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TLDR FOR THE IMPATIENT: Just read the title.

Recently, I finished watching the anime version of Trigun. I quite enjoyed it, and for what it was, it did a stellar job of adapting *most* of the manga, and delivering a concise, easy to understand plot. But it ain't perfect. Like the title says, what ways would you improve a good show or film, adaptation or otherwise?

In Trigun's case, while most things are implied and quick enough to pick up on, I would have liked to see a bit more direct interaction between Knives and Vash, or more of an explanation about the SEEDS colonists still living above the clouds. Stuff like that which feels very significant, but only gets the most bare bones mention in the anime. Hell, Vash being a Plant is only hinted at in one episode and left ambiguous, until Knives brings it up casually, ruining any sort of reveal. If the show was given, say, three more episodes just to tighten up loose ends, it could have benefited the story well I think.

The shame is that it was obvious the show was on a tight budget. Most of the action scenes were still shots, or repeated footage, which really started to bother me after a while. Of the three Adult Swim space westerns, (Bebop, Outlaw Star, and Trigun), it may have more story going for it than Outlaw Star, but it just lacks the production values of Bebop, and it's a shame.

Still, good series that could use some work.
 

Johnny Novgorod

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I'd change Cowboy Bebop so that

Spike reunites with Jet and Faye after the final duel, and then they pick up Ed and Ein on their way to more adventures.
 

Juste Goose

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I'd have season eight of That 70's Show declared non-cannon.

All the Comedy Central-era Futurama as well.
 

Hero of Lime

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That any episodes of Simpsons from 2008-Present day(not sure on the actual season numbers) be just a series of bad dreams Homer had one night.

Gundam Wing, cut out the clip show episodes, replace them with more mobile suit battles and quasi political intrigue. I want to know who thought clip shows were a good idea in anything.
 

Dr. Cakey

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Code Geass
Seriously, Code Geass, I love you, but dump like half your episodes and replace them with episodes that make sense and/or do not end with a deus ex machina (as applicable).

Madoka Magica
Hrmmmmmmmm...sex? That's about all I can think of that might improve it.
 

Blood Brain Barrier

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Babylon 5: It was perfect until the end of Year 4 which ended the civil war too quickly. The end of S4 feels like a space shooter game the way it is entirely military focused. They should have prolonged the war until midway through S5, doing that they could have still have brought in Lochley and had the Telepath refugee situation and Drakh problem, while keeping tension levels high around the continuing Earth situation. I love Season 4 but it feels rushed and things go into a lull through Season 5 too quickly making it feel like a soap opera at times. The ISA and Sheridan's presidency should have been a footnote, something for the future. That said, considering they thought there would be no S5 at the time, they did an admirable job wrapping things up early and at the same time giving us an extended run. It's better off with it than without it.
 

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Moon. I'm not 100% sure it would improve the film but I'm curious to see whether muting the sound during the scenes in space would detract or add to the atmosphere. The music can stay of course, that was part of the brilliance of 2001 after all, but I mean the soft rumbling of machinery and moon rocks.
 

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Tangled
I said it once before, but get rid of the chameleon. There is no point to him being in this movie at all, he adds nothing to the plot or any event. He's only there so little kids have a cute mascot to look at, and he screws off whenever the plot becomes serious. Removing him would change nothing, yet I'm constantly annoyed by his superfluous presence.

The Secret of NIMH
That flashback scene where we see Nicodemus open the latch to his cage. Two things about this scene have always bothered me...

1) Why does there need to be a sign under the latch saying "Lift latch to open"? The simplicity of the latch itself pretty much already instructs you how to open it, unless that lab is populated by a bunch of retards.

2) I would think that your average rat could easily open that latch even without super brain serum. Rats are pretty damn resourceful like that. Not really effective in displaying their new found intelligence, I find.

Also, why would this lab just grab rats from off the streets? Don't they have their own little breeders that supply them with clean rats?
I mean, street rats probably have dozens of deseases that would interfere with whatever tests one might want to subject them to.

So yeah, I would change that.
 

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Wreck It Ralph: Cut out all the really juvenile potty humor and attempt a little bit harder at jokes and you have a movie that's truly wonderful. The "Call of Dooty" stuff didn't need to go on as long as it did.

Pet Semetary: I just watched this movie this year (the original Stephen King movie), find a consistent tone. It felt too silly when it should have been serious, and vice versa. It wasn't too bad, but I felt like laughing at really inappropriate times, otherwise, it was pretty good.
 

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Change Jurassic Park 2 to have raptors with feathers.

Cut out everything in Splice after THAT one moment. If you've seen the movie you can guess what I mean. The ending was dumb and unnecessary.
 

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Johnny Novgorod said:
I'd change Cowboy Bebop so that

Spike reunites with Jet and Faye after the final duel, and then they pick up Ed and Ein on their way to more adventures.
ARE YOU INSANE? That would be disastrous (As much as i would like a bit more of cowboy Bebop) - you can't change the ending.



So my pick is: I would improve the X-Files by cutting out the "Conspiracy"-Arc - you know the convoluted stuff with Mulders sister and the aliens and that.

There can still be aliens and there can certainly conspiracies (Smoking man and all were cool)... but not like this.
 

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Summerstorm said:
Johnny Novgorod said:
I'd change Cowboy Bebop so that

Spike reunites with Jet and Faye after the final duel, and then they pick up Ed and Ein on their way to more adventures.
ARE YOU INSANE? That would be disastrous (As much as i would like a bit more of cowboy Bebop) - you can't change the ending.
I agree, as sad as it was - the end of it was just as golden as the series was. I wouldn't have changed it at all. Does illustrate though how many suggestions made in this thread will hardly be improvements in the eyes of everyone.

My suggestion is actually similar to the Bebop one though, except it's Firefly. The only change I'd make is "more of it" ;) Yeah I know, can't see that happening anytime soon...
 

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Cutout about 3/4 quarters of the dialog in Attack on Titan.

Eren to Anna
"You were always so bored, so disinterested, so superior to us...well now you're paying attention!"
Done, no more minute long monologues into her apparent motives.
 

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Remove Lee Odama from the reboot of Battlestar Galactica, the man is just a huge whining moron who spends his entire time lusting after Starbuck and throughout the 5 seasons does more or less every job available on the show and sucks at all of them.
 

RedDeadFred

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Dexter -Just end it after season 4 and switch it around so that season 1 is actually last but Dexter gives in to his brother's way of life and leaves the code. It ends with him killing Deb and he never gets caught. Unhappy? Sure. Much better than lumberjack? YES!

Kick Ass 1/2 -Have Big Daddy survive in the first movie so that he can be in the second one.

Death Note -Just end it after the first season.

Lost -Don't make the majority of the answers to the mysteries be "because magic" when you are presenting yourself as a drama science fiction.
 

Andy Shandy

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Just complete destroy Season 9 of Scrubs. All the recordings and shit. And completely wipe it from the conciousness of every human on Earth.
 

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Lieju said:
Change Jurassic Park 2 to have raptors with feathers.
You mean you wouldn't change the whole "Lets rip off King Kong but put it in San Diego" scenes? Or have it follow the book a little more about the island being the "dirty little secret" of InGen? Thats what I would change, also de-fuse the little girl character back into the 2 kids from the book because it just took away from the plot. The whole movie aside from Jeff Goldblum and Julianne Moore was crap.

Edit: the bolded name of the city in which the movie goes stupid. I forgot it was SD not LA, because I haven't watched it in so damn long.