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::Opening Preamble Bits::
Going to begin by apologizing if the title is a bit too "click-bait"; it's the most succinct one I could think of for the topic at hand.

My last couple of questions have been in the Wild West Forums, but it was suggested on the last one that it would have gotten more traffic/discussion if it were in a more general/public location. As such, I will continue to say that I don't care what you have to say, how you say it, as long as it contributes in some way to the topic at hand.

I don't believe anyone here knows me, as I'm not a frequent poster. I typically try to only chime in when I feel I can contribute to the conversation, rather than to perpetuate an argument (though I've occasionally posted snarky comments). I'm a would-be writer, with an interest in science fiction, mystery, and horror. My personal inspirations come from the late Victorian to late Pulp writers mostly, including Spillane, Doyle, Wells, and others.

I'm currently coming here to get a feel of how people outside of my immediate circle think. What I come here for is diversity, in the end. The only diversity that matters, in my opinion: diversity of perspective and experience.

::The Actual Point::
There's a lot of talk about representation in fiction, from comic books to movies to games. Has been for a while, really. I don't disagree with any of the points generally made, but I've seen a troubling trend for some time now, and I want to talk about how it applies in fiction, and what the mind you all are on it.

Should diverse characters be showcased, and given special notice and fanfare, or should they be treated as any other character inhabiting the world?

To explain myself further: what are "gay", "african", "white", "woman", or "pansexual" as character traits? Should they define a character, or develop them? And I'm talking in general; I know that a story can be written that the point of the story is to explore a character's sexuality or race, and therefore become defining. But in media where that's not the case, should it be?

To elucidate, I've become more obsessed with pulp era detective stories as of late, and been devouring them with what time I have available to read. As such, I have an example of what I mean. Two novels of that era I read recently I finished and began talking with my wife about how hard it would be to get someone to publish them in this day and age.

As such, I'd like to discuss some plot details from two novels: Max Allan Collins' Quarry and Raymond Chandler's The Big Sleep.

In Quarry, the main (and titular) character is a hitman who ends up on a job in a small town with Boyd, his lookout and recon guy. Boyd is gay, and this is mentioned as off-handedly as possible as a book written in 1976 about a combat vet turned hitman can likely do. It's mentioned at the time to describe the character, but also used as a way to let you know how close the two have become in the years they've worked together off and on, that Boyd has shared that with him. They're as much friends as Quarry gets, and when his friend is murdered (and the money from the job stolen), he works over the town trying to find the answers.

The answers come in the fact that Boyd was having sex with a local man, who killed him and stole the money. Something Quarry doesn't figure out until very near the end because he (and the reader) are expecting a larger conspiracy at work, and ultimately it comes down to human fallibility and problems of the heart.

In the Big Sleep, Philip Marlowe gets involved in no small amount of intrigue as he unravels a series of mysteries that deal with infidelity, city corruption, a pornography ring, and mental illness. One character central to the story early on is a pornographer, who invites young women to his home and gets them drugged up before posing them for a hidden camera, and its heavily implied having sex with them. While searching his home, Marlowe finds a hidden room that's obviously been lived in. This turns out to be the male lover of the pornographer, who ends up being one of the people implicated in another death in the story.

Fun passage that a modern editor would cringe at:
"I still had the automatic more or less pointed at him, but he swung on me just the same. It caught me flush on the chin. I backstepped fast enough to keep from falling, but I took plenty of the punch. It was meant to be a hard one, but a pansy has no iron in his bones, whatever he looks like."

In both of these stories, the characters being gay had an impact on the story, but neither character was treated simply as a "gay" character. They also had flaws, and made missteps, much like the protagonists in both stories. They were written as characters first, and gay was simply a detail of them.

On the contrast of this, I have an anecdote that fits.

My friend is a film student, and an actor. Through his school, he's worked or auditioned for several projects, and got one that was kind of an LGBT take on the X-Files; they shot a pilot movie with an intention to get backers to turn it into a long run show. This is last year, but as of right now its only been shown in a few film festivals.

My friend got a bare bones synopsis of his character, and the script (same as anyone else). His character was in a relationship with another man, who was abducted in the opening; the main bulk of the story would take place 4 years later. In the main story, he's with a new man, as well as being part of the X-Files like organization. Both he and the actor portraying his new love interest felt their characters seemed thin, so they worked together to dot the i's and cross the t's of the backgrounds to make the characters feel more real. When they approached the director with their notes, they were told to play it as written and not meddle with it (the director was also the writer and producer).

