2284: A Futuristic Rebellion RP (closed/started)

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RavingPenguin

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[HEADING=1]2284: A Futuristic Rebellion[/HEADING]​

The year is 2284 and humanity has evolved. Every person alive has a gift, some more valuable than others. There?s not a person alive without what we would consider a super human trait. Geniuses walk among the populace, the superior in strength lift things a modern man would need a fork lift for, mechanics create machines of wonder. Cars and machines zip about at super speeds. Robots keep the streets clean. Plants grow fat on artificial soils. People thrive, and there are rumors in place that people could become even more unique in there powers, thanks to science. These gifts have advanced science and art far beyond what was conceivable nearly 200 years prior. No power is to strange in this world, and each is manipulated in its own specific way. Man has evolved into greatness and become is truly wonderful.

However, what humanity has created could be considered deplorable. The world has become desolate and filled with conflict. Nations have devolved into city-states. What was once the United States has become 5 states, constantly at war. The Republic of Seattle, The Los Angeles Union, Democratic Chicago, New York, and Oceanside Miami. Chicago is the most dominate, composing most of what was the United States, its military contradicting its name, such as many of the states. Wealth and weapons manufacturers prop up the city. Greed and power conquer the land. The cities are largely industrialized and structured. The military is in control. Police forces are running 24/7 keeping people in line. Laws and curfews are in place to keep the city in peak condition for fueling the war machine. This isn?t to say that the city is an entire doldrum, the upper class area is kept clean and safe, while most of the middle class is kept moderately well, but the slums and ghettos are grotesque and crime ridden. These places are where the police don?t tread; these are the people who?ve come to despise the government. These are the people willing to fight and resist. This is where our story begins.

A resistance has begun, gathering those rebellious and miscreant, channeling their energy towards a common goal toppling the monolithic authorities in control of the land. Chicago is the beginning, an Alpha. A Genesis. A Faction. The downtrodden call it many names, and to many its leaders are mysterious. They are known as Shadows, they operate behind closed doors. However, all of that is about to change.

A new leader has been chosen, or come to power, whatever you will. His mind is great, it sways the masses. He?s calculating and cunning. Though he cannot create this story, his world and dream, alone; he has aids. Gifted individuals throughout Alpha join him in his quest. Machines are built, plans are laid. Even the best laid plans go awry though. Contingencies happen, mistakes are made. The enemy is great, and the weapon small. Help is needed.

You'll be creating a character with what is essentially a low level super power (ex. If you choose super strength you wouldn't be strong enough to lift, lets say, a car, but an engine block could be hefted fairly easily). Please refer to my sheet as an example.

Name: Eric Ashton
Age: 24
Power: Genius strategist
Description: Eric stands at 5' 8" with ruddy brown hair and green eyes. He dresses intelligently, with leather boots, creased black slacks, a dress shirt, and a suit vest. He also has a captivating smile and is well kept.
Background: Eric grew up in the slums but was adopted by the wife of a powerful arms tycoon. Though a miscreant throughout his life, he graduated from the University of Chicago with top honors. He moved to take over his fathers business but was betrayed and cast down into the ghettos. Eric now strives to topple the society that cast him out and create a better world for every man.

Name: Alister Centrall
Age: 20
Power: Gifted Artist, propaganda machine
Description: 6' and blonde with blue eyes. Alister dresses casually and is generally relaxed. Generally carries around a rucksack filled with paints and such.
Background: Alister met Eric and sheltered him after he fell from grace in the upper class. Alister is Alpha's propaganda machine, though that by no means implies that he falsifies the truth. Artistically embellish is the term he prefers to use.
Name: Stephanie Aerie
Age: 30
Power: Barrier (Proto)
Description: Stephanie would normally be five and a half feet tall, however she is wheel chair bound. Shes a cheerful person despite her dissability though. She normally dresses in bright colours.
Background: Stephanie was one of the first test subjects for the military's wonder project to enhance the natural gifts people have. However the side effects left her crippled and week. Now she helps run Alpha from behind the scenes.
Name: Gruff
Age: 38
Power: Mechanical genius
Description: Gruff is an old military veteran. He's missing an arm but built a robotic replacement for it. His arm houses all sorts of neat gadgets and tools. Gruff dresses in old military fatigues and has salt-and-pepper hair.
Background. He doesn't talk about his military days much but helps provide Alpha with information on the military and machines, as well as Alpha's own capabilities.
Name: Kate Vakris
Age: 18
Power: Light manipulation (small scale)
Description: Kate has short cropped red hair and blue eyes. She dresses smartly and is all business.
Background: Kate was brought up by a local drug lord. She handled large quantities of money for him and on some occasions helped him evade law enforcement. Now she puts her talents to use for Alpha
Name: Yuma Kurosuchi
Age: 23
Power: Martial genius
Description: Yuma stands at 6' 2" with dark hair and darker eyes. He typically wears street clothes and carries a large knife.
Background: Its not known where Yuma came from but when he arrived in Chicago he was immediately trodden over. As an extremely gifted martial artist and prolific in all weapons, Yuma works in training Alpha's militaristic arm. As small as it may be, Yuma has trained it well. He also works Eric's security detail.

