Edge's Games of 2011

[JEdge]

Happy New Year to you all!

I'm not sure if this is an OK thing to do, all of my reviewing in the past was written stuff, and I'm just trying out some video editing and stuff - I'd love to know what the distinguished Escapist community thinks...be gentle.

http://youtu.be/WWLkbu8e0SM?hd=1

 

[Starke]

Well, while still watching it, one serious problem is your lead in audio is way too loud, or your voice volume is too damn low. I'll keep watching and see if anything else sticks out.

EDIT: Okay. First off, read your script aloud at least once before recording it. If you're not reading from a script, write one up, read it through, out loud, then record your audio.

The Static Bursts, and the intro music need to be brought down in volume by a bit. Your voice needs to be brought up in volume a bit. Basically my first impression all over again. Beyond that, there's nothing I'd want to critique per say without having the script in front of me.