In several scenes, my friend's only direction was "act more gay". Now, my friend is gay, so this irritated him a bit. Chiefly in the relationship scenes, the director would only call it a good shot if both actors acted as campy as possible.

This is an example of what I mean when I say "gay" as a defining character trait. The story is about aliens and a conspiracy about what's really going on, but the characters being gay (comically so, having seen the finished cut) is more important than being characters with realistic motivations.

::The TL;DR Part::
If you can't be fucked to climb the text mountain above (and honestly, I can't blame you), here's what I want to know in a nutshell:

* Is it more important that diverse characters be characters, or representative?

* Should diverse characters be treated specially, and made more important, or should they be treated like any other character?

::Extra Bit::
Mainly started thinking about this recently as I've been looking at doing a kind of pulp story myself, in a different setting. However, the themes of the novels that hook me are decadence and degeneracy among the wealthy, and corruption among the powerful. I'm going to be doing another thread looking at exploitation because of this, but mainly it got me thinking again about what kinds of characters can be good, or bad, or victims in the long run of the story.

::You're still here?::
Thanks for taking the time to read and/or respond, and for keeping any personal attacks aimed at me. I'd prefer if people kept their politics out of the discussion, by which I mean please debate the topic, and not each other.
 

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Is it more important that diverse characters be characters, or representative?

Should diverse characters be treated specially, and made more important, or should they be treated like any other character?
Sounds like you are asking if characters should be tokens or actual characters there.

Or possibly, if being a minority should be an important part of the story, in which case I'd say that depends on what story you are trying to tell.
 

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There will always be token versions of every human in fiction as we know it, no matter what you do, because, shock horror...there are a lot of lazy writers out there who still make a lot of money and get a lot of work. White, black, Asian, straight, LGBTQ, bear, cosmic horror...you can't police lazy writing, only critise it fairly when it is published.

However, there still remains quite a bit of stigma with many types of minority that more representation would do well to ease. Just look at how dangerous people can become when they suppress things they are ashamed of. The point of normalising or trying to is about giving enough positive role models to those who may be ashamed of who they are and what others may think. Fiction has a lot of power in how we can view ourselves, even change for the better or worse. Trying to buck trends is a starting point to speaking beneath people's personal shields so they can feel less isolated or marginalised.
 

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Thaluikhain said:
Is it more important that diverse characters be characters, or representative?

Should diverse characters be treated specially, and made more important, or should they be treated like any other character?
Sounds like you are asking if characters should be tokens or actual characters there.

Or possibly, if being a minority should be an important part of the story, in which case I'd say that depends on what story you are trying to tell.
Totally seconded. I feel it really depends on your stories.

For example, your first outline (Quarry) sounds great to me, especially if the misdirect is 'far-reaching implications' but can easily just be missed elements/misinterpretations in a more mundane, yet emotional twist.
 

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Thaluikhain said:
Sounds like you are asking if characters should be tokens or actual characters there.

Or possibly, if being a minority should be an important part of the story, in which case I'd say that depends on what story you are trying to tell.
To an extent, yes. This is the crux of why I'm here asking, as I see several examples in fiction right now where "tokens" are being defended as "characters" because they are "diverse". I have my own opinions, and talk about this regularly with my friends and collaborators, but I want to start stepping outside of my small circle to make sure we aren't just echoing back and forth (and because I'm paranoid that people who care about me would tell me what they think I want to hear to make me feel better).

Xsjadoblayde said:
There will always be token versions of every human in fiction as we know it, no matter what you do, because, shock horror...there are a lot of lazy writers out there who still make a lot of money and get a lot of work. White, black, Asian, straight, LGBTQ, bear, cosmic horror...you can't police lazy writing, only critise it fairly when it is published.
Agreed, and while I am critical of it, I'm more asking as someone intending to produce the work rather than as a critic of it. To get a gauge on what others think to make sure I'm not becoming too ideologically rigid or unnecessarily insensitive as I grow older and more insular.

