Purgatory RP [Accepting Sheets]

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FollowVirgil

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I'm just looking to see if people would be interested, so I could start building the world and story.
The main concept is you have been sent to purgatory (obviously) due to breaking one of the seven sins. Therefore I'd be looking for seven players, myself not included, each with a chosen sin.

Name:

Age and DOB: You may be from any time period from 1AD onwards. Aged between 20 - 35, though this is not the age you died.

Gender:

Race and Background:

Personality & Sin:

Appearance in Purgatory:

How did you die?:



Purgatory is a reflection, and not a copy, of earth. Shaped by those inhabit it as a collective mass, it is a fluid environment. Humans in purgatory are those who sinned, but did not break the commandments. Thus, the humans in purgatory are what some would see as true human nature. Within purgatory, people are shaped by their former life, and inherent sin. This representation of their sin is still malleable in purgatory, where they may lead good lives, and progress to a more human form. However, there has been no record of redemption in purgatory. Ever.

Society in purgatory is similar to that on earth. Each person has an assigned task, which they carry out for money, to barter goods with. There is no reason to eat or drink, though it is still an enjoyable experience, and many newcomers often feel ghost-pangs of hunger and thirst. What money is spent on is dependant on the time period, though items of leisure are common throughout.

There are three planes, three different time periods of humanities growth

350 AD - Constantine's conversion to christianity. This is the lowest plain, filled with both Demons, and Humans.

1550 AD - The Renaissance, filled with only humans.

1915 AD - World War I, filled with both Angels and Humans.

WIthin all three realms are relics of the original seven sinners. Seven keys, to only one door. These keys have been sought after by every single denizen upon learning it, but only one has been found, which is Sloths. It is currently held in the second plane, heavily guarded.

In purgatory you are in your prime age, so from 20-35. People do not age, however, those cursed by Sloth can appear far older if they succumb to their temptations.

In between each plane, is a bridge that flows over mist. On each bridge stands an Archangel, and few have made it past him. Death is as brutal and horrific in purgatory as it is on earth, and the dead are simply sent to hell.

The inhuman Demons and Angels in purgatory both appear as semi-humanoid, radiating light and fog respectively. They are stronger, faster and highly intelligent compared to most of the humans, but can be killed through normal means, sending them back to their respective planes.

There are a rare few who have fully succumbed to their sin, granting them supernatural strength at the expense of sheer hatred from their fellow humans. These individuals work through many associates and servants to achieve their means, all bearing a mark on their neck.

Warfare in purgatory is fought with the time appropriate weapons.

As your sins shape your character, here are just a few ideas to explain what I mean.

Wrath - Your footprints leave scorch marks on the earth, your eyes burn with fire etc.

Apathy (Sloth) - Your skin is pallid grey, surrounded by fog.

etc.

The sins in question are Wrath, Envy, Gluttony, Greed, Pride, Apathy, Lust. Your character can be from any time period, race, creed etc. Your end goal is to make it out of the three levels, and gain entry to heaven. There will be character specific challenges, traps

I'm very open to feedback and criticism, which would be much appreciated. I'm still undecided on Group vs Forum, but the dice tool would be useful. Let me know what you think.

Thanks.

Oh, and as I know Gluttony is not a favoured appearance, let me remind you it is an excess of ingestible whatnots. Alcholism, drug addictions, etc fall under Gluttony.
 

tobi the good boy

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Cool premise, I'd need to see more foundation on the realms of purgatory and perhaps some lore before I'd commit, but you're definitely in my sights.

Also, will the realm of purgatory exist within the purely Christian dogma or will you be incorporating other culture's views of the underworld into your rp?
 

Redryhno

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I definitely like the sound of this, but it kind of depends on if it's actually still going on or not. If it is, I'd like to reserve Envy.
 

CrazyBlaze

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I might be interested but I need more information and if it actually commits. If these I call Greed,
 

Skulltaker101

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Nice. I really like this idea. Count me in...and I call Pride. Got a good idea for a character already. An executive whose offspring never lived up to his insurmountable expectations, so he pretended he had no son to save face, leading said son to later kill him.

On that note, is it possible that the cause of a character's death can be visually evident? Like for my guy the murder wound on his neck that will never heal?

Tl;dr
Love the idea, count me in.
 

FollowVirgil

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tobi the good boy said:
Cool premise, I'd need to see more foundation on the realms of purgatory and perhaps some lore before I'd commit, but you're definitely in my sights.

Also, will the realm of purgatory exist within the purely Christian dogma or will you be incorporating other culture's views of the underworld into your rp?
Not too sure, I'm thinking of a mixture of Dante and some other stuff, for plots sake. Still trying to work out some kinks and what not. I must note that purgatory is in no way a copy of Earth, rather, a reflection of the deeper motivations of certain time periods. That being said, I've figured that the time periods will be;

350 AD(ish) - To reflect Constantines conversion to Christianity.

15th Century - The flourishing of the Renaissance.

1915 - The beginning of the first World War.

There will be certain intervals between stages where you will be reviewed on how you acted, your righteousness or sins leaving you gifted or punished accordingly. Essentially you will be trying to avoid becoming your sin, though it will give you sway over certain events.

Not exactly. You'll probably be assessed on things you didn't even realise. There won't be huge choices or anything, it's just a fun tool I was thinking of using.

Other than that, it's great to see some interest :D
 

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Skulltaker101 said:
Your appearance is as you wish, I'll let you know if it needs revision. That sounds good, obviously if you were hit by a train that would be a different matter!
 

