I found myself loving most of it yet despising parts, my main objection was to the weird transition at 3:13. To me it was completely out of place and just broke the flow. And when you're trying to do action, even more so for action and comedy, flow is vital to make it feel right. Maybe there is something I am missing about the scene, maybe a reference to something (printer scene from office space did spring to mind for some reason), my other objection is to the sound effects, to me they're far too pure and need to be filtered to take the artificial edge off of them. Also at around 1.11 Mikey looks right at the camera, I found it highly noticeable and kinda ruined that bit for me.
I know I'm being pretty critical but that's because I see the potential for a great thing in this, and most of what annoys me seems to lie in the editing process and hence even if the whole series is pre-recorded can be tweaked to perfection. Aside from those points I really enjoyed it, it was much better to me on the second watch.