Xsjadoblayde said:
However, there still remains quite a bit of stigma with many types of minority that more representation would do well to ease. Just look at how dangerous people can become when they suppress things they are ashamed of. The point of normalizing or trying to is about giving enough positive role models to those who may be ashamed of who they are and what others may think. Fiction has a lot of power in how we can view ourselves, even change for the better or worse. Trying to buck trends is a starting point to speaking beneath people's personal shields so they can feel less isolated or marginalised.
I don't disagree with you here either. My personal thoughts on the matter is that treating them like living characters in the world, rather than being concerned with people's delicate sensibilities will go much more towards normalization. The alternative is to make them unrealistic, hard to empathize with, and more like trophies or symbols rather than characters.

inu-kun said:
I can't understand why on god's green earth should a person write a character as a representative and not as a character. I mean:
1) It's racist/sexist/transphobic/X-ist to treat a part of a character to be more defining of it then things like personality, hobbies etc. It's looking at the character as if it's an exhibition in a zoo rather than a "human".
2) It's bad writing, that character being a representative will not fit the world but rather the writer's idea of how that type of person "should" act and it will undoubtably be noticed.
3) It poisons the well, since those characters are living tropes it makes people pre emptively judge similiar characters without giving them a chance since they get used to the trope.

In the end the entire point of diversity (at least that should be the point) isn't making some minority an "ubermensch" but show it is a human like any of us with pros and cons and thus make us easier to relate to it and by extension similar people. I'll give an example of Tokyo Godfathers as a great way to make minority characters as characters.
I agree with almost everything here as well (with the exception of Tokyo Godfathers, because I've not seen it).

Chiefly, my concern stems from trends I've seen in other media where characters who are lazily written or outright designed to be tokens are cheered and defended for being diverse characters. I've had this increasing fear of, as I grow older, sinking into the "kids are wrong" mindset and further armoring my opinions by not seeking ones outside my peers.
 

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kitsunefather said:
Thaluikhain said:
Sounds like you are asking if characters should be tokens or actual characters there.

Or possibly, if being a minority should be an important part of the story, in which case I'd say that depends on what story you are trying to tell.
To an extent, yes. This is the crux of why I'm here asking, as I see several examples in fiction right now where "tokens" are being defended as "characters" because they are "diverse". I have my own opinions, and talk about this regularly with my friends and collaborators, but I want to start stepping outside of my small circle to make sure we aren't just echoing back and forth (and because I'm paranoid that people who care about me would tell me what they think I want to hear to make me feel better).

Xsjadoblayde said:
There will always be token versions of every human in fiction as we know it, no matter what you do, because, shock horror...there are a lot of lazy writers out there who still make a lot of money and get a lot of work. White, black, Asian, straight, LGBTQ, bear, cosmic horror...you can't police lazy writing, only critise it fairly when it is published.
Agreed, and while I am critical of it, I'm more asking as someone intending to produce the work rather than as a critic of it. To get a gauge on what others think to make sure I'm not becoming too ideologically rigid or unnecessarily insensitive as I grow older and more insular.

Xsjadoblayde said:
However, there still remains quite a bit of stigma with many types of minority that more representation would do well to ease. Just look at how dangerous people can become when they suppress things they are ashamed of. The point of normalizing or trying to is about giving enough positive role models to those who may be ashamed of who they are and what others may think. Fiction has a lot of power in how we can view ourselves, even change for the better or worse. Trying to buck trends is a starting point to speaking beneath people's personal shields so they can feel less isolated or marginalised.
I don't disagree with you here either. My personal thoughts on the matter is that treating them like living characters in the world, rather than being concerned with people's delicate sensibilities will go much more towards normalization. The alternative is to make them unrealistic, hard to empathize with, and more like trophies or symbols rather than characters.

inu-kun said:
I can't understand why on god's green earth should a person write a character as a representative and not as a character. I mean:
1) It's racist/sexist/transphobic/X-ist to treat a part of a character to be more defining of it then things like personality, hobbies etc. It's looking at the character as if it's an exhibition in a zoo rather than a "human".
2) It's bad writing, that character being a representative will not fit the world but rather the writer's idea of how that type of person "should" act and it will undoubtably be noticed.
3) It poisons the well, since those characters are living tropes it makes people pre emptively judge similiar characters without giving them a chance since they get used to the trope.

