Avatar: War of the Dragon - Chapter 1: Red Dragon Rising (Hiatus due to real life issues)

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King Kazma

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[HEADING=1]Avatar: War of the Dragon[/HEADING]

[HEADING=3]The world knew peace once. But with no Avatar to hold the balance in check. That peace has been shattered.[/HEADING]​

So this is the second RP I've ever run. I'm not a professional GM like some of the guys around here, but I'm trying. You've nothing to loose by joining, and I wish to become a better GM. But only if I can get this bird off the ground will I ever get the experience to do so.

Since this RP is treading on mostly unwritten ground theres only so much I can tell.

Twelve years ago, Avatar Roku departed this world as he attempted to stop a great volcano on his home island. His best friend, Fire Lord Sozin, left him to perish in the ash and destruction of the earths fury. And so the Avatar cycle continued to the next. Aang was born, the would be Avatar born of the Air Nomads. The Avatar who would be lost for a century in a sphere of ice. Unable to assist the world as the Fire Lord began his march against the world.

Aided by the comet. Sozin's Comet as it would be known to history. The Fire Nation carried out a near total genocide of the Air Nomads in a bid to capture or kill the Avatar. He failed in this endeavor though, it was but apart of his grand scheme of world domination. Not since Chin the Conqueror had one the means and drive to attempt to do so. The Earth Kingdom the Water Tribes, outraged at the cultural and slaughter of the Air Nomad peoples, declared war upon the Fire Nation. The might of the Fire Nation turned its attention towards them. They fell like a hammer on hot steel when they came to the Earth Kingdom. The commerce hub of Taku was wiped out, few survived the assault. The Firebenders overwhelmed the city within days. News of the invasion spread slowly due to the vast expanse of the Earth Kingdom. And presently it still travels to the capital. Troops are already marching west to help reinforce the defense of the territories closest to the Fire Nation, but it was far to late for one city. And they're still months away from some locations.

Not all the Airbenders died in the attacks upon the temples as thought though, many who were in the Earth Kingdom survived years after the atrocity. Though none lived long enough to bear any Airbending children, they fought in the early years of the war with bravery before Sozin's men tracked and cut them down.

The Fire Nation fleet continued to ferry soldiers farther south along the coast. Unsuspecting villages falling prey with little to no warning. Their iron ships the harbingers of war. Kozin, an average sized fishing town shall be next to see the coal smoke clashing with the blue sky. News of the war declaration have just reached this isolated place from the words of recent travelers.

And here is where we begin, Kozin. It has several wooded piers jutting into the sea, protected from the waves by a centuries old seawall made by Earthbenders. Sandy beaches to either side. A smattering of unplanned. But well-kept wooden and stone buildings. Fish mongers sell their catch and merchants peddle their wears in the market.The town is a fair distance from anywhere else on the coast, and often enough sea goers and weary foot travelers find their way to it for respite. The salt air does little to calm the nerves today.

Follow these, there here for a reason.

Well its rather standard fare how things work in this place, but its always good to write them down. These rules have been borrowed from Fappy with permission and small revisions. Who in turn based it off Counter's.

1) All participants should abide by the rules of the Escapist forums, wherever possible.

2) I would like to see a variety of characters in terms of ethnicity, sex, appearance and personality. Too many Earthbender males with similar mind-sets results in a rather dull role-play.
2a) Appearance and Personality should be more than just lists of appropriate traits. Expand them into paragraphs, with more detail than just the basics.

3) Anyone who submits a character must be willing to give their full commitment to the role-play. If you have to drop out, at the very least let everyone else know, so I can properly write you out of the story. No-one likes it when ten people are accepted into a role-play and only five are still actively posting a week later.

4) I expect all participants to have a high level of competency in regards to spelling, grammar and post length.
4a) Godmodders and/or god-moders will be removed from the RP upon repeated instances of the offence.

5) To ensure clarity among writers, I request that all participants follow these formatting guidelines when writing posts:
- Italics ([ /i]) for inner thoughts, or for emphasis;
- Bold ([ /b]) if you want to copy over something that someone else said, or for emphasis;
- Please use plain black text for your posts. If people constantly use coloured text for their speech it quite often becomes a jumbled mess, in my experience;
- All posts and character sheets should be written in third person, past tense, where applicable.
- If out-of-character comments must be made in the thread, please keep them within spoiler tags so as not to break the flow.

