Recent content by Sharkz

When i reread it I found that I didn't really look into the bad points of the game which is something I will certainly rectify in future reviews. I did miss a few things out such as more about the hardware requirements but unfortunately I was limited by a wordcount so I never had room to do...

Thanks guys, any constructive criticism or feedback will be very helpful.

This is a review that I wrote for my college assignment. I got a Distinction which is the highest grade for it but i'm interested in what other people think about it and what sort of advice people can offer me on how to improve my writing. I have an interest in working in journalism. Game...