Here I edited a bit of the bio to add onto his beliefs also a few things else.
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Name: Narcissus Emmerich
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Caste/Skills: Narcissus is a casteless born and raised. He has endured the whip of his masters countless times but working for long hours at a time has given him remarkable stamina. His speed is very much unmatched and he is one of the best "moon runners" in all of the criminal underground. Narcussus is also extremely keen, but he still requires a bit of honing in. He can hold himself up in a fight but not for long and relies on quick hits rather than hard punches. That type of guerrilla fighting has been his strongest attribute but he can also cook, hunt, and do basic medicine. On his right boot, he has a concealed shank and Narcissus is quite deadly with it.
Appearance: Narcissus stands at 6'4 but thin and wiry. He barely has any fat on him and his muscles are more compact than bulgy. He has a tanned complexion with multiple scars running across his back from the lashings. Narcissus has a perpetual grin on his face like he knows a deep dark secret that only he knows. He has a short head of auburn hair and dull blue eyes. He wears nothing but rags and cheap clothing.
Biography: Narcissus is the eldest child to the refugee parents that raise him and his 3 brothers and sisters. Early on the father was involved with the wrong people and had accumulated a debt that had to be paid. He offered up his first born son to the criminals as a runner and they agreed but the son would forever be in their service.
10 years later and Narcissus has yet to forgive his father but he has attained many skills in the underground. He worked under the sun by day and ran "moon dust" by night. Narcissus would often get a small cut of moon dust for his efforts and he is no stranger to its affects. He also attained many connections in the underground, hearing the secrets of others and sometimes the nobles above in hushed whispers. In the criminal underground, Narcissus came into contact with an individual that barely survived a Spider Spirit's attack. He babbled on and on about the pain but what intrigued Narcissus the most was the spirit's affinity to those that are the most downtrodden. He was raised to not believe in such things and often was told to rely one's self rather than some spirit but the Spider spirit kept him interested. He too wanted a better life and with this survivor telling him that the Spider spirit is out there and able to do such thing, he's kept his mind open to the possibility.
During the invasion, much of his home was ablaze and his parents dead because of the beasts that ravaged the caverns. He harnessed his anger into a calculated trap that some claim the spirits of the Spider took hold of him. First he called upon the beasts, drawing them to him so that they would chase him instead of the others. It worked and he led them to dead ends where they were ambushed by both soldiers and thugs. He did this several times throughout the battle, noticeably thinning the monster's ranks and nearly resulting in his death. But he used his knowledge of the caverns effectively and his sheer speed to turn the tide of the battle in the caverns saving the lives of his fellow casteless.
But in truth, the Spider spirit did inhabit his body during the invasion where he was told of the consequences. When no one was looking he secretly attacked isolated mortals and ate them in his possessed state. The spirit left Narcissus at the end of the invasion and ironically the man who he talked about the spirit helped Narcissus and told him what he did. He vowed to keep his mouth shut about the subject but he made sure to warn Narcissus about the repercussions.
Personality: A sense of deviancy was put throughout his life and as a result Narcissus is quite child-like in his actions. Despite his name, Narcissus is also quite caring of his younger brothers and sisters. He gives all he can to them and he is a good big brother. When pushed into a corner, Narcissus will use whatever he can to get out of which he uses his brains and his speed. He also knows better than to run his mouth as doing so has resulted in a good whipping.
Extras: He has two sisters and one brother. Vox is the second eldest brother at 16, Raleigh is the eldest sister at 14, and Fenrah is the youngest sister at 10.
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Caste/Skills: Narcissus is a casteless born and raised. He has endured the whip of his masters countless times but working for long hours at a time has given him remarkable stamina. His speed is very much unmatched and he is one of the best "moon runners" in all of the criminal underground. Narcussus is also extremely keen, but he still requires a bit of honing in. He can hold himself up in a fight but not for long and relies on quick hits rather than hard punches. That type of guerrilla fighting has been his strongest attribute but he can also cook, hunt, and do basic medicine. On his right boot, he has a concealed shank and Narcissus is quite deadly with it.
Appearance: Narcissus stands at 6'4 but thin and wiry. He barely has any fat on him and his muscles are more compact than bulgy. He has a tanned complexion with multiple scars running across his back from the lashings. Narcissus has a perpetual grin on his face like he knows a deep dark secret that only he knows. He has a short head of auburn hair and dull blue eyes. He wears nothing but rags and cheap clothing.
Biography: Narcissus is the eldest child to the refugee parents that raise him and his 3 brothers and sisters. Early on the father was involved with the wrong people and had accumulated a debt that had to be paid. He offered up his first born son to the criminals as a runner and they agreed but the son would forever be in their service.
10 years later and Narcissus has yet to forgive his father but he has attained many skills in the underground. He worked under the sun by day and ran "moon dust" by night. Narcissus would often get a small cut of moon dust for his efforts and he is no stranger to its affects. He also attained many connections in the underground, hearing the secrets of others and sometimes the nobles above in hushed whispers. In the criminal underground, Narcissus came into contact with an individual that barely survived a Spider Spirit's attack. He babbled on and on about the pain but what intrigued Narcissus the most was the spirit's affinity to those that are the most downtrodden. He was raised to not believe in such things and often was told to rely one's self rather than some spirit but the Spider spirit kept him interested. He too wanted a better life and with this survivor telling him that the Spider spirit is out there and able to do such thing, he's kept his mind open to the possibility.
During the invasion, much of his home was ablaze and his parents dead because of the beasts that ravaged the caverns. He harnessed his anger into a calculated trap that some claim the spirits of the Spider took hold of him. First he called upon the beasts, drawing them to him so that they would chase him instead of the others. It worked and he led them to dead ends where they were ambushed by both soldiers and thugs. He did this several times throughout the battle, noticeably thinning the monster's ranks and nearly resulting in his death. But he used his knowledge of the caverns effectively and his sheer speed to turn the tide of the battle in the caverns saving the lives of his fellow casteless.
But in truth, the Spider spirit did inhabit his body during the invasion where he was told of the consequences. When no one was looking he secretly attacked isolated mortals and ate them in his possessed state. The spirit left Narcissus at the end of the invasion and ironically the man who he talked about the spirit helped Narcissus and told him what he did. He vowed to keep his mouth shut about the subject but he made sure to warn Narcissus about the repercussions.
Personality: A sense of deviancy was put throughout his life and as a result Narcissus is quite child-like in his actions. Despite his name, Narcissus is also quite caring of his younger brothers and sisters. He gives all he can to them and he is a good big brother. When pushed into a corner, Narcissus will use whatever he can to get out of which he uses his brains and his speed. He also knows better than to run his mouth as doing so has resulted in a good whipping.
Extras: He has two sisters and one brother. Vox is the second eldest brother at 16, Raleigh is the eldest sister at 14, and Fenrah is the youngest sister at 10.
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