6) Get Skype! It's a great way to communicate with your fellow RPers. Once players have been accepted they will be invited to the RP's Skype group chat.

7) Romance is allowed between characters - I fully encourage romantic subplots - but if things do end up going too far, I think that it is best if mature content was taken to private messaging, should the involved parties wish to pursue it. The Escapist tries to remain PG-13 at all times, if I remember correctly. Yes, even in the role-playing forum.

8) In the event that player-versus-player (PvP) combat takes place, I expect all participants involved in PvP to discuss the situation at hand and work together to determine the outcome of the combat, rather than attempt to win at all cost, independent of the plans of the others. A lack of negotiation and compromise leads to PvP fighting degenerating into each side trying to one-up the other, or forcing the opposite side into taking an action against their will, and eventually both participants end up distrusting each other out-of-character.



Time for character development.

Alright, so a few things to say about creating your character creation and some other stuff.

First bit being that I'm looking for a least five other people, one to cover each element and one non bender (Excluding myself). But I'm willing to go up to seven others if I get some good character sheets.

Theres few limits to who you can be. I don't want to stifle your creativity with many limits here. If you want to be a bending master you can go ahead and try, I'll be choosing people by the quality of the character and availability, by secret court rules of course. But that shouldn't stop you from trying, just write a good character. I guess the only true limit is you have to be against the fire nation.

So with that done, you can begin to write up your character. Be who you want to, but make it believable.

Name: Your no Wang Fire, but maybe you can come up with something close.

Age: 16 and up.

Sex:

Nation: Choosing your nation will determine a lot about you, your bending style, clothing (Maybe) and backstory. You should know the four nations and maybe brush up on the Avatar world history while your at it.

Bending Discipline: Water, Earth, Fire, Air. If you've no bending, state so here.

Appearance: What does your character look like, their clothing, any weaponry. Flesh this out if you'd like. The more you tell, the better the picture we see of you.

Nature: Who are you as a person?

Backstory: Tell us of your past. Regale how it moulded you to be the man or woman you are today. Speak of your past accomplishments, failings or anything else of interest. And lastly your reason for being in the little town of Kozin.

Equipment: Surely you're carrying around things you may need for traveling. A bedroll, tent, cooking utensils. Anything else special you own goes here too.

Extra Notes: Anything else you'd like to say or add in.

Name: Mieko Ruzhang

Age: 20

Sex: Female

Nation: Fire Nation

Bending Discipline: Fire Bender

Appearance: A shorter women standing five foot six. Light red eyes and black hair braided into a pony tail that reaches to the back of her knees. Often wears black makeup around her eyes. Sort of like how the Kyoshi Warriors wear red makeup around theirs. She's naturally thin eyebrows and a slender nose, her cheekbones are high. Her lips are also black from lipstick. Her body is, lithe. Kept so by all the traveling she's been doing.
Her clothing options are rather limited while she's on the road. Not that she doesn't have anything nice to wear though. Mieko has a pair of traveling cloths she usually wears. They're Earth Kingdom make. Green and yellows. The shirt is a robe style, tied up with a cloth as well as buttons. The pants are nothing of interest to speak of. She still has the same boots from when she began her travels, rather ornate Fire Nation knee high style boots. They've held up better than the rest of her equipment, testament to their quality. Her second set of clothing is a more, by comparison. High class set of Fire nation clothing. The a kimono like piece of apparel, red with golden trim. A black embroidered dragon is on the back. She picked it up from a dealer in Ba Sing Se, got a good deal on it to since the dealer wanted it off his hands. Fire Nation clothing doesn't sell to well in other lands.

Nature: Strong willed, proud and undisciplined. She is a rebellious rose that is blossoming into a women. Her nature clashes against the culture of the pre-war Fire Nation. In secret apart from her outward perception she is fragile from the years of ill acceptance from most others for the way she acts. Many nights she has cried herself to sleep. These conflicting forces feed off each other, slowly driving her to isolation and depression and exacerbating the aggressive nature she has. Humans are creatures of change though, and few ever fail to yield to it.