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Skulltaker101 said:
Nice. I really like this idea. Count me in...and I call Pride. Got a good idea for a character already. An executive whose offspring never lived up to his insurmountable expectations, so he pretended he had no son to save face, leading said son to later kill him.

On that note, is it possible that the cause of a character's death can be visually evident? Like for my guy the murder wound on his neck that will never heal?

Tl;dr
Love the idea, count me in.
:( I dibsed pride
 

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tobi the good boy said:
Skulltaker101 said:
Nice. I really like this idea. Count me in...and I call Pride. Got a good idea for a character already. An executive whose offspring never lived up to his insurmountable expectations, so he pretended he had no son to save face, leading said son to later kill him.

On that note, is it possible that the cause of a character's death can be visually evident? Like for my guy the murder wound on his neck that will never heal?

Tl;dr
Love the idea, count me in.
:( I dibsed pride
Oops, sorry about that. I'll think of something else...or we could both have pride. What do you reckon?
 

tobi the good boy

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Skulltaker101 said:
tobi the good boy said:
Skulltaker101 said:
Nice. I really like this idea. Count me in...and I call Pride. Got a good idea for a character already. An executive whose offspring never lived up to his insurmountable expectations, so he pretended he had no son to save face, leading said son to later kill him.

On that note, is it possible that the cause of a character's death can be visually evident? Like for my guy the murder wound on his neck that will never heal?

Tl;dr
Love the idea, count me in.
:( I dibsed pride
Oops, sorry about that. I'll think of something else...or we could both have pride. What do you reckon?
It's all good; I don't have an issue with there being two prides but I think the GM is after one sin per player.
 

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tobi the good boy said:
Skulltaker101 said:
tobi the good boy said:
Skulltaker101 said:
Nice. I really like this idea. Count me in...and I call Pride. Got a good idea for a character already. An executive whose offspring never lived up to his insurmountable expectations, so he pretended he had no son to save face, leading said son to later kill him.

On that note, is it possible that the cause of a character's death can be visually evident? Like for my guy the murder wound on his neck that will never heal?

Tl;dr
Love the idea, count me in.
:( I dibsed pride
Oops, sorry about that. I'll think of something else...or we could both have pride. What do you reckon?
It's all good; I don't have an issue with there being two prides but I think the GM is after one sin per player.
This is true, though if we have enough players, perhaps you two could be twins? That would be fine, though at this rate another sin would be preferred.
 

FollowVirgil

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Oh, just an update.

I have worked out a general plot and what have you, but the premise of this RP is that you have no idea what is going on in the beginning. I'll let the introduction speak for itself when we get started. I plan for this to be a fairly progressive RP, so hopefully it wont be over in a week. If you need fast paced action every second of the day, perhaps this is not for you.

If you feel the need to be absolutely sure I have a plot, send me a message and we can argue discuss the ins and outs of it.
 

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Burning Bard said:
This could be very good.

I don't suppose I can reserve Wrath, that would be lovely.
Of course you can. That means we have Wrath, Envy, and pride is being contended over.
 

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Name: Antonio Giradi Paradisio
Age: 23
DOB: January 13, 1583
Race/Background: Italian, born a prostitute's child in a rich man's city, Antonio leaned from an early age that the world wouldn't give him anything and that what he wanted would have to be taken from everyone slower than he was. After a few years of begging from the time he was five, he expanded his knowledge to burglary, forgery, and impersonation. When he was eighteen, he successfully became a nobleman's son for a full week before being found out, at which point he fled his home city and traveled to Florence. However that week he spent as a noble gave him an insatiable thirst for the power that came along with it. He began his impersonation routine again, though this time he became a lord himself, after killing the former noble and getting rid of the body. After five years of being him, he was found out once again, and again, was forced to leave Florence, however this time he was tracked by bounty hunters and brought before a magistrate. He was summarily executed.

Personality and Sin: Envy, Antonio is easygoing, always up for laugh or a mark, as long as he isn't impersonating someone else, which is rarely. He is an expert in both disguise and impersonation, able to adopt his target's mannerisms and inflections without much effort. Although he can change his form to become someone else, he also feel the need to become them completely, with no one to dispute the fact and so will kill them to get what he wants.

Appearance in Purgatory: His form is constantly changing, shifting from one person to another - mostly whenever he sees someone that looks as if they have money or power, but if both seem to be obvious he will focus on them - with little time in between each change. He can concentrate on one form for a while, but the effort tires him and the only form he can change to without any energy wasted is his own. His form is one of a well-distinguished man, black goatee, hazel eyes, well groomed,neck-length hair slicked back, but with a glint in his eye at all times. He's irresistibly charming, or at least tries to be. Each move he makes he tries to have a reason for, doing random acts is reprehensible to him, though he will do something wild if an enticing woman is involved. He thinks of himself as a master chess player and everyone not connected to him is just a piece in the game.


How he died: hanging.

If his form is constantly changing here, would that include his clothes as well as his body or just his body? Either way would make sense to me. If you don't like his sinpearance just let me know.
 

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Redryhno said:
Great character! On your sinpearance (stolen), I think if you were constantly changing appearances, it would make references unnecessarily awkward. Perhaps your clothes and possessions shift due to who you see, though they only become permanent when you 'give in', so to speak.

Still working on the whole, sin-o-meter thing. Will get back to you on that.

Other than that, the only other thing I can think of is perhaps adding a bit more envy into his life. As in, actually wanting what those people have, instead of doing things on whim. I totally understand that it's implied, but it's just nice to have written down. :)
 

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FollowVirgil said:
Anyone still interested?
I'm interested.
However I'm just wondering, can I play as one of the "reserved" sins as they still haven't wrote up a character sheet.