In the end the entire point of diversity (at least that should be the point) isn't making some minority an "ubermensch" but show it is a human like any of us with pros and cons and thus make us easier to relate to it and by extension similar people. I'll give an example of Tokyo Godfathers as a great way to make minority characters as characters.
I agree with almost everything here as well (with the exception of Tokyo Godfathers, because I've not seen it).

Chiefly, my concern stems from trends I've seen in other media where characters who are lazily written or outright designed to be tokens are cheered and defended for being diverse characters. I've had this increasing fear of, as I grow older, sinking into the "kids are wrong" mindset and further armoring my opinions by not seeking ones outside my peers.
This is kind of hard to argue for or against without specific examples. Gay characters are still pretty rare so people are more likely to celebrate them even if they are a little sterorypical or token-y.
But I don't see the problem generally with someone going "I want this character to be gay" and just making them gay. Not every character needs to be totally fleshed out. While It'd be nice if there were more gay main characters, I think representation matters even if they are small roles, and as long as they aren't too over the top stereotypes, I don't get too bent out of shape about it
 

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DrownedAmmet said:
kitsunefather said:
This is kind of hard to argue for or against without specific examples. Gay characters are still pretty rare so people are more likely to celebrate them even if they are a little sterorypical or token-y.
But I don't see the problem generally with someone going "I want this character to be gay" and just making them gay. Not every character needs to be totally fleshed out. While It'd be nice if there were more gay main characters, I think representation matters even if they are small roles, and as long as they aren't too over the top stereotypes, I don't get too bent out of shape about it
Fair enough.

Let me say, I have no problem with the "simply making a character gay" by an author, and I agree that not every character needs to be totally fleshed out. However, characters involved directly with the story should at least be fleshed out for the author, even if they don't go too much in depth in the story proper, so that they can present them as a deep character.

Small roles can be shallow or deep, and even lean a bit on stereotypes and tropes (in order to use the mnemonics of these to help create the character in the mind of the reader without putting in too much work), but main characters, or tangentially important characters, should be treated with respect. In my opinion.

I'll posit two examples from recent Marvel Comics, and my thoughts on the way they've been used and characterized.

* Iron Heart/Riri Williams
This character is a (obviously temporary) replacement for Tony Stark, created in the days leading up to Marvel's Civil War II by Brian Michael Bendis. She is a character whose motivation has been presented awkwardly (she demanded her teacher tell her she couldn't do something, and the teacher eventually caved and chose "you'll never be Tony Stark"). Every character she has met has lauded her as a genius and hero, even while she's unknown. She shows no empathy towards others, but also no accountability or development, as her actions are never challenged by her peers.

Take as contrast, James "Rhodey" Rhodes, who became War Machine. He was also a temporary replacement for Tony Stark, established well before the replacement took place. He bungled on many occasions, and constantly struggled with the idea that he wasn't as good as the other Avengers, learning to become a stronger hero through the process. The reason he became War Machine (aside from toy possibilities) was that he'd become incredibly popular with readers, who didn't want to see him be relegated into obscurity like Happy Hogan had by this point.

* Ice-Man/Bobby Drake
This is an established character, a founder of the X-Men. A couple of years ago, during a time travel scenario where his 15 year old self was brought to modern day (ah, comics), Jean Grey discovered he was gay while casually probing his mind. This hinted at a road of discovery ahead for the character. Fans of the character poured through comics going all the way back to the first appearance of Jean Grey (where he was the only one not drooling out the window at her) to show that while this wasn't intended, it certainly wasn't an "out of left field" change.

Since that time, the same fans have come up with the theory that Jean Grey used her powers to make Bobby gay. This is largely because, since he realized he was gay, he's become a Will and Grace background character. He's every stereotype for gay men that you can name, just short of Sterling Archer's interpretation when he had to try a honey pot on a man. In addition, mutants are largely intended as a stand in for marginalized people and have moved slowly from race to sexuality in the last decade. It was an interesting possibility mishandled because the focus of the character became "gay" instead of "Bobby Drake".

* Spider-Man/Miles Moralez
Also created by Brian Michael Bendis, in the "Ultimate Spider-Man" title. The Ultimate Marvel line was a re-imagining of the original characters in a new, more cohesive universe (for example, Peter's parents were killed the day Bruce Banner first turned into the Hulk, as they were working in the same building just in different labs). During the run, Peter Parker died (spoilers, I guess) and Miles Moralez became Spider-Man. He is a mixed race (hispanic/african) teenager, whose uncle is the Spider-Man villain the Prowler. He got his powers in a similar fashion, while Peter was alive, and when he went out to try and be like Peter, he got his crap knocked around hard, so he quit.

