steamednotfried post=9.75189.862276 said:
in reply to mark; firstly, i appreciate the effort you have gone through to express your views and it is always interesting to hear a detailed response to something i have written. I must point out first that i am not really attempting to make an entertaining play, nor to make the characters identifyable. The point of having characters was so that i could say things which were not necassarily 100% correct without claiming it to be correct. I struggled to express these ideas before because in adressing the reader from the position of an intelectual authority i could not allow myself to put foward non-sound ideas.
As I said, your writing needs work, it is good to experiment with form but you have just substituted on flawed form for another. You didn't allow yourself to present non-sound ideas to the reader here, any that were brought up were dismissed at face value, the additional problem of them not all being non-sound arguments is also a problem.
Three notes for you on this front:
1. Do not presume to maintain any sort of authority over your reader, you are serving them by teaching them, if you want to make a successful essay it helps to respect your audience and understand they are as invested and informed as you.
2. One of the key responsibilities of an author is to engage his reader. Through humanity, knowledge, entertainment, controversy, whatever, saying that this is not a concern marks you as a poor writer and by extension a poor scholar (have you said this?)
3. If you can't fully flush out the reasoning behind what you consider unsound thinking on a particular subject, you are not yet knowledgeable enough in it to write a scholarly paper on the subject. If you are aware of the argument, present it in full and then use evidence to demonstrate your conclusion that it is unsound or else you should not present it at all
Secondly: 'No real world consequences'? Does that mean that football isn't a game because you can get injured or even get fitter? rediculous.
oh ye gods... srsly? Because I've never heard this one before.
Fact is the snapped pelvis does not fall into the rule set of football. I am sure said player would argue the game ended at the injury and what was to follow was no game at all. By way of example: I am playing a game of Operation, when the battery surges throwing a piece of plastic into my eyes blinding me to the curtains that just caught on fire. Real life consequences, does Operation stop being a game?
But what about the LBP editor? It would certainly be a game if the goal was to create the best level out of a number of contestents. In that case what has changed? only that tinly little goal which is set. And thus considering the similarity between LBP with and without a goal, do they not warrant a shared medium title?
You're being glib, firstly, those rules do not exist in the LBP editor, and a contest based on the LBP editor would not inherently make the editor a game (though the contest would be a game) Yes you could turn the editor into a game by adding rules and objectives, but come on, Remember that Simpsons episode where Bart had to lick envelopes?
I'm not just making this stuff up, this is game theory 101. Go to Gamasutra, man, they have tons of essays on just this. I'd recommend giving "Rules of Play" by Salen and Zimmerman a go through, one of my favorite game theory books out there, focuses in on games as opposed to economics and social structures.