Addendum to powers: Powers can be amplified but at the expense of your characters physical health. The more you amplify the greater the damage. Pushing just a bit may make you woozy and going too far will kill your character. I leave it to your judgement to know how far you're going to push.

Other Stuff: This is planned to be a fairly in depth RP with what will hopefully be an in depth story. Do NOT join if you have a habit of 1 line posts or posts with little depth. I will be accepting applications, though I do not know how many yet. Feel free to give it a shot! :D
 

axle 19

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Seems like a very interesting story Penguin though I'm curious. What are the limits to the superpowers?
 

The Zango

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Name: Tavien Kane

Age: 27

Power: Speed, knife expert.

Description: Tavien stands at an unimpressive 5.6'' and has a thin, wiry build. He has short dirty blond hair with brown roots, that he prefers to spike back. He almost constantly wears his trademark black shades, often refusing to take them off, even if its the dead of night. He wears worn leather jackets, jeans, fingerless gloves and a tatty grey scarf, making him fit right in with the vagrants and the beggars of the lower society, thus helping him hide from his enemies.


Background: Though many would doubt it because of his scruffy appearance, Tavien was once an agent for the Chicago city intelligence agency and for years he performed tasks for them, ranging from simple information gathering operations, to high-profile assassinations, both at home and abroad.

However something went wrong, after he was ordered to execute an entire family for the 'good of the city', Tavien saw the establishment for what it truly was, a power hungry and corrupt machine that ran off the misery of the 'lower classes'.

For years he has been running from the agency, but now he is going to make a difference, he's tired of running, its time to stand and fight.

Here we go, this looks like a pretty cool RP with a solid story, count me in!
 

RavingPenguin

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axle 19 said:
Seems like a very interesting story Penguin though I'm curious. What are the limits to the superpowers?
Basically there is no limit to the powers so long as your not god-modding. I tried to go for kind of a Scott Pilgrim super power theme.

Pandalisk said:
At school right now, you taking reserves?
Its more of an audition system, get your sheet posted and I'll review it. Once I have enough sheets to choose from I'll let you know if you got in.
 

ThePoodonkis

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May I join?

Name: Joshua Murray

Age: 20

Power: Minor telekinesis

Description: Josh is a thin, 6'0" traveller with shoulder length messy brown hair, blue eyes, and a disgustingly cheerful disposition considering his situation. He wears a pair of torn pants, an old shirt, worn boots, a beanie, and trench coat.

Background: Joshua was born in the Republic of Seattle to a small band of gypsies. One day when he was 5, he was out finding food, and he returned to find all of the gypsies missing. All of their things remained, but there was no sign of his friends, his family, anyone.
He packed up a backpack full of random odds and ends (a towel, a small tent, a few feet of twine, a small pocketknife, and a battered teddy bear) and started walking.
15 years Joshua has walked, never stopping, never settling down, never having a friend. As he walked, he came to realize something: the world is a terrible place. Everyone is unhappy, there's no love left in the world. He knew he had to fix this. Something had to be done to prove to people, prove to himself, that there is good in this world.
He will do everything in his power to make sure that everything will end up okay for someone. His life is meaningless when compared to everyone else, and if sacrifice is necessary, he will be the first to volunteer. Anything to make sure everything and everyone ends up okay...
 

Crayzor

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I want to join, but I have to go to work. I'll try and write a sheet as soon as possible.
 

Fishtie

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Might as well give it a shot. This could be interesting.

