I'd love to see more of this. The rhythm should be more like -Mr.Mattress said:I full heartedly agree. I hope he honestly tries to make and publish this as a book. If he doesn't, I will be sad face.floppylobster said:He hasn't really go the writing down but the pictures are very cool.
This too.s0m3th1ng said:This wins the internet for the month.
You're spot on with the rhythm, but on the other hand rhyming "be" with "Kenobi" just doesn't seem very Suessian. However, rhyming "know be" with "Kenobi" is. That rhythm of that part bothered me too, but I couldn't come up with a good solution.floppylobster said:I'd love to see more of this. The rhythm should be more like -
A presence I sense
which I know must be near
but where lurks this presence?
not here or not there!
This presence I sense
I feel it must be,
that old wily Jedi,
Obi-Wan Kenobi
Phantom Menace did that WAY before this.Digikid said:Congratulations....you have just DESTROYED Star Wars...and not in a good way either. Yuck.
Really? I'm from the UK and I was raised on this shit. I think it's pure gold.Verlander said:You don't really get Dr Seuss in the UK, at least not when I was young, so although I know what it is, I can't be amazed by this. I feel like I should be amazed however.
I disagree strongly. IMO it fits brilliantly and adds a certain charm and joy to the Star Wars universe.SextusMaximus said:I HIGHLY dislike it. I'm not the biggest Star Wars fan (I like it to some degree, though), but this is just awful.
IMO.
Ditto, feel like im 5 all over again...Suicideking said:That has to be the best thing I have seen all day.
Loved that line. I'll bet he looks like the Grinch under that mask!Bloodstain said:And he grumbled off, that Darthly Vader.
How awesome is that!
I think you jest,Verlander said:You don't really get Dr Seuss in the UK, at least not when I was young, so although I know what it is, I can't be amazed by this. I feel like I should be amazed however.