The internet just isn't fair when you live in one of the most remote cities in the Western world. You see awesome girls in videos like this all the time and then you inevitably realise that no matter where she lives there's about a 99.9% chance it's somewhere that you just can't afford to get to, so there's no point getting too excited.
I thought the "Female Girl Lady" thing was the funniest part of the video. Keep doing that, drive the point through people's skulls, the "there are no girls in the internet" crowd certainly deserve to be made to look like the dickheads that they are wherever possible. As for the rest I didn't really laugh much but you're so attractive and charismatic that I didn't care. The visuals look fine, rough but still good enough to portray the concept and that's all that matters. In fact I think if the green-screen work was too professional-looking it might actually appear too seamless and thus dilute the concept too much - you want people to know that there's a green-screen there after all because that's where the jokes are being derived from. The concept is good, snappier editing is all that's really needed. Don't labour the jokes too much, once we get enough information to get the joke that's all we need, edit any fluff and move straight on to the next bit. Doing lots of edits is a pain in the butt, and it can be hard to edit out bits of scenes when you've got an emotional investment in it because you spent hours making it look good, but the more you understand and apply editing, the better your result will look in the final product. Less is more, especially where humour is concerned.
That's all I really have to say except that you should keep making more of these.