When Peter died on television, Miles had his "Uncle Ben" moment; if he had tried to find Spider-Man, if he had lived up to the responsibility of his powers, Peter might not have died. He was forced to earn the trust of Nick Fury and Shield, as well as Peter's friends. He sought out Aunt May, and worked to earn her trust and blessing to be Spider-Man. When it came to light to the public that he was dark skinned under the costume, he made a big deal about how that shouldn't matter, that his actions were more important than the color of his skin.

While I'm not a fan of the post Secret Wars II Miles (they mixed all the universes together, basically, negating a lot of Miles' earlier developmental events without explaining how they're different), this was and is an excellent Legacy character and I only stopped reading the title after they brought Peter back and revealed that his Spider powers actually made him immortal, but even he gave Miles his blessing after fighting alongside him.

I hope that gives you an idea of what inspired my concerns, if not an insight into the mindset I'm asking under. I'm not really concerned about side and background characters; they should be diverse but I don't expect every character to have a family tree. I'm talking about characters important to the story, who advance the plot, or are actors in the narrative.

And, further, I should clarify that I understand that there are stories where the character being "gay" or "black" is the actual point of the story. What I'm asking about, though, is more like mystery/adventure/science fiction/horror; stories about something that isn't that, but rather where those become character traits that inform their actions.


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I think we're looking at the symptom rather than the disease.

From the late 90's to the early 2000's, it seemed like there was a huge backlash when a minority character with power was introduced. "You're being PC", "You're being inclusionary", "You're just adding a token to be more marketable".

What if the second a writer thought of a character, they just were something in their mind's eye? A lot of characters I write, they come from the people I've met and the traits I've envied. And if they are a certain race, creed, or gender, I might keep it apart of the actual character I'm writing.

I might not.

But the point is, it's the character they want to write. What if they are looking at today's society and think that having an X character in this modern day environment would be more compelling than someone who wouldn't really suffer under today's society because they are Z?

Why were people boycotting or saying we all should boycott The Force Awakens because of Finn [https://www.thedailybeast.com/racists-urge-boycott-of-star-wars-episode-vii-over-black-lead-and-most-of-them-love-trump]? It's been a while since I've seen the movie, but I do remember him being one of the only minority people on screen for most of the time.

And what sort of revelation is it that Finn was apart of the cast? Samuel L. Jackson starred in all of the prequels. Billy Dee Williams was apart of "the Empire Strikes Back" and "Return of the Jedi".

But then the majority doesn't seem to have that much of a problem with whitewashing in Passion of the Christ, Exodus, Noah, Gods of Egypt, Prince of Persia. And if white people speak out about it, they are SJWs.

So, it's really not a problem with characters and writers. It's about hypocrites. People are outraged over Heimdall being Idris Elba, but see no problem with Avatar being white washed. One fiction can't be touched, but another one is flexible. A black character co starring in Star Wars is lunacy and inspiring of hate and rage. Sofia Coppola seemingly makes a habit of excluding people of color even if they are part of the source material she's adapting (Hallie in "The Beguiled" [https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/arts-and-entertainment/wp/2017/06/22/sofia-coppolas-the-beguiled-criticized-for-leaving-out-a-slave-narrative-from-the-confederate-south/?utm_term=.6850a3834bf9]) or if they were apart of actual events (Diana Tamayo was omitted from the Bling Ring, a movie adapted from real life events [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Bling_Ring]).

People are more accepting in seeing demons, angels, and fantastical aliens in their plots than they are fellow humans that walk among them daily. We should all think about that. 20 feet tall rock monsters that some how can speak english is so fascinating. But if he has a black human friend, it's suddenly pandering.

If you can make a fuss about one, you can make a fuss about all. If you select your outrage, it isn't a problem with the author, it's how you calibrated your rage.
 

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I get the idea of not wanting people to be showcases of diversity, but the problem is that people are so used to things being homogenized that if you try you break away from the norm people who take comfort in the status quo, people are going to throw accusations at you no matter what you do. They're going to end up being showcases because they're the forerunners. We're not going to have a choice in the matter.

