Hey Professor...your nephew's kinda a Dick.
Yeah..I know..
xDD I love this show! Keep it up guys!
Yeah..I know..
xDD I love this show! Keep it up guys!
I hate it when people say that to people sure it's a valid point but people also have the right to critise something they didn't like, if you shut down the minute you hear critism then theres no way to learn from what others didn't like maybe listening to some valid comments would help the show grow and smooth out some rough edges.Jojo1378 said:Now, this is from TunTun himself, If you don't like it, don't watch it, there is no obligation to watch everything on The Escapist.Internet Kraken said:Well now this show has another problem. It seems like it can't do anything right. Honest question; what was supposed to be funny about that battle? Cause I couldn't find the joke. With the other episodes I can at least see what joke you're trying to make, albeit failing horribly at. But here you don't even seem to parody the source material. The battle just felt like a bad Pokemon/Yugioh battle with no humor in it whatsoever.
From what I vaguely recall about both of those TV shows, this battle was pretty close to one of those in terms of dialogue. Which is good, since you're supposed to be parodying it. But you don't do that. You just have the battle play out as if watching poorly animated blobs due stupid stuff is supposed to be entertaining. You need to do something with it.
I really hope you start seeing the problem with this, because I seriously can't see this lasting more than two seasons tops before being swiftly forgotten. Hell I doubt it'll even make it that far.
Yeah, last episode's comments...and the episode before that. On the other hand, there is absolutely no reason for this video not to be posted as often as possible.ProtoChimp said:Yep... sorry it's gotta be done hope I wasn't ninja'dInevitableFate said:... wait a minute... THAT'S SHADYVOX!
*recognition moment*
He never said anything about a human hospital.....just a recovery center and even in the Pokemon world the Centers are for BOTH.Quiet Stranger said:Very good, but I thought there were no Human hospitals in the world of Creature Caster Masters.
There is so much wrong with this... you don't know how shows work. Chad is a character with few episodes, like the professor, and they need to be characterized quickly, secondly, *Justin* and Tun-tun are charecterized! He is even blantedly told by Chad that his determination is to be admired, he also lost and fainted after his first battle, meaning he is a little eccentric as well, *while* parodying the industries he set out to in an obviously funny way! Tun-Tun is a smart-as and is hilarious in being so. I laughed, many others laughed. For this show to last, it can't be all funny, it has to have story as well, and this guy is good at starting a story.Internet Kraken said:Well now this show has another problem. It seems like it can't do anything right. Honest question; what was supposed to be funny about that battle? Cause I couldn't find the joke. With the other episodes I can at least see what joke you're trying to make, albeit failing horribly at. But here you don't even seem to parody the source material. The battle just felt like a bad Pokemon/Yugioh battle with no humor in it whatsoever.
From what I vaguely recall about both of those TV shows, this battle was pretty close to one of those in terms of dialogue. Which is good, since you're supposed to be parodying it. But you don't do that. You just have the battle play out as if watching poorly animated blobs do stupid stuff is supposed to be entertaining. You need to do something with it.
I really hope you start seeing the problem with this, because I seriously can't see this lasting more than two seasons tops before being swiftly forgotten. Hell I doubt it'll even make it that far.
I'm going to criticize this show as much I like. Hopefully he'll take some of this feedback and do something with it, as unlikely as that is.Jojo1378 said:Now, this is from TunTun himself, If you don't like it, don't watch it, there is no obligation to watch everything on The Escapist.
EDIT: Oh yeah, I feel the need to point out that I still haven't seen any amount of characterization for Tun Tun and the main character (can't remember his name). This is probably one of your biggest problems right now. You need to give these two some defining personality traits. If we're going to be following them around there needs to be something that makes them endearing to us as characters, or they'll get old really fast. Think about it; Chad has a much deeper personality than both of them combined. Oh, and I'll give you some credit here; the rival being someone who is obsessed with impressing the main character isn't something I've seen done before. There, that's one decent thing. Now please try and give your main characters something to make them likable.
