Thanks man, glad you liked it.Mr.Mattress said:I enjoyed it. Definitely a good contestant.
That's not a bad idea at all (He should also make them interactive like D&A's map)Dexiro said:Could do with a little more polishing up but I still really enjoyed it :3
My only gripe was that the timing of the jokes, their were like awkward pauses and some of the jokes jumped out of nowhere too fast.
I'd imagine after a few episodes you'd improve a lot though! Just needs practice :3
You should plan it out similar to the actual pokemon series, sketch out your own small pokemon list, a map that you can work from and stuff like that. Just for consistency.
Ha, I'm glad someone noticed those, I did try my best to make each item have a silly description.Eric the Orange said:Sandwich: not to be confused with Sandvich.
It funny make me laugh good.
I like the attention to detail of giving all the items little runny descriptions.
I'd love to actually release a card game based on this show, I used to play YuGiOh, Pokemon and a bit of Magic growing up, so it'd be awesome to make my own game. Also I tried to think of jokes that I've never seen done anywhere else, obviously there's going to be overlap, but trust me I have a lot of original joke ideas for subsequent episodes if I win.randommaster said:This is great! This could probably go on to inspire some really popular games and a CCG and maybe even a few movies.
Seriously, though, this was good, but I have to admit that I've seen most of the jokes before. The bicycle one was funny, though.
Yeah, the reason the timing is a little awkward on some of the jokes is that part of the way through production I had to switch voice actors for Justin, so things got a little messed up, if I get a chance to actually produce this series that wouldn't be a problem in the coming episodes. And, (as I said to randommaster) I'd love to expand upon the universe with maps and card games and a list of creatures, that sounds like a blast!Dexiro said:Could do with a little more polishing up but I still really enjoyed it :3
My only gripe was that the timing of the jokes, their were like awkward pauses and some of the jokes jumped out of nowhere too fast.
I'd imagine after a few episodes you'd improve a lot though! Just needs practice :3
You should plan it out similar to the actual pokemon series, sketch out your own small pokemon list, a map that you can work from and stuff like that. Just for consistency.
No worries, just kind of thinking (typing?) out loud. Looking forward to more episodes.Jimtopia said:Ha, I'm glad someone noticed those, I did try my best to make each item have a silly description.Eric the Orange said:Sandwich: not to be confused with Sandvich.
It funny make me laugh good.
I like the attention to detail of giving all the items little runny descriptions.
I'd love to actually release a card game based on this show, I used to play YuGiOh, Pokemon and a bit of Magic growing up, so it'd be awesome to make my own game. Also I tried to think of jokes that I've never seen done anywhere else, obviously there's going to be overlap, but trust me I have a lot of original joke ideas for subsequent episodes if I win.randommaster said:This is great! This could probably go on to inspire some really popular games and a CCG and maybe even a few movies.
Seriously, though, this was good, but I have to admit that I've seen most of the jokes before. The bicycle one was funny, though.
-Jim