Backstory: Zara was raised in a small village in the south east of the Fire Nation's largest island, and was both the youngest and only girl in her large family full of bustling brothers. Her parents had been desperate for a little girl for a long time so they were overjoyed at her birth. At the discovery of her bending talents however, they were over the moon. In the 100-person-only small village she was the only female firebender. Because of both these facts Zara was spoilt lavishly by her parents, and always received more attention than her brothers. This turned them aggressively jealous of her, and she was often picked on, teased and left out. Amongst all the children of the village she gained a reputation as a freak and was out-casted and ignored. She became fiercely independent as a factor of this. Left mostly to her own devices she spent her time practising the three things she loved most, her bending, music and playing Pai Sho with an old man named Qim, who unlike most of the other villagers, admired her firebrand style. Qim taught her to play the game one day when her mother was in town chatting with other women in a friends home. He was outside on the veranda doing whatever old guys do, and asked as she walked by if she'd like to learn the game. This formed a lasting relationship until Qim's death, she played a few matches once a week with him. It was a blow and a half to lose such a good friend when she had so few.

"See the world and be enlightened". Something the old man said weeks before his passing.

Six months past her eighteenth birthday, she left home with her parents blessing to follow Qim's words. She never told her parents it was that reason she wanted to go, but with what she had told them was good enough. Dad cried to see her little flower-blossom go. It was funny, sad, embarrassing all at the same time, just like him. While mother was near the same, she kept composure 10 fold better than her father, but it was still emotional.

Mieko saw some of the Fire Nation, she'd never been to far from her home town in all her life so it was interesting and hassling. Remembering the old mans words, she sailed across the ocean to the Earth Kingdom. A county as vast as an ocean. Here she continued on to explore the world, Ba Sing Se was her initial goal to reach. She funded her trip by doing odd jobs for villages or entertaining folks with her fire skills as she past through on the way, and gambling in Pai Sho. It was by no means a gold paved path. She was nearly in rags by the time she reached the great walled city, but with hard work and luck she afforded new clothes and stayed some time there, absorbing the culture and knowledge others afforded on her. She eventually left the city for new destinations, the last of which so far has brought her to a small fishing town of Kozin.

Equipment: A small pack to carry what she needs with a bedroll on top, in is is some food and cutlery. A tarp and small rope. Extra set of clothing. A skillet hangs off the back. She also has her flute and a bag of Pai Sho pieces, both very sentimental items for her.

For the lazy who should put more effort in to this.

Its the start of the 100 year long war you may have heard about in the show, Avatar: The Last Airbender. We're a group of benders of all nations that oppose the war. Cause war is bad. So we're gona be fighting them fire flinging villains as they roflstomp through the country side, cause we know how the war turned out. But we're gona do a heap o' damage'y hurt on them. The grandest of adventures as we galavant across the world shall be had. Thats about the gist of it

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We seek to bring retribution for the Fire Nation's deeds. Join the cause.​
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Justice must be brought.​
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JaceArveduin

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Not a single post in here today huh? I'll get a sheet scrabbled together in the near future and put it in, just gotta think of what I want first.

[edit] Well, here's something.
Name: Skardryt (open for change, I'm no good with names, and this one probably fits a norse universe better)

Age: 45

Sex: male

Nation: Earth Kingdom

Bending Discipline: non-bender

Appearance: A man who's starting to get on in years, his beard and hair are salt n pepper in color, and while it's cut, it's not especially well done. Craggy brows hover above his dark eyes on his weathered face. Of short stature with a wiry build, he generally wears dull brown clothes styled like that of the Water Tribes, with a hooded weathered cloak that's true color is a mystery, as it's mottled grey and green. His boots are made of soft leather, worn, but still quite serviceable. The three things most people probably notice, however, is the quiver of grey-fletched arrows across his back, the longbow shouldered beside it, and the peculiar double knife-scabbard on his left hip.


Nature: Stubborn and gruff, though not exactly emphatic, this mixture causes many of his encounters to end in some sort of conflict, whether verbal or physical. He's also slightly claustrophobic when it comes to people, only entering large towns when absolutely necessary, and smaller ones only when he's in need of a service he can't do himself. Once you've earned his friendship, he's completely loyal, though earning said friendship can be difficult.

