Recent content by Khedive Rex

I've submitted my judgement for the round and will continue to doll out criticism. Thank you all for your patience.

Criticism 1 of 4.

One week is more than sufficient. And I'm happy to PM my verdict. On the subject of reviews, do I post them in thread? Do I send them to you? Do I hold off on posting them until results are revealed? How would you like that handled?

It's time for me to admit something I'm not remotely proud of. I've been trying to coax myself into writing an intro for this game for more than two weeks. And after two weeks, I have less than a page of flowery language with very little meat. I love what's going on here. The return of a...

I have a post incoming tonight. And I'm very, very attached to this thread. But I'm deeply worried about showing up after msh's post and having my character refused. It's coming tonight. Please consider me a player. I understand if you need to close recruitment and start working on match-ups...

I have far from forgotten this and remain busy composing an intro. If I can't get it appropriately polished this weekend, I'll post it anyway and just live with it. But, it's been long enough at this point I think at the very least I should get some of my basic character points across...

I'll have my character submitted this weekend. I have a very clear image of him/it, just gotta translate that down to paper. Is there something like a character sheet you'd like me to fill out or do I have permission to take full liberties? Also, I demand High School Romantic Comedy be...

If there's an Escapist revival, I'd consider it an honor to participate. I didn't think I'd ever see a Ratings War again, honestly. It brings up some tremendously good memories for me. I couldn't think of a better place to start on a spirited rebuild of our once beloved forum. So, count me...

Percy for his part did not have questions. He didn't feel a strong pull toward answers in his day to day life to begin with, so often knowing more only makes a person more bitter, more cold. Percy knew what asking questions would do to this moment, muddle it with grey brown soil, taint the...

Percy trotted limber to a nice quiet area between the fighting. He swayed as he came to a stop and leaned over, breathing ragged and deep. He was a little old for dodging blows, perhaps a little old for a battlefield. But he had seen enough in his time he doubted the stain could be cleaned off...

Percy eyed the maverick crowd of thronging masses and bludgeoning weapons with palpable disappointment. The enemy scout ship had landed a small platoon of wimpy brawlers and suddenly everyone was racing around like headless chickens. Except they cawed, incessantly, a privilege rarely afforded...

Perseverance hummed through the whole of the madness. Veltis bobbed his head along, to church hymns, practically whispered. Perseverance supposed that the long ears of the Bermician must be more adept to catch softer sounds and thought little of it except to think "What a determinedly friendly...

Perseverance studied the little Bermecian as he assumed a meditative position on the floor, he knew from experience it was not strictly appropriate posture for any meditating tradition; and that knowledge burned. "Tell me, Sir Perseverance, Do you have a dream or a desire-" "No." A...

There was something much colder than astonishment in Perseverance's cloudy-green eyes but it held them wide and captivated through the entirety of the young Bermecian's speech. His concern for Percy's health and mana was immediately foreign, the old white mage was certain he had not been asked...

Percy's awoke startled and gasping for air. at the behest of a prodding stranger. There was a moment's disorientation, a second of wonder, how was he asleep on a bench and where was this darkened room? It was cold inside anyway, Percy felt it on his hands and his face. It wasn't an intolerable...