Breaking Rules.

[FolloweroftheApoetic]

Should I print these out even though they are extremely poorly constructed? I like sounding really stupid because I find it more honest. But really you know people are going to think I not worth the time if I just print this out. I mean I could hand them out with a tin foil hat on and that might get my message across better. Or maybe the town would eat me alive. I'd like to do some of that good old freedom of expression or whatever... some one tell me am I over doing it.

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OFFERING TRADE EDUCATION EARLIER
It is a possibility that by teaching trades earlier or having them presented as options earlier would allow us the freedom to enjoy an automated world without the risks that come from dependance on such a thing if it was done while also keeping reserves of analog technologies.

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I'm going to start off this post by saying I'm not capitalist or a communist or an anarchist. I believe that people could live off self sustaining green houses in their homes and that the ability to maintain those homes and temperate climates with in them could be held up by making the technologies and the means of maintaining it learn-able through gamification and handing out labtops with easy to understand guides on how to do so.
Sunshine and Rainbows.
That said I think we could use crowd funding to provide the means to create shelter and provide for people in this age of abundance. It would still mean working through the means of capitalism that can at points... well the video above. But I think that real change is caused by people taking actions. It said that the most memorable quote I've heard about Furgison, racial divides and what not distracting us from truly caring for each other, comes from a woman who said I dont think that this will change anything but its good to just give it attention.
If crowd funding is used as a method to incentivize truest freedom freedom that is not tie the opportunities you have in life too the amount of money you've acquired or at least making it less so then I'd say we've found a way to make capitalism work. Imagine crowd funding some quality free on going education and economic transportation for everyone. Thats all I have to say.
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if we had troli systems and cars Eco-freindly cars some of which don't drive themselves it'd probably be pretty cool Also solar flairs can wipe out the microchip that starts your car circa some time ago. Shit sucks man.
I dont hate you for driving a car.
Careful actions, peace, and change though non-violent means
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really should I print this?

 

[Lilani]

What are you trying to accomplish with this? Spread the word about crowdfunding?

 

[FolloweroftheApoetic]

Lol you are right.
Here is something a bit better

What are you trying to accomplish with this? Spread the word about crowdfunding?

I'm going to start off this post by saying I'm not capitalist or a communist or an anarchist. I'm not trying to run for mayor. I'm not I believe that people could live off self sustaining green houses in their homes and that the ability to maintain those homes and temperate climates with in them could be held up by making the technologies and the means of maintaining it learn-able through gamification and handing out labtops with easy to understand guides on how to do so.
Sunshine and Rainbows.
That said I think we could use crowd funding to provide the means to create shelter and provide for people in this age of abundance. It would still mean working through the means of capitalism that can at points... well the video above. But I think that real change is caused by people taking actions. It said that the most memorable quote I've heard about Furgison, racial divides and what not distracting us from truely caring for each other, comes from a woman who said I dont think that this will change anything but its good to just give it attention.
If croud funding is used as a method to incentize truest freedom freedom that is not tie the oprotunities you have in life too the amount of money you've aquired or atleast making it less so then I'd say we've found a way to make capitalism work. Imagine croud funding some quality free on going education and economic transportation for everyone. Thats all I have to say.Except I have to say more.

I mean its in our comercials and its in the cartoons and Tv shows. I mean I suppose if you have a show where the characters always talk about how much they love pizza and you can actually make your own pizza or going out for pizza wouldnt just keep money trickled down for five seconds it'd be great. And this is what it does to you. You tie power to money and things get monopolized and automation drys jobs up and you look at yourself having worked at wallmart getting the petty change from the Waltons that hier next to no one, and you know it'd be better if they hired everyone and just took over the world, and then you spend it at walmart. I mean a large portion of it no but shit man it shouldnt be that way. oh my fuck.

I'd like to make in part with others through a means of expression a world where people arn't ruled by fear. You know its pretty easy for a bad apple to get a hateful message acrost in a croud that supposed to gather for one reason. A croud that gathers for one reason in the face of an opposition whos motive is to both maintain the status quo and stop death from insueing is destine to fail once violence occurs that enough being the justification for retaliation makes that set up very hard to work with. A protest is just for attention what is that. We'd need to take actions not like violent action because then its just over we'd have brothers killing brothers over ideals and what the fuck is that. Oh my god whats happening in my country.

