The surly machineman, whom Ctar had taken to be their employer, and had his suspicions confirmed, had made his first action as aggressive as possible, before bickering with his compatriot and possible right hand. It was not hard to see why; between Ctar's own loss of control, the looks of the...
Ctar had been thinking about the silence of his only confirmed comrade. Had it been something he said? Surely the younger man would not have expected bounty hunting to be easy? They lived in dangerous times, at the whims and mercy of dangerous men. If you'd been traveling, hell if you'd been off...
"Hey, big man!"
Oh god there it was. The man was following, him, and he wanted more of his time. If the next words out of his mouth were another insult, Ctar had thought, he would not be in a position to remain calm. If the next words out of his mouth referred to becoming part of his cadre...
Something long and thin bumped into Ctar's side. Ctar thought nothing of it until a voice filled with misplaced vitriol darted out from behind him after he had stopped. Ctar turned around and looked down at the man in front of him. He was some sort of aug-freak Ctar would of wagered from the...
"So I never caught you're name boy, or where you're from?"
"W'a's it matter to you, smuggler?"
Ctar had been forced, due to heavy suspicions of the likelihood of suspicions placed upon the legality of his mods, to adopt a less than legal, and less than comfortable, approach onto Tanra...
Dust and ash tore through the air as he walked. There were no visible footprints around and no sound could be heard over the sound of wind currently flapping through his duster, whipping at his knees through the ripped slacks he had worn all these years. The guitar was slung over his shoulder...
I almost haven't the heart to telly you I meant a paragraph or two outside of the sheet, as if you were writing a RP post about the change. I'm very sorry for this misunderstanding.
Looking pretty good, you just missed how the Defiler acts when manifested. If you could PM me about the lore you've got built there (I think it's lore anyway, I've likely missed something) So I can add it to my little lore doc, I'd appreciate it.
This is pretty magnificent, but if you can...
If I'm confronted with something I'm afraid of (Usually it's the dark because I'm a wimp) I stop myself from getting scared by singing or reciting bible verses. Of worthy mentioning is that I'm not a Christian, but the act of trying to remember the verse itself and then recite its entirety keeps...
A defiler personality would be very much appreciated, but otherwise this is looking pretty damn good. (Also you get away with the whole "Image for appearance" because you drew it yourself.)
I don't mean to be hurtful but your character seems a bit one note. It'd be cool if you could write...
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