Backstory: Born to a woodsman and his wife, Skardryt learned to live off the land from an early age, and to have a healthy mistrust of strangers. They never lived wealthy, and he gained many traits from his father, like a mistrust of the wealthy, anyone in a position of authority, and outsiders in general. After moving away from home, he came across a man named Jace, whom he befriended against the teachings of his father. After travelling together for awhile, he learned that Jace was a fair and trustworthy man. Eventually, curiosity of the other's choice of weaponry caused them to start teaching each other various skills, including the wielding of a pair of knives, Jace's favored weapons, and using a longbow, Skardryt's preferred weapon. Eventually, Jace said farewell, heading towards Ba Sing Se to visit his family. Not wanting anything to do with the city, Skardryt and said his good-byes and continued wandering, selling furs and occasionally cashing in on the bounties placed on the odd bandit to sustain himself, along with buying his own set of knives. Bounty hunting, he found, wasn't too hard for a man of his skill set, years of stalking prey had enabled him to move silently and secretly across the land. Many years, and minor adventures later, he stopped over at Kozin to resupply on arrows, or at least talk the town smith into forging some arrow-heads.

Equipment: His longbow and quiver, a sax knife and a throwing knife set atop each other in a scabbard, and a waterskin. He also has a small backpack under his cloak that contains a small sheet, a blanket, a piece of flint, a special pot with leather sides, and miscelaneous food items, generally some jerky, herbs and spices to make jerky or soup with.

Extra Notes: He's actually a decent cook, and on the rare occasions he goes to town, likes to get a stout drink and a hot meal that he didn't have to cook.
 

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Name: kaozon Oighear

Age: 24

Sex: male

Nation: southern water tribe.

Bending Discipline: Water bending

Appearance: A tall and thin man he stands just over 6 foot and weighs not much more than 120 pounds. His hair is short and cut close to his head, black and spiky. Striking blue eyes stare over a thin long nose, this itself over a mouth that likes to smile and shows it by doing so often. His arm are thin and long but he is surprisingly strong, is arms looking like they have the steel cable the fire nation uses on their ships under the skin. His torso has several scars from tigerseals and the claw marks from a polar bear dog on his back across his lower back. The rest of his chest and back and arm tan to a deep color from the years spent in the sun.
When in the southern water tribe he wore the normal clothes of a water bender, blue parka with white fur trim and blue thick pants with thigh high boots laced up tight. After coming farther north he changed those for dark blue pants that were thinner than the others before, keeping the boots on. The weather so warm in these lands that he doesn?t bother with a shirt or jacket.

Nature: Calm and hard to anger he has a temper much like a summer storm when finally pushed over the edge. After so many years of traveling alone he is quiet and act out what he feels needs done. Rarely panicking when something goes wrong he jumps into action if needed and other times righting a wrong that he or someone else has done.

Backstory: growing up in a family of non benders he found out he was when he was just 7 years old, playing with the water round his home and getting caught. Taken to the classes for benders he learned steadily for several years there under the teaching of master bender Pia. Kaozon spent those years either in his home, the bending school or outside in the wild running up and down the ice banks. When he was old enough he went ice dodging with several of the other benders in the classes ahead of him and on the third try they succeeded and kaozon got the Mark of the Trusted.

After getting out of the classes for benders he went out and roamed the ice banks far and wide, the real application of his bending making it easier to use and learn, keeping him out of trouble and sometimes getting him into it with some animals out there in the wild. He still went back home at night and started going to bending master Pia for advice about new ways to use his bending. Having to enter the warrior training with everyone else he found that using a bone and hide buckler or a spear as a focus he could bend ice around it and make more things easier. Hunting far and wide for the tribe he encountered animals that were easy kills and some that gave him scars to remind him of the leasons he learned out on the ice fields.

When he was in his 20 th year he started going farther and farther, never really understanding the desires raising up from his feet to his heart. One day when he went to see master Pia for advice master Pia could see it in his eyes, wander lust. Taking him apart he explained that what he was feeling was the desire to see new and different things than what he has grown up around. Hearing this Kaozon stayed around his tribe for a week before telling his family and master Pia that he had decided that he wanted to explore and see more of this world than he would here in the southern water tribe. Hearing this fro their youngest boy his parents didn?t want him to go but had no way to make him stay, Pia taking It much better having been expecting it since he told Kaozon that he should.

