Poll: Please review my video, get credits in my next one.

[philzibit]

I want criticism!

I recently released my documentary on youtube, and I'm moving right along to another one. My next one is going to be on a feature length; on a subject near and dear to my heart, so essentially, I want more people, people I don't know, to tell me what they think I did right and wrong in my first one.

Even if you don't know squat about film making, that's fine; I'd really like average people to tell me their thoughts.

 

[Svenparty]

I'm a Media Production student and thought apart from maybe needing subtitles for some of your early onstage stuff that the pacing and editing were really well made and your responses seemed very natural and well thought out. The right amount of comedians also helped this be a varied video.

Overall found myself routing for you though I can't Gangtok why you wear hats outside of your workplace, Aren't you bored of them?

 

[philzibit]

I'm a Media Production student and thought apart from maybe needing subtitles for some of your early onstage stuff that the pacing and editing were really well made and your responses seemed very natural and well thought out. The right amount of comedians also helped this be a varied video.

Overall found myself routing for you though I can't Gangtok why you wear hats outside of your workplace, Aren't you bored of them?

That's not actually me, it's a guy I know. I just made it and occasionally you can hear me asking questions.

I never even thought of subtitles, that would definitely help on the parts were I couldn't fix the audio. Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Svenparty]

Ah how silly of me to assume you were the subject also. Yes I once made a murder story which required distorted audio, this resulted in needing subtitles and occasional bad audio can be forgiven as long as it is appropriate.