Adventures in Ninja cookery (discontinued)

[The Iron Ninja]

Never!

Yes Ian Ronald Ninjana* join our humbuggy ways we have members such as me and maybe even you!

*I.Ron Ninja geddit?
Ok it's not very good but I felt like giving you a new nickname.

Oh goody, I do so love all the nicknames.
Why does no one else get nicknames?
What is it about my username that causes all these nicknames?

(Ultra something something, Eviljoe, Laughter, VG cats)

I don't think I ever said "You only get one." or anything. Anarchemitis is going to appear quite often. Allthough I'm not entirely sure what side of things Ultrajoe would be on.
Is [color=dark red]Eviljoe[/color] a seperate person that you could do battle with or would he be sharing the same body?

Yes... Yes I did make [color=Dark red]Eviljoe[/color] pink.

 

[Zemalac]

Well done. Though the dialogue in the second part was a little cliched. That and you spelled my name wrong in the post.

Hmmm... You're right. Why have I always thought of you as Zelmanac?

I'm not sure. Mixing up the letters is an honest mistake, but I have no idea where that "n" came from.

And you're not the only one with nicknames, but your name is very easy to make puns out of so you get it more often.

Right! Now that that's out of the way, time for more suggestions (as if you need more).

Something that occurred to me is that perhaps the pace of the story is going a bit faster than it should, due to the fact that so many cameos were requested. You've introduced at least two new characters every comic thus far, and while that's great from the perspective of people desperate for cameos it's not so good from a story-pacing perspective. My suggestion would be to slow it down just a little. That would mean that everyone would have to wait for longer to get a cameo, but I think the story would benefit.

 

[rottenbutter]

I don't think I ever said "You only get one." or anything. Anarchemitis is going to appear quite often. Allthough I'm not entirely sure what side of things Ultrajoe would be on.
Is [color=dark red]Eviljoe[/color] a seperate person that you could do battle with or would he be sharing the same body?

Yes... Yes I did make [color=Dark red]Eviljoe[/color] pink.

Making his name Pink is a good way to incur his wrath.

Meh, Eviljoe's wrath is nothing FeNinja can't handle. fish food carl and I have done far worse (oh, that was a fun day), and we each walked away with, nothing more than, a gun shot wound, to the head (which was pointless, since my skull is made of metal, and carl was so jacked up on UltraPunch, that his mind became a swirling vortex of chaotic randomness, causing the bullet, to transform into a penguin, roller skating down the Eiffel Tower).

 

[Singing Gremlin]

Well done. Though the dialogue in the second part was a little cliched. That and you spelled my name wrong in the post.

Hmmm... You're right. Why have I always thought of you as Zelmanac?

I'm not sure. Mixing up the letters is an honest mistake, but I have no idea where that "n" came from.

He's slowly corrupting it.

Zemalac
Zelmanac
Zel manac
Ze Manac
Ze maniac! Ze maniac will kill us all!

 

[The Iron Ninja]

Something that occurred to me is that perhaps the pace of the story is going a bit faster than it should, due to the fact that so many cameos were requested. You've introduced at least two new characters every comic thus far, and while that's great from the perspective of people desperate for cameos it's not so good from a story-pacing perspective. My suggestion would be to slow it down just a little. That would mean that everyone would have to wait for longer to get a cameo, but I think the story would benefit.

Yeah I should probably do that...

This was a sort of "Okay, I've figured out where I'm going with this" comic, so it's a bit jumbled. The next lot should hopefully work a bit better.

 

[Zemalac]

Well done. Though the dialogue in the second part was a little cliched. That and you spelled my name wrong in the post.

Hmmm... You're right. Why have I always thought of you as Zelmanac?

I'm not sure. Mixing up the letters is an honest mistake, but I have no idea where that "n" came from.

He's slowly corrupting it.

Zemalac
Zelmanac
Zel manac
Ze Manac
Ze maniac! Ze maniac will kill us all!

Hah! Quite true.

Something that occurred to me is that perhaps the pace of the story is going a bit faster than it should, due to the fact that so many cameos were requested. You've introduced at least two new characters every comic thus far, and while that's great from the perspective of people desperate for cameos it's not so good from a story-pacing perspective. My suggestion would be to slow it down just a little. That would mean that everyone would have to wait for longer to get a cameo, but I think the story would benefit.

Yeah I should probably do that...

This was a sort of "Okay, I've figured out where I'm going with this" comic, so it's a bit jumbled. The next lot should hopefully work a bit better.

So the first five were sort of "I want to do a webcomic but I'm not sure what about?" I've seen that before. You took a bit less time with it than most, too.

A good idea is to plan out several major events and work your way towards them. Come up with scraps of dialogue that you want to use at some point and some events that you want to happen, and then figure out what needs to occur in order for those to happen.