I mean people rail against quotas when it comes to stuff like that, but I feel like those people have a reverse quota of how much is allowed. Like, you get 100 diversity points. A gay character uses up ten points, a trans character 25 points, an ethnic character five points, and god help you if you try to give a character more than one "diversity" trait. I shudder to think how people would react to a black gay man in fiction. Which is awkward because a friend and I are co-authoring something and I kind of want to write a character just like that. Fuck, my friend wants to introduce a Maori character and he's concerned he's going to catch shit just for acknowledging they exist.

So sadly it's going to be that way until people get more comfortable (IE: get the fuck over themselves) with the concept. So fuck it, I want my Kenyan gay black character and my friend wants his Maori lady.
 

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Ask yourself why these sort of questions never come up with straight white male characters and you have the answer to whether we need diversity.
 

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Make them characters, duh. If you go for cheap stereotypes you wind up with an American comedy. And no-one wants that.

ObsidianJones said:
Why were people boycotting or saying we all should boycott The Force Awakens because of Finn [https://www.thedailybeast.com/racists-urge-boycott-of-star-wars-episode-vii-over-black-lead-and-most-of-them-love-trump]?
Because he was a terribly written character - so bad that he stood out as especially badly written even for that film. Also, I am going to question in the integrity of that link based purely on the address.
 

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Ask yourself why these sort of questions never come up with straight white male characters and you have the answer to whether we need diversity.
But it does come up, all the time. I hear about "grizzled white males" and whether they belong or whatnot all the time. Mind you, it might be the company I keep, or the websites I frequent (sadly, mainly here).
 

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Fuck, my friend wants to introduce a Maori character and he's concerned he's going to catch shit just for acknowledging they exist.
Well, you're equally likely to get shit from both sides, particularly if your friend isn't a Maori or of Maori descent.
 

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Because he was a terribly written character - so bad that he stood out as especially badly written even for that film.
Yeah, that's not it. I remember seeing calls before the film aired, for one thing. For another, there are very frequently worse-written characters-- even within the same franchise-- that do not elicit the same response.

the December King said:
But it does come up, all the time. I hear about "grizzled white males" and whether they belong or whatnot all the time. Mind you, it might be the company I keep, or the websites I frequent (sadly, mainly here).
Those are not the same complaints at all. Criticising something for being ubiquitous or overused is not the same as criticising a relatively small number of instances for "shoehorning".
 

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Catnip1024 said:
erttheking said:
Fuck, my friend wants to introduce a Maori character and he's concerned he's going to catch shit just for acknowledging they exist.
Well, you're equally likely to get shit from both sides, particularly if your friend isn't a Maori or of Maori descent.
Yeah, I've been writing for a long time and I think I know what end to expect getting blasted from. And it's not that end.
 

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Silvanus said:
Catnip1024 said:
Because he was a terribly written character - so bad that he stood out as especially badly written even for that film.
Yeah, that's not it. I remember seeing calls before the film aired, for one thing. For another, there are very frequently worse-written characters-- even within the same franchise-- that do not elicit the same response.
None that stand out so much as a guy brought up as a stormtrooper, who theoretically wants to quit because he doesn't like killing, yet gleefully mows down dozens of his comrades while escaping. If there had been any indication of regret, it might not have been so bad, but that one scene broke the character for me.

Also, I think a lot of the criticism was based around the misguided belief that all of the Stormtroopers were clones of Boba Fett, which stopped sometime after the clone wars. Possibly not all, but you have to be careful not to conflate these things with racism.
 

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Yeah, I've been writing for a long time and I think I know what end to expect getting blasted from. And it's not that end.
I dunno how widely read your stuff is, but my instant inclination would be to question how many readers would actually be familiar enough with Maori culture to fall into the Dunning-Kruger zone and presume to preach how it should be depicted.

But, you know, it's your experience, I ain't going to question it.
 

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Catnip1024 said:
erttheking said:
Yeah, I've been writing for a long time and I think I know what end to expect getting blasted from. And it's not that end.
I dunno how widely read your stuff is, but my instant inclination would be to question how many readers would actually be familiar enough with Maori culture to fall into the Dunning-Kruger zone and presume to preach how it should be depicted.

But, you know, it's your experience, I ain't going to question it.
Yeah, trust me, my friend and I are a lot more concerned about those who screech about "forced diversity" particularly with how effing easy it is to set them off.