Mock-up Escapist Intro I made for myself. Please critique!

[ManiacalZManiac]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lhAJSaFeRQk

I tried to get it down just right, down to the colors and such.

I got the sound effects from this "1001 Sound Effects" pack I downloaded and that "HAA" was on it. So I immediately wanted to make a mock-up Escapist intro.

What do my fellow Escapees think about it?

 

[Cherry Cola]

That was good.

Why did you do it?

 

[zauxz]

Umm. Its ok I guess. Well done.


Man, I miss the old escapist intro. It was a million times better.

 

[ManiacalZManiac]

That was good.

Why did you do it?

Hell, it's 4 A.M. here in central U.S. and I have nothing better to do.
Can't sleep.

 

[Julianking93]

Okay, that was cool, I guess.

Where's the discussion? And isn't this just self promotion?

 

[maddawg IAJI]

That was.....cool.

Well, now that that is out of the way,what do we talk about?.

 

[ManiacalZManiac]

Okay, that was cool, I guess.

Where's the discussion? And isn't this just self promotion?

Well I'm not going "HAI GAIZ SUBSCRIBE LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO!!!1!!!1!".
Just asking for some constructive criticism.

 

[Icecoldcynic]

I don't know, the Z looked a lot rougher than the escapist's E. Still, not too bad I suppose.

 

[Julianking93]

Okay, that was cool, I guess.

Where's the discussion? And isn't this just self promotion?

Well I'm not going "HAI GAIZ SUBSCRIBE LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO!!!1!!!1!".
Just asking for some constructive criticism.

That is true, but what constructive criticism could I give out on that?

Its just the Escapist intro with your name on it instead of The Escapist.

 

[Omikron009]

It's pretty good, but my question is...why?