Name: Solomon Hastings

Age: 18

Power: Animal Empathy

Description: Solomon stands 5' tall even and is rather skinny with lanky arms and legs. He keeps his dark brown hair buzzed short. He has a somewhat ugly face with a small bit taken out of the tip of his right ear (a childhood accident) and his nose is somewhat flattened from where he once broke it and it was improperly set. He mostly dresses in comfortable practical cloths of earth tones, and even deplores dressing up or wearing anything that feels tight or restrictive.

Background: Solomon's parents were known as two of the best animal trainers in the entirety of the North American continent. They had refined their own animal empathy abilities to the extent that some said they could literally talk with animals. Solomon led a comfortable life until a few months ago.

In the investigation of a high profile political assassination the authorities traced an animal used in the murder to having been trained by Solomon's parents. While they were clearly not involved in the attack itself the authorities didn't care, an order to exterminate was given. Solomon's parents were both killed in a dawn raid on the family ranch. It was only due to Solomon being out practicing his empathy that he saw the flames and fled.

Now a wanted fugitive, Solomon eventually found his way to the resistance where he looks for an opportunity to avenge his parents.

Note: Solomon currently travels with Bathin, a trained sparrow that he had been working with on the morning of the attack.

Hope this is satisfactory.

EDIT: I just realized that I must have subconsciously copied the above poster's character name so I changed it. How embarrassing.
 

Andalusa

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Thanks for the encouragement, here's mine.
Name: Talitha Cirsey

Age: 17

Power: Can read/control emotions of others (could possibly evolve into complete control of other people's thoughts/actions?)

Description: Talitha is quite small and under developed for her age, though she only stands at 5'3" she is has an outstanding personality and no nonsense approach to the world. She has short, dark hair contrasted by light, almost golden eyes. Her smile, though rare, lights up her face. Talitha's typical choice of clothing is a simple, tunic-like dress, accompanied only by a belt and calf high boots.


[small]the left shoulder bugs me >.<[/small]

Background: Coming from a middle class background, Talitha has had many opportunities. She was sent to a good school and had an enjoyable childhood. However, her parents were restricting and at the age of 15 she abandoned her seemingly happy life and took refuge in the slums. Talitha was welcomed into a family of runaways, some, like herself, had fled from unhappy homes in the upper or middle classes, others were simply trying to scrape a living. Her ability to read other's emotions developed at the onset of puberty and continued to develop as she aged.

Hope it's okay.
 

The Zango

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Fishtie said:
Might as well give it a shot. This could be interesting.

Name: Solomon Hastings

Age: 18

Power: Animal Empathy

Description: Solomon stands 5' tall even and is rather skinny with lanky arms and legs. He keeps his dark brown hair buzzed short. He has a somewhat ugly face with a small bit taken out of the tip of his right ear (a childhood accident) and his nose is somewhat flattened from where he once broke it and it was improperly set. He mostly dresses in comfortable practical cloths of earth tones, and even deplores dressing up or wearing anything that feels tight or restrictive.

Background: Solomon's parents were known as two of the best animal trainers in the entirety of the North American continent. They had refined their own animal empathy abilities to the extent that some said they could literally talk with animals. Solomon led a comfortable life until a few months ago.

In the investigation of a high profile political assassination the authorities traced an animal used in the murder to having been trained by Solomon's parents. While they were clearly not involved in the attack itself the authorities didn't care, an order to exterminate was given. Solomon's parents were both killed in a dawn raid on the family ranch. It was only due to Solomon being out practicing his empathy that he saw the flames and fled.

Now a wanted fugitive, Solomon eventually found his way to the resistance where he looks for an opportunity to avenge his parents.

Note: Solomon currently travels with Bathin, a trained sparrow that he had been working with on the morning of the attack.

Hope this is satisfactory.

EDIT: I just realized that I must have subconsciously copied the above poster's character name so I changed it. How embarrassing.
Yeah lol, I was going to mention that. Thanks for the name change though :D
 

RavingPenguin

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We have 5 sheets, which is enough to get started but I'm going to keep it open for 2 more days. We'll start then despite how many sheets we have.

I look forward to working with everyone! ^_^
 

RavingPenguin

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Pandalisk said:
At school right now, you taking reserves?
Crayzor said:
I want to join, but I have to go to work. I'll try and write a sheet as soon as possible.
Super secret ninja bump and a double post. (I'm so sorry T^T)

Anywho, I'm holding this open for you two. If you'd like to join then please post a sheet at least Monday. Thankies ^_^
 

Broken Orange

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You know, I can redo a character that I was super proud of, "Shade" from a super villian RP, but change him to fit this story better. I am going to meditate on this matter.
 

