RAKtheUndead said:
Fair critiques. In response:
1) The first few chapters of the story were written on a Fallout fan forum thread, post-by-post, and without the benefit of my team of editors and proofreaders. As such, there are more typos and similar in those chapters than I would like, but now that the story is available in multiple formats from multiple sources, and being translated into three different languages, I don't want to go back an make corrections that would result in a multitude of "versions" existing.
2) The story is intended in style and scope to be comparable to stories like The Lord of the Rings and Babylon 5. It was written as a serialized story. Trying to compare it in length to a novel is faulty. It is more correctly compared to a series of novels or a television miniseries.
The story is definitely not to everyone's tastes. Sorry that you didn't like the beginning.