You see, that response never holds any water for me.Jojo1378 said:Now, this is from TunTun himself, If you don't like it, don't watch it, there is no obligation to watch everything on The Escapist.
And how is he supposed to "do it better". He watched it, didn't like it, said why he didn't like it, and said ways for it to improve. No the show isn't for everybody, but that doesn't mean we should just brush off any form of criticism.willbailes said:There is so much wrong with this... you don't know how shows work. Chad is a character with few episodes, like the professor, and they need to be characterized quickly, secondly, *Justin* and Tun-tun are charecterized! He is even blantedly told by Chad that his determination is to be admired, he also lost and fainted after his first battle, meaning he is a little eccentric as well, *while* parodying the industries he set out to in an obviously funny way! Tun-Tun is a smart-as and is hilarious in being so. I laughed, many others laughed. For this show to last, it can't be all funny, it has to have story as well, and this guy is good at starting a story.
I like it that you love a show so much to spend this much time writing a bad critique of it, but if your going to criticize a show, do it better.
This is a terrible example of characterization. That last joke reflects absolutely nothing about Justin's personality. It was a throw away gag poking fun at blacking out in video games. It has no bearing on his character. Second, even if it most of his character is still undefined. I only have a vague idea about who he is, what his interested and goals are, what he likes and dislikes, etc. I know basically nothing about this character.willbailes said:There is so much wrong with this... you don't know how shows work. Chad is a character with few episodes, like the professor, and they need to be characterized quickly, secondly, *Justin* and Tun-tun are charecterized! He is even blantedly told by Chad that his determination is to be admired, he also lost and fainted after his first battle, meaning he is a little eccentric as well, *while* parodying the industries he set out to in an obviously funny way!
...how so? Seriously, I really can't recall anything to make this seem like a valid character trait for tun-tun.Tun-Tun is a smart-as and is hilarious in being so.
Wait, this episode was supposed to have a good story? It was supposed to make me feel more for the characters? If it was, it failed miserably. There was basically no characterization here.I laughed, many others laughed. For this show to last, it can't be all funny, it has to have story as well, and this guy is good at starting a story.
Since you are obviously intent on ignoring the obvious flaws with this show inf avor of pretending it's awesome, I have a simple challenge for you. If you really believes Justin and Tun-Tun are as well characterized as you claim, it should be easy. Write a paragraph describing Tun=Tun and Justin without referring to how they look and what they're trying to do. Describe them purely based on their personality.I like it that you love a show so much to spend this much time writing a bad critique of it, but if your going to criticize a show, do it better.
It stops being criticism when you start making assumptions like we're all "pretending its awesome." At that point you're just being a dick.Internet Kraken said:Since you are obviously intent on ignoring the obvious flaws with this show inf avor of pretending it's awesome, I have a simple challenge for you. If you really believes Justin and Tun-Tun are as well characterized as you claim, it should be easy. Write a paragraph describing Tun=Tun and Justin without referring to how they look and what they're trying to do. Describe them purely based on their personality.
Then again, maybe not. I honestly can't tell what you're trying to achieve beyond letting people know you really really REALLY don't like this show. The fact that others in the community are commenting on your behavior should be an indicator that its not appreciated at this point. You're perfectly entitled to your opinion, but the cruelty is unnecessary and uncalled for.Internet Kraken said:I can't figure out what's more depressing; the fact that you think this is good, the fact that other people think this is good, or the fact that the Escapist staff think this is worth paying for.
You want one paragraph each, or can I combine them?Internet Kraken said:Since you are obviously intent on ignoring the obvious flaws with this show inf avor of pretending it's awesome, I have a simple challenge for you. If you really believes Justin and Tun-Tun are as well characterized as you claim, it should be easy. Write a paragraph describing Tun=Tun and Justin without referring to how they look and what they're trying to do. Describe them purely based on their personality.