CloggedDonkey

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Name: Raymond Seals
Age: looks roughly thirty, but there are no records that state when, or even if, he was born.
Power: Ability to "blend in" with his surroundings, making so that someone can look right at him, or even bump in to him, and, for some strange reason, it is though he isn't seen. They would never even know he was there, that he ever even exists.
Description:
Background: Raymond was a normal citizen of The Republic of Seattle, living out his life with the ever present threat of death or kidnapping seeming like nothing to his small brain. He was just a boy then, of only thirteen years of age, when his father had a "falling out" of sorts with the Minister of Peace. After only about a year, if that, he and his parents where vaporized. His parents, and almost him, weren't just killed, they never existed. There is not a single record anywhere in the world that states that they ever existed anywhere, with his grandmother dying a virgin and his grandfather dying in a war.

Every photograph of him was edited, every mention of his name a federal offense, even just seeing him could put the population at risk, so he fled. He fled with a group of refugees to Democratic Chicago, where he hoped to find a new life, but only found that, even here, he never existed, and that he was likely to die in poverty, with a history of crime at his back and a bleak future for the rest of humanity. Then he found that there was a resistance, that there was something to fight for and with. He knew his history would never be re-found, and that his parents, or even his, names will never be cleared, but he will at least have tried to make a change for the better, something that someone who never existed could never do.

Why can I always make sheets so quickly? I always have the least time from my "interested" post to my sheet.

Anyway, if there is anything I can do to make this better, please do tell me. Thank you.
 

The_Chief

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Name:Name: Ben Alverze
Age: 19
Power: Superior strength and fighting strategist.
Description:Ben is 5'10 with dark brown hair and hispanish skin color. you wouldnt be able to tell he is very strong, because he isnt very muscular looking. He dresses as he has since he left "home". His favorite sweatshirt, a pair of sweatpants, and a well broken in pair of skateshoes. You wouldnt be able to tell he was a fighter by meeting him either, unless you happen to be with him on one of his "bad" days.
Background: Ben grew up with a dead beat dad and an emotionally unstable mom. he was merely an average student with not very many friends.So he turned to the underground fighting scene. He has seen some of his dad's old collegian wrestling tapes from his grandfather, and it has always intrigured him. his first fight, he walked out on to the arena, and it felt squishy, yet hard. the second he saw his opponent, a 6'2 black kid who looked extremely muscular walked out with an entourage behind him. having a height advantange, Ben knew he'd have no upper hand staying on his feet, so he decided to take the kid to the ground. at that moment, he remembered his grandfathers tapes, and how he extended himself to take down his opponents. he shot for the legs and took the fight to the ground, and then proceeded to choke, punch, elbow, hammer, and eventually break the kid's arm. three of Spencer, his opponents, friends had to pull him off of him. since then, he's fought. one day, he was facing a 6'3 jacked white kid. he never cared much about his opponents backrounds, so he proceeded to pound the kid into the mat. as he was leaving the cellar in which the fights were being held, three suited men walked into the street light. they were his opponent's business manager, father, and "trainer". their collective prize had been injected with a new steriod that was supposed to be used for a new gen of super soliders. they didnt appreciate him defeating their experiment so easily. he scoffed it off and went home. there was no one. he figured his dad got lost on his way home and his mom decided to leave again. and he went to bed. the next morning he was awoken by a knock on the door. a police officer burst in with his pistol drawn. he wanted to know why he murdered a family down the street. in his suprise, he threw the police officer and ran. he ran and ran and ran. then he finally came back. gathered up a small bag, and left...

I do good yes?
 

Xero Scythe

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Warning:
this is massive. You have been warned.
Name: Damien Lier

Age: 17

Power: 'Wraith'- Damien is able to make his body intangible, allowing him to pass through most objects- or indeed, most objects passing through him. There is one deadly exception to this rule: passing through a biological object. When he does this, the unnatural makeup of his body at that moment causes whatever he passed through to freeze. At first, this would just feel like dunking your hand into ice water, but if he latches on, he can freeze a man's heart to make it stop beating. His power is named after the unearthly being that would latch onto humans and steal their heat until they froze to death. Damien finds it far easier to phase his arm or some other separate appendage rather than pass his whole body though objects. He also cannot carry anything when passing through objects.

