Starcraft 2 Replay Commentaries Need Some Critiques

[KeSlGamer]

I know HDStarcraft and HuskyStarcraft are huge in esports, and I want to help out. This is my youtube commentary channel. Needs some more work, but only experience will improve. Right now I'm in a middle of a series called the Zile Chronicles.

http://www.youtube.com/keslgamer

Just wondering if I can get some comments on improvements. Intros and stuff, maybe the style that I commentate in needs change. Should I add some more flair to it to distinguish myself from others?

 

[MercurySteam]

Advertising not welcome here!!!

REPORTED!!!

 

[KeSlGamer]

Sorry, didn't know that I was advertising specifically. I changed it so its less advertisement. Is that better?

 

[KeSlGamer]

New video is here for the Zile Chronicles.

Can anyone help me with recording audio? I seem to keep getting that white noise in the background...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRW3mhKqIqs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TT_X7fKOQu8

 

[auronvi]

Ignore mercury... I will catch them when I have more time. Keep working on it!

 

[Blackadder51]

Sorry mate but Advertising isnt allowed here. In case it is a mistake i wont report you.

 

[the_pleasure_is_mine]

Advertising not welcome here!!!

REPORTED!!!

It's surely not that bad...

Anyway. I'll check them out when I can, I like to see stuff like that.

 

[KeSlGamer]

Wow thanks! I greatly appreciate it! And sorry if it seems like advertisement, I just want more feedback since my view counts sucks ass...

...But yeah, I'm trying to get better at the whole food/income thing. Anyone got any tips about recording audio and getting rid of the white noise?

 

[SomeLameStuff]

Well if you want to get better at shoutcasting, I suggest you look up BreakyCPK. He's only recently started shoutcasting Starcraft 2 games, but you can learn a bit from his other casts.

 

[KeSlGamer]

Well if you want to get better at shoutcasting, I suggest you look up BreakyCPK. He's only recently started shoutcasting Starcraft 2 games, but you can learn a bit from his other casts.

Ooo nice, I like his style, also likes how he cast HoN games. I wish there was a way to cast LoL games though. I can't seem to figure out how to find replays.

 

[the_pleasure_is_mine]

Wow thanks! I greatly appreciate it! And sorry if it seems like advertisement, I just want more feedback since my view counts sucks ass...

...But yeah, I'm trying to get better at the whole food/income thing. Anyone got any tips about recording audio and getting rid of the white noise?

Well firstly of course you need a decent microphone.

Then you need a decent sound program. If you haven't got anything yet use Audacity [http://audacity.sourceforge.net/].

This gives you a lot of stuff to mess around with, just give it a try and see what you can do.

 

[KeSlGamer]

I have a pretty good microphone from creative, so I don't think that's really the problem, but I'll try out Audacity and fiddle with it. Also, should I start putting in music/sound cues in my casts?

 

[KeSlGamer]

Oh man these videos are my best yet! Thanks guys for the input! Anymore critiques will be appreciated!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MYnebb8Hubk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1gYBAxYX3lc

 

[KeSlGamer]

New videos is up! New microphone is on the way too.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BQorEgUhP2Y

 

[KeSlGamer]

Go4SC2 #39 Quarterfinals Mardow vs cast

Game 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKEh3t972j4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aR7nJIhJdIA

Game 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F_xxwJgq4k8

Game 3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4hMKFyfTZI

 

[KeSlGamer]

Go4SC2 #39 Semifinals

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Isi9C-RxUo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CO6hxTQo2Ks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=swil9w8gLlc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E9dpMfcoMvY

 

[Da_Schwartz]

Don't you think your pushing it a bit now?