Taking a boat to the continent he got a water tribe friendly crafts men to make him some clothes more suited to this warmer place than the thick clothes he had on. Keeping the shirt and pants he was given he soon found that even that was more than he could handle, going down to just pants as he started walking along the coast and making his way from fishing town to fishing town, surfing and walking his way up to each. Taking jobs at each to have some money for small things he mostly ate the new types of fish he found on his surfing, spearing them and baking them when he stopped. At each fishing town he would stop to ask them about the different plants and animals around, along with the conditions farther north. Several times he had to sit out a storm in an ice igloo that he would have to continually have to remake because even in storms the weather was much to warm to keep ice for long. Meditating every day before he slept he became centered and calm, new ways to bend and old memories of his home keeping him from regretting leaving.

After 4 years of travel and seeing many many things that he would have never seen in the southern water tribe he came upon Kozin and has decided to stop for now and rest after a long time of walking.

Equipment: waterproof tigerseal backpack. Inside is a blanket and a waterproof tarp, as well as a small knife and a pouch with spices and flint&steel. On the outside of the pack is a fastened iron pan with the other side having straps to hold a small hide and bone made buckler and a spear. Tightly wrapped blue parka and pants and light weight blue shirt.


Comments and critiques please.
This is my sheet and i hope it is up to snuff.
 

King Kazma

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booksv2 you need to get in on your own merits. I'm not going to offer any advice on how to create a character. Look at yours and decide if you think its good enough. Its on your end that matters how it is. I'm only going to judge when I close submissions.
 

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mk. I understand that. Ill leave it as is and we will see how everything goes.

This looks like an interesting role play. My family loved that show so iv seen just about all of it, and heard it over and over and over.
 

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Name: Zubaz, "The Storm"

Age: 40

Sex: Male

Nation: Allegiance to himself, Fire Nation

Bending Discipline: Fire-Bending, Lightning-Bending

Appearance: Tall, more muscular than your average Earthbender, and fair skinned like a typical Fire Nation citizen, he certainly looks intimidating. He has a gruff face, not yet showing much sign of his age, usually seen frowning and covered by his bushy blonde beard and lightning tattoo over both his striking blue eyes. His hair is the same color as his beard, naturally, and worn short and messy.
He doesn't really wear a shirt, he has a tendency to either rip through them or burn them, so instead he wears a leather harness, to carry his meager belongings and show off his abs and chest hair. His bottom half is covered in what looks to be old gray breeches and knee high boots, perhaps part of a fire nation uniform, though the soles of the boots are burned out and his pants covered in soot. He has two studded leather bracers, for SMACKING.

Nature: Loud, boisterous, prone to speaking in the third person. His fighting style is kindly described as reckless, and he doesn't seem to have much going on upstairs. His favorite things are punching and swearing.

Backstory: The Baz was born in the fire nation, raised in the fire nation by a pair of peasants (who were actually brother and sister, though The Baz has no idea), figured out he was a fire bender after setting his uncle's shop on fire, and joined the Military to escape the horribly boring life he was living. He had relatively few friends, no one really wanted to put up with his personality, but he never really thought about it. He trained often, harder than other soldiers in a style one of his ancestors was vaguely famous for. Some say obsessive, he says "Piss off, I'm training." Perhaps this is why he hadn't seen enough propaganda to feel entirely loyal...

One of his first assignments was to help in the destruction of an Air nomad temple, and he mostly stuck in the back. He only saw a bit of action, an old man trying to escape on his weird glide-y thing. He followed after him, using his jet propulsion technique he was so fond of, and hit him with enough lightning to set his beard on fire. He never really got over it, and simply took off, an assumed casualty in the battle.

He did a lot of wandering. Perhaps too much wandering, he basically jetted around or took boats, stopping only when tired. He ended up in the north pole after a time, got drunk and woke up with his tattoo's, a lot of booze, and a suspicious amount of money, out in the middle of nowhere. He doesn't remember much else about the place, except that it was cold and that he may or may not have pissed off someone important. More wandering brought him to Kozin, and here he is.

Equipment: Only the barest necessities, a tent, bedroll, and an entire keg of ale. He also carries a surprising amount of money on him, though he has no idea where it came from.