 

[Lilani]

Lol you are right.
Here is something a bit better

I'm going to start off this post by saying I'm not capitalist or a communist or an anarchist. I'm not trying to run for mayor. I'm not I believe that people could live off self sustaining green houses in their homes and that the ability to maintain those homes and temperate climates with in them could be held up by making the technologies and the means of maintaining it learn-able through gamification and handing out labtops with easy to understand guides on how to do so.
Sunshine and Rainbows.
That said I think we could use crowd funding to provide the means to create shelter and provide for people in this age of abundance. It would still mean working through the means of capitalism that can at points... well the video above. But I think that real change is caused by people taking actions. It said that the most memorable quote I've heard about Furgison, racial divides and what not distracting us from truely caring for each other, comes from a woman who said I dont think that this will change anything but its good to just give it attention.
If croud funding is used as a method to incentize truest freedom freedom that is not tie the oprotunities you have in life too the amount of money you've aquired or atleast making it less so then I'd say we've found a way to make capitalism work. Imagine croud funding some quality free on going education and economic transportation for everyone. Thats all I have to say.Except I have to say more.

I mean its in our comercials and its in the cartoons and Tv shows. I mean I suppose if you have a show where the characters always talk about how much they love pizza and you can actually make your own pizza or going out for pizza wouldnt just keep money trickled down for five seconds it'd be great. And this is what it does to you. You tie power to money and things get monopolized and automation drys jobs up and you look at yourself having worked at wallmart getting the petty change from the Waltons that hier next to no one, and you know it'd be better if they hired everyone and just took over the world, and then you spend it at walmart. I mean a large portion of it no but shit man it shouldnt be that way. oh my fuck.

I'd like to make in part with others through a means of expression a world where people arn't ruled by fear. You know its pretty easy for a bad apple to get a hateful message acrost in a croud that supposed to gather for one reason. A croud that gathers for one reason in the face of an opposition whos motive is to both maintain the status quo and stop death from insueing is destine to fail once violence occurs that enough being the justification for retaliation makes that set up very hard to work with. A protest is just for attention what is that. We'd need to take actions not like violent action because then its just over we'd have brothers killing brothers over ideals and what the fuck is that. Oh my god whats happening in my country.

Okay, this is not what I was asking, lol.

What I meant was, what are you doing this for? Are you going to just hand them out to people, or post them around town? If so, why do you call it a "post" and why do you say "the video above" when obviously a printed piece of paper is not going to have a video above it.

Anyway, I do graphic design and advertising for a living, and I'm afraid no matter what you do with these they're not going to get anybody's attention. Honestly you lost me at the first sentence. This isn't a poster, this is a manifesto. People don't pick up manifestos and read them, unless they think they're going to find them entertaining and want to see what they can mock. Posters and fliers are meant to grab your attention and pique your interest in something else. "BLUE'S BAR: WHERE THE SWING IS AT." Something like that. Something short that people can read in an instant and from a distance, and will make them interested and seek it out. A much less effective poster advertising a blue's bar would be "At the Blue's Bar, we've been servicing the downtown scene for the last 50 years. Every Friday we host bands and offer a wide range of music, entertainment, and food. We are dedicated to providing the most authentic..." Blah blah blah blah blah. Nobody wants to read that, and nobody will.

99% of that whole thing is unnecessary. Your point is "Crowdfunding can provide the homeless shelters." Posters are not things you use to persuade people, you use them to get their interest and seek out more information. You don't put ALL of the information on the poster, because that's the fastest way to lose their interest. On top of that, all of your grammar and spelling errors will quickly lose you any respect they might have had for you. Sounding honest is good, but sounding stupid is not the key to sounding honest. Sounding honest means sounding like you know the subject and you know why you are dedicated to it. I'm afraid this poster doesn't demonstrate either of these to be true. You don't seem to know about the other homeless shelters or organizations which are already trying to do exactly this, and you haven't shown you yourself are dedicated because you seem to be asking others to start this crowdfunding campaign for you.

The crowdfunding is not a bad idea, but you can't just ask people to do all the legwork. Do you just expect people to read this and be so inspired that THEY will start it all up, without YOU having to lift a finger? I'm sorry, but that's not a call to action anyone's going to answer. If anyone is really so dedicated to the plight of the homeless that they would start such a thing, they're already involved in something else.

And that's another thing. There are already lots of charities and organizations in existence dedicated to housing the homeless or needy. Habitat for Humanity, or any of your local homeless shelters. If you don't want to actually start anything new, why not just try to promote them? Do you even know anything about your local homeless shelters?

And lastly, if you are going to post these or hand them out around town, be sure you know your town's regulations and ordinances on such things. Most communities don't allow people to just solicit things anywhere, there are only certain public places you can do it. And same think with posting them--you can't just post things anywhere, and you'll get a citation if you're caught posting something where things are not allowed to be posted.

You can print it up if you want, you're perfectly free to do anything you want. But I'm afraid nobody is going to seriously give anything like this the time of day. It sounds like you really care about something but have no idea where to get started. If you want to help the homeless, check out Habitat for Humanity or your local homeless shelters. Learn about who the homeless really are and what they really need. Then get with others, get this kickstarter planned and organized and started, and THEN ask people to help crowdfund it. Nobody is going to just do that for you.