What do you think when you read this?

[spottedhawk]

The bridge in the south is the most beautiful of them all, but it keeps a secret that scares us all. The V of November will show us all, the evil humans may posses. Come now, come here and I will let you see. The bridge with this evil fantasy...

 

[CM156_v1legacy]

The bridge in the south is the most beautiful of them all, but it keeps a secret that scares us all. The V of November will show us all, the evil humans may posses. Come now, come here and I will let you see. The bridge with this evil fantasy...

Sounds rather depressing to me. I think of the feeling of standing outside in the cold Autumn

 

[Ambi]

Rhymes nicely except for "possess", but maybe I'm reading it wrong, I woke up not long ago. What's the bridge in the South?

 

[SYSTEM-J]

The word "all" does tend to rhyme nicely with itself...

 

[Scarim Coral]

It's quite catchy so I like it. It pretty much sound like a perfect setting for a dark fantasy type of novel /comic/ story.

 

[godfist88]

it makes me think of crazy guys under bridges.

 

[Vicarious Vangaurd]

Terrorism. Guy Fawkes.

 

[SovietSecrets]

A bridge.

 

[Doclector]

For some reason, sounds almost like something that wouldn't be out of place in the Alan wake sequel. Which of course there will be one. There HAS to be.

Or...it sounds like it should be followed up by "so says mr Stewart!"

 

[emeraldrafael]

The bridge in the south is the most beautiful of them all, but it keeps a secret that scares us all. The V of November will show us all, the evil humans may posses. Come now, come here and I will let you see. The bridge with this evil fantasy...

Am I supposed to read it as the fifth of the Vee.

Thats all I can think of reading that.

 

[zehydra]

Terrorism. Guy Fawkes.

Yeah if you spell the 5th of November as V of November, it sounds like you're trying to make a reference to V for Vendetta

 

[L3m0n_L1m3]

I think it needs a guitar rift after it.

 

[Zykon TheLich]

Nothing that will allow me to write anything positive I'm afraid.

 

[Paksenarrion]

I think I'll need to see the GameFAQs Walkthrough for this poem. What level should I be when I cross that bridge?

 

[CrashBang]

...what is this?

 

[masher]

The word "all," was used way too freaking much.

 

[Kermi]

Sounds like a bunch of wank. Sorry, but it does. If you're trying to write poetry about something that's scary and evil, use the poem to make me feel like it's scary and evil. Don't just tell me it's scary and evil and call it a day.

 

[Berserker119]

I think it needs a guitar rift after it.

Pretty much. If you get someone good singing, these could be pretty decent lyrics.