Appearance: Standing at 6'4" with blonde hair and ice cold blue eyes that could freeze a man where he stands, Damien often is worthy of a double take. While most of the time he wears whatever he owns, he will always be wearing a necklace with a crescent moon hanging from it, usually underneath his clothes so it doesn't break. No-one should ever try to take it away from him. He also has a cross-shaped scar on the back of his right hand. His body has been toughened by nearly 8 years of abuse.

Backstory: "The moon knows all secrets and reveals none." This was Damien's mother, Cecelia's, favorite phrase. Born to two foolish teenagers, one of them a member of a rising gang, Damien's life was never easy. His mother always tried to protect him, but once his father, John, realized Damien's power, he abused it to the fullest, forcing Damien to rob a drug store or maybe a gas station. Whenever Damien said no, or failed, he was beaten. Because of Damien, the gang quickly became a local powerhouse. Damien robbed his first bank at the age of 13. Two years later, the night before she died, Damien's mother gave him the necklace he constantly wears.

The police had finally decided to take action against the now gargantuan gang. At 1:00 A.M., Damien's world came crashing down around him.

"This is the police! Give up, you're surrounded!"
Many gave up at that point, kneeling on the ground with their hands behind their heads.

...Then the police opened fire.

The kneelers stood no chance as the white hot metal scythed through them. The remaining gangsters grabbed whatever they had and began to fight back

Damien woke up to the sight of a gun pointed at his head. "G'night, kid." He heard the cop laugh as he clicked off the saftey. He heard his mother shriek as she jumped upon the man's back, pounding at him for everything she was worth and shouting a string of swears that would make even a sailor blush. Damien's father rushed in with a sledgehammer. Without breaking stride, he took a sideways skip towards the cop as his wife jumped off the man, diving to the side. John swung the sledgehammer like it was as light as a reed. The impact slammed the cop into the wall and left a massive crater. John grabbed Damien by the hand and ran out, Cecelia in tow.

 Whenever a cop jumped out of a random corridor, John would swing with all his strength, his hammer arcing through the air like Mjolnir, the almighty hammer of Thor. Just as they reached the secret exit, Damien's parents were gunned down from behind. John and Cecelia pushed Damien forward, saving his life. As the cop came to check for survivors, Damien leaped out of the wall and latched onto the policeman. The man stiffened and slowly turned around through the white fog of his mind to see Damien's hand passing through him, frost spreading from the point of contact as he fell down dead. Damien picked up his father's sledgehammer, thanked his parents and paid his final respects. Racing towards the open door, Damien ran for freedom.

For two years, Damien wandered the streets before finally joining the revolution. Damien saw it as the chance to destroy the corruption that destroyed his life and caused his to drown in misery. He would do anything to bring about the new world.
 

Xero Scythe

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CloggedDonkey said:
Name: Raymond Seals
Age: looks roughly thirty, but there are no records that state when, or even if, he was born.
Power: Ability to "blend in" with his surroundings, making so that someone can look right at him, or even bump in to him, and, for some strange reason, it is though he isn't seen. They would never even know he was there, that he ever even exists.
Description:
Background: Raymond was a normal citizen of The Republic of Seattle, living out his life with the ever present threat of death or kidnapping seeming like nothing to his small brain. He was just a boy then, of only thirteen years of age, when his father had a "falling out" of sorts with the Minister of Peace. After only about a year, if that, he and his parents where unpersoned. His parents, and almost him, weren't just killed, they never existed. There is not a single record anywhere in the world that states that they ever existed anywhere, with his grandmother dying a virgin and his grandfather dying in a war.

Every photograph of him was edited, every mention of his name a federal offense, even just seeing him could put the population at risk, so he fled. He fled with a group of refugees to Democratic Chicago, where he hoped to find a new life, but only found that, even here, he never existed, and that he was likely to die in poverty, with a history of crime at his back and a bleak future for the rest of humanity. Then he found that there was a resistance, that there was something to fight for and with. He knew his history would never be re-found, and that his parents, or even his, names will never be cleared, but he will at least have tried to make a change for the better, something that someone who never existed could never do.

Why can I always make sheets so quickly? I always have the least time from my "interested" post to my sheet.

Anyway, if there is anything I can do to make this better, please do tell me. Thank you.
Sorry for double post, but remember, an unperson is a noun. The verb is vaporized. Also, I'm hoping you're wrong. I do not wanna live in Oceania.

Also, what happened with all the wierd p's? Ah well, will fix in the morning.