Extra Notes: His skills aren't particularly well known, but he is a master level fire bender, and extremely proficient in his ability with lightning. Though technically a deserter, try finding anyone who could honestly remember his name, or his face now that it's mostly covered. He's also not very bright, though he has a decent enough moral code, that allows murder but no one is perfect.
 

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Name: Jack

Age: 12

Nation: the ancient republic of gold farmers

Discipline: cabbage vending

Appearence: Jack is an 8 feet tall panda bear man and wears a pointy chinese hat. he is really big because he eats lots especially cabbages. his shirt is silk and black with white edges to match his fur. he doesnt have pants because hes a panda bear man and panda bear men dont wear pants just shirts. he also has a large bamboo stick for hitting people with just in case he cant vend cabbages at them.

Nature: Jack likes nature lots because hes a panda bear man and also likes cabbages which come from nature. he is funny and smart and is one of the best fighters because he knows cabbage vending and makes lots of money because of it. Jack is a nice panda bear man and likes making lots of friends. he is always smiling unless hes not because someone made him mad.

Backstory: Jack is a panda bear man from the ancient republic of gold farmers. he was born being the smartest panda bear kid in his entire city and learned to cabbage vend when he was eight to help his sick sister. he trained really hard and became an awesome cabbage vendor and really good at fighting with his bamboo stick too. Jack left his home city because he needed to go make gold to help get medicine for his sick sister so that she wouldnt die. he went lots of places like ba sing se and fire island and republic city where everyone bought all his cabbages so he could buy medicine. all his golds were back home to his sick sister that he learned vending to help because shes sick and dying. now hes in kozin because hes still trying to get golds to buy medicine and no one else wants to buy his cabbages anywhere else because they already got lots of them from him.

Equipment: Jack only has his shirt his pointy chinese hat his bamboo stick and his cabbages. he has some gold too just in case and some medicine.

please look at my sheet and tell me if i need to fix anything cause i really want to play thanks
 

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Pappytech said:
Oooooooh, yes. This sounds awesome.

Took me a while, but I finally got a sheet thrown together:

Names: Matias and Javier Rojas

Ages: 29 and 26, respectively

Gender: Male

Appearances: At first glance, it's readily apparent that the two men are brothers. Their heights and general builds are all but identical: They both stand at 5' 10", have tough and well developed bodies, and weigh about 180 lbs. Even their hair is similar; they both wear their brown hair in closely maintained crewcuts, though Javier's is a shade or two lighter than his sibling's.

However, once you get past their general shapes, it's possible to note several differences between them. Matias, for instance, has hazel eyes that almost perfectly match his hair, typically dresses in nice, if not quite formal, clothing, and rarely bothers to change his passive, neutral expression. He also wears a golden ring on his left ring finger.

Javier, in sharp contrast, has bright, emerald eyes that constantly glitter with life and energy. His choice in clothing is much less uptight than his brother, and he typically wears athletic clothing no matter where he is. A series of tribal tattoos run up his forearms, and a few scars are easily visible as well. Finally, his face is constantly smiling, the expression almost infectious.

Personalities: As the older brother, Matias carries himself with a bit more grace and class than Javier. Though he's friendly enough, his tone is almost constantly business-like, with only the slightest hint of emotion giving it life. He is not prone to making close friends, actively keeping most of his relationships from advancing beyond acquaintances. To those that he is close to, however, particularly his brother and wife, Matias is ferociously loyal, and will do everything within his power to help.

Javier, on the other hand, is much more emotional than his brother. Though his mood is typically a happy, friendly one, it isn't difficult to push him into a darker mood, and he'll jump to anger in an instant if he thinks he's been slighted. This means that while he has many more friends than Matias, he also has that many more enemies as well. However, he does share his brother's sense of loyalty, and will freely help anybody he can.

When pushed into battle, however, the two brothers shift mindsets until they're frighteningly alike. Matias fully displays all of his hidden aggression and strength, while Javier calms himself until he's in a state of tranquil action. Working as one entity with two bodies, the brothers will try and deduce the quickest, most expedient method to take down their opponent with, and will then pull it off without a second thought. It does not matter how brutal or costly the attack will be; if it will bring down their target, then they will use it.

