leader of...
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    Poll: Infinite Ammunition?

    maybe the slips have dimensional hole in them.