Law and Order Legacies Ep1 Video Review

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Sinoda

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Telltale is one of my favorite videogame developers. There, I said it. There hasn't been a game from them I've played that I didn't love. Of course, the only game I haven't played is Jurassic Park. But I'll get to that eventually!

Even when I first started playing Sam and Max, I loved their dialog writing. I always wished for more conversations in-game than the puzzles. So when a friend told me that their newest game series, Law and Order Legacies, was 90% dialog...Well, I was pretty excited.


I went in expecting Legacies to be like Phoenix Wright that took itself over seriously. I did not have huge expectations, after what I had heard about Jurassic Park. But damn, after playing that first episode I was impressed.

The first episode, Revenge, starts in typical Law and Order style by showing someone going about their business and finding a body. After the opening credits, we are introduced to two of our protagonists, Detectives Curtis and Benson as they search the crime scene and interview the person who found the body. Then they interview witnesses, find a suspect, and eventually go to court, with typical crime show plot twists through the episode

[img_inline width="300" align="left"]http://thereviewcast.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/lno1-300x168.jpg[/img_inline]Both detectives are from different Law and Order spinoffs, so it was interesting to see how they interacted. All the main characters in the game already exist in other Law and Order shows, and to my knowledge, none use the original actor. It's pretty obvious too, but none of the voice acting is terrible.

Within the first five minutes, I could tell that this was truly a more serious take on Ace Attorney. It improved on a lot of elements from it's inspiration, however. For example, in court the dialog and objections are much more in depth. Instead of just yelling OBJECTION every time someone said something suspicious, Legacies asks for reasons.

The dialog writing wasn't the greatest, but everything came together very well. The pacing, and overall style gave the whole feel of the TV show, which serves as evidence towards my opinion that Telltale is the master of matching a franchise and making it their own at the same time.

I've yet to play beyond Episode 1 of Legacies, but there are total episodes in the series, and will be made available throughout the coming months. If the others maintain the same level of pace and Ace Attorneyness, I think it absolutely has potential to be another great Telltale title.

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Feedback is much appreciated. In this video I used a sweet new microphone and tried to sound more friendly. I'd also really appreciate encouragement that people actually read these. Thanks!
 

Starke

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You probably need to work on your annunciation, a bit.

Also, and this is general advice, read through anything you write out loud at least once to get a grasp how the text flows. Beyond that you may want to at least rehearsed the text before recording it. You may want to record said rehearsal and play it back so you have an idea of what does and doesn't work.
 

Arkley

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Your written review is fine, if unremarkable. It has a consistent style, is concise and easy to read. There are grammatical errors, but they are minor and for the purpose of writing user reviews, you needn't worry about them. It's not as though you're writing a formal letter or resume.

As for the video review, you definitely need to work on your enunciation. Many of your spoken words bleed together into an incomprehensible slur of unpronounced consonants. This is a lot easier to remedy than you might think, though. It requires some practice, but nothing so drastic as elocution lessons. A good method by which to teach yourself is to tap your leg as you say each syllable, tapping harder on the syllables which bear greater spoken emphasis. Firmly pronounce all consonants at first, even if the words sound unusual as a result. Eventually, return to a standard speaking pattern, allowing consonants in the middle of words to be pronounced more softly.

Do this for a while - and do it as a "warm up" before you record - and you'll find it greatly beneficial. Learning to enunciate properly can have tremendous benefits aside from narrating internet videos of course, so the effort will be well spent.

All that aside, you have the potential to do quite well. Just be sure to take criticism in stride if you intend to continue writing. There's always room to improve, but not everyone will be kind about it.
 

Sinoda

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Thanks guys! The feedback is much appreciated. I'll keep both of your comments/advice in mind for my next video.
 

Starke

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Starke said:
You probably need to work on your annunciation, a bit.
Arkley said:
As for the video review, you definitely need to work on your enunciation.
And my hilariously awful spelling skills have struck again. >.< But, thanks, with no sarcasm whatsoever, I've been trying to remember how to spell that for days. Now I just need to figure out what my advice actually ended up being...