Backstory: Born in 1989 and 1992, respectively, Matias and Javier grew up in Santiago, Chile. Though not wealthy by any stretch of the imagination, the boys' parents brought in enough income to get by. However, this didn't stop the boys, mainly Javier, from getting involved in the rougher parts of the city all through their middle and high school years. They never officially joined a gang, but Javier had quite a few friends in the underground, and oftentimes got himself involved in some of their more... "physical" disagreements with other organizations. Matias, though he didn't approve of such behavior, was unwilling to let his brother get himself killed, and when he realized that it was impossible to keep Javier from fighting he reluctantly joined in.

The two brothers managed to find steady jobs upon graduating high school, and for a while it looked like their lives would be perfectly ordinary. Then, K-Day happened.

Like so many others, Matias and Javier could only watch helplessly as the Trespasser tore San Francisco to shreds. And again and again as more and more Kaiju began to pour forth from the Breach. Unlike so many others, however, they resolved to stop feeling so helpless.

When the Jaeger program began actively recruiting potential pilots, the brothers were among the first to apply. Naturally, they were subjected to a seemingly unending series of tests and medical exams, testing to see if they had what it took to pilot one of humanity's last hopes. Luckily, they did.

Now, assigned to the Mark-2 Diablo Intercept, Matias and Javier stand on the front lines, ready to protect mankind from the forces of the Kaiju...

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Jaeger Designation: Diablo Intercept

Year of Production: Mark-2, 2016

Height and Weight: 83 m, 2,175 tons

Appearance: With a red, white, and blue color scheme, Diablo Intercept is modelled after a body-builder. Its body and limbs are simply massive, as though it was built to simply wrestle with Kaiju, and while its joints are a little on the slow and sticky side, its strength is truly prodigious. Diablo doesn't have much of a head, however; its conn-pod just barely sticks out of its torso, reaching just a meter or two above its shoulders. Its twin cannons are normally collapsed and stored on its back, but when fully extended they bend forward to rest on Diablo's shoulders.

Weapons: Diablo is armed with twin, 2000 caliber cannons, each of which fire shells taller than most men. Though they take a while to get set up and to reload, these guns can deliver one hell of a kick, and are accurate to nearly half a kilometer away.

For close range combat, the Jaeger is armed with wrist-mounted flamethrowers that shoot out a plume of napalm and other substances. These flames will burn forever if they are left unchecked, and are extremely resistant to water thanks to their chemical makeup. In addition, Diablo's knees and fists are tipped with series of brutally sharp spikes, meant to tear in and out of a Kaiju's flesh with extreme prejudice.

Right, there we go then. Any comments or criticisms would be appreciated, of course; haven't been on the board in a while and I want to know what I'm doing wrong.
Lol, hate to break it to ya, but I think ya got the wrong RP
 

booksv2

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@Pappytech that sounds like it is for sanctuary. maybe check the name of the role play you are posting to twice before posting?

@HellsingerAngel is that a serious sheet?
 

King Kazma

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Ruedyn said:
booksv2 said:
@HellsingerAngel is that a serious sheet?
A tad condescending. I personally support our panda overlords.
Damn cabbage vendors thinking they can waltz in like they own the place. Its just not right.

HellsingerAngel said:
I'm going to have to ask you to stop being silly. The ministry of silliness does not tolerate unlicensed silly makers. I have informed the proper authorities (Myself) to further investigate the matter.

I advise anyone else who wishes to make a character here to be serious of the matter. I'd actually like to have this thing running. And jokes while thoroughly laughed about doesn't help that goal.
 

Pappytech

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JaceArveduin said:
Lol, hate to break it to ya, but I think ya got the wrong RP
I... Wow. Okay, wow, this is weird. How the hell did I manage this? This isn't even the right site, for Christ's sake...

...I feel very, very silly. Thanks for pointing this out.
 

JaceArveduin

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Pappytech said:
JaceArveduin said:
Lol, hate to break it to ya, but I think ya got the wrong RP
I... Wow. Okay, wow, this is weird. How the hell did I manage this? This isn't even the right site, for Christ's sake...

...I feel very, very silly. Thanks for pointing this out.
lol, no problem, happens to the best of us
 

booksv2

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i was wondering what happened to this role play? did it die or did something else happen.