Them's my thoughts. Get the next comic out to generate more of 'em.

 

[boyitsme95]

I just got one of the cameos in the 4th comic!
The first man compares cutting the robed man to fish, so he probubly works with fish.
When you cut fish, you normaly cut it so you can cook and eat it. When you do, it becomes food.
The first man's name is Carl.
Fish Food Carl! That was a less hidden then it seemed, but I wasen't paying attention to it at the time of my first, second, third, or fourth readings, and subsequently missed it. Keep up the coma inducing awsomeness!

P.S. Still waiting on a Ninja and Gerald plush. I will make one myself, but a brand name one would be better.

 

[Radelaide]

I'm gonna say what I always say.

I've seen Webcomics that were better. Why can't your amateur work be as good as those. I'm a talentless hack who makes up for it by criticzing the work of others.

Jeez Indigo, back in your corner. It's just a bit of fun. PLUS, it's in paint. That gains a million points in my book.

 

[Ultrajoe]

Pink?

Just you wait. There will be vengeance.

I don't think I ever said "You only get one." or anything. Anarchemitis is going to appear quite often. Allthough I'm not entirely sure what side of things Ultrajoe would be on.
Is [color=dark red]Eviljoe[/color] a seperate person that you could do battle with or would he be sharing the same body?

I just thought it would be unfair to put me in again when others are waiting, but that sounds silly when i type it, it's not like your doing this with cameos in mind as the primary function over storytelling. And Ultrajoe is always good. Eviljoe is always Evil. Sometimes we just cover for one another.

 

[Spartan Bannana]

*Looks at Iron Ninja's post count and join date*
*looks at his own*
"What the hell?!?!"
Great comic as always Fe, love the new avi by the way

 

[The Iron Ninja]

Ultrajoe is always good. Eviljoe is always Evil. Sometimes we just cover for one another.

I'm still a little confused, do they share the same body? Could there be a battle between the two?

Actually... Even if Eviljoe is just a part of Ultrajoe's mind, there could still be an epic battle inside his head as they both vie for control.

Whichever one, I think I can probably turn it into a pretty awesome battle either way.

*Looks at Iron Ninja's post count and join date*
*looks at his own*
"What the hell?!?!"

It's not a competition.

I'm gonna say what I always say.

I've seen Webcomics that were better. Why can't your amateur work be as good as those. I'm a talentless hack who makes up for it by criticzing the work of others.

Jeez Indigo, back in your corner. It's just a bit of fun. PLUS, it's in paint. That gains a million points in my book.

Leave him be, I think that's about as close to kind words as I'm going to get from him.

 

[Ultrajoe]

Ultrajoe is always good. Eviljoe is always Evil. Sometimes we just cover for one another.

I'm still a little confused, do they share the same body? Could there be a battle between the two?

Actually... Even if Eviljoe is just a part of Ultrajoe's mind, there could still be an epic battle inside his head as they both vie for control.

I never put a definitive answer on that for a good reason, it means i can pick and choose whichever one i want. If you plan to use them, do whatever you please.

 

[Jamanticus]

Darn it- I can't think of any non-contrived cameo for a fractal to have in your comics, Iron Ninja....What about a talking cello? A talking fractal cello?

 

[The Iron Ninja]

Darn it- I can't think of any non-contrived cameo for a fractal to have in your comics, Iron Ninja....What about a talking cello? A talking fractal cello?

I figured I would do what I did for NewClassic's rant and put a fractal of sorts into the night sky as a nebula of sorts (which is somehow visible from earth)

I had actually planned on sneaking you into the last one, where it shows Anarchemitis's tower, but I sort of forgot.

 

[Hey Joe]

The plot like all thickens n' shit.

Nice work.

 

[Galletea]

Much as the Bah Humbug thing amuses me, I still think you'd look better with holly on it.

 

[Piemaster]

I didn't know that Anarchemitis had a beard...

 

[Zemalac]

I didn't know that Anarchemitis had a beard...

Fool! Every evil mastermind with even a chance of taking over the world has an excellent goatee! It's in the rules or something.

 

[rottenbutter]

Much as the Bah Humbug thing amuses me, I still think you'd look better with holly on it.

Or at least use the awesome ghost one, Fanboy made for you. I'd hate to see it go waste.

 

[The Iron Ninja]

I didn't know that Anarchemitis had a beard...

What Zelmanac [sup]Damnit![/sup] Zemalac said.

Plus this

It's hard to see when it's avatar sized, until I saw that I always thought of the beard as part of his neck.

Much as the Bah Humbug thing amuses me, I still think you'd look better with holly on it.

Or at least use the awesome ghost one, Fanboy made for you. I'd hate to see it go waste.

No holly.

And well done to Fanboy, he did a good job with the ghosts, and he must have put a bit of effort into it, but I like to use my own things.