The Random One said:
PLabrozzi said:
[snip] ...some of the jokes and such it comes off like you were just trying too hard. it doesn't have the same wit or delivery like de-rez (most similar for comparison).
...are you serious?
I guess it's true what they say: there's no accounting for taste. If you traded this and de-rez' places in your post you'd have exactly my opinion.
Well I won't insult your taste as you felt so inclined to do to mine, but de-rez aside, I honestly felt like they were trying to force the humor down my throat. Like I said, the idea for this show is awesome and combined with their work with the special effects leaves me wanting more.
But the humor comes off as a bunch of really quick gaming pop culture puns all smashed together, some of which are really clever but all of which feel forced because the timing just isn't right. A good joke comes from a little build up and a good punch line. these two guys who look like they each ate a bowl of sugar a piece then start yalping "preculiee ... arity .... preculiarity!!" it's like why? what did that add? You know, its got this real long monotone monologue by Mario talking about how all the users are so shit, lets go get them, then it cuts to these two guys who are all zany and off the walls for no reason at all.
its like if you've ever been to a comedy club or open mic night. you'll see a difference between people who have been doing it a while and know the right timing to drop the jokes. then you see somebody who maybe its their first time come up and they are nervous and so they just starting throwing out joke after joke real fast, and they end up getting mushed together and its not funny. the greats will all tell you its about timing. i think these guys have potential but they need to self-edit, take out a few of the puns for some more well timed build up and jokes. i'd smile at some of them and before i could even wipe the expression off my face they were already done with 2 more puns.
its just too quick, too contrived. and to top it all off, they are just starting and they are already proclaiming to be possibly the best new series on escapist? lets take it one step at a time, alright? I really would like this to get better, but they need to just chill out a little bit. as it stands they are like a flock of chickens running around with their heads cut off who've all just been pumped up with steroids, adrenaline & crack and also just finished reading the latest "101 Silly Gaming Jokes!" and can't wait to tell a few.