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Captain Pirate

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"Iron!" The chief miner, Eurn, told Balinothan excitedly on his report.
"Good! Keep mining, and bring the iron up, we'll store it in a pile over there until we can find some way of smelting it." Balinothan replied, pointing at a so far unused part of the cave.

While the mining all continued, Eurn urging his men forward to discover Ulurn, more Iron, or something new altogether, construction of the buildings was speeding ahead.
The Inn was finished, and the two-story building next door was rapidly following suit.
Work had begun on two identical buildings with two stories, and the first stage of their colonisation was advancing at a good pace.
But work had been going on for too long, Balinothan decided.
Tonight, they rested and celebrated, with a hearty drink!
Elgurth bought the kegs in with five dwarves helping him, as Balinothan rallied the people round.
They all took a responsible drink; some got relatively drunk, but their were strict measures in place to make sure they did not get so drunk as to risk damaging their current work.
Even the slaves were invited, having become treated as equals by now, considering most of them were Human, Gnomish or Dwarven, the Dwarves took a liking to them.
Around a campfire made from an empty keg, many of the dwarves and all the slaves slept calmly.

The next morning, work restarted in earnest, with the second building complete, work had begun on a fifth now, and the third and fourth were coming along nicely.
Balinothan's forces were quite spread out now, with the three construction teams and the miners, they wanted to exit the cave and do a brief exploration and mapping expedition, so Balinothan, Elgurth, and Eurn the Architect went out for an hour, and mapped the few hundred metres circumference around the cave.

They returned, by which time the third building had been finished, and they personally assisted the fourth and fifth buildings' creation.
Belongings and other items were brought off the Agun and into the buildings.
The Inn was furbished, and 5 dwarves were living on one story each of the three buildings, housing a good thirty men.
Balinothan and Elgurth, along with their honour guard, were keeping their generous reputation and slept in tents once again.
 

KronosTalon

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The next morning after a good nights rest Dak'Zul woke from his slumber and walked out of his tent, looking upon the trolls that were already up and setting various things up. He stretched and walked to a fire to warm himself, and then called out"Vin Woulda gather everyone mon?". He knew Vin was within ear shot and waited as the trolls began coming to the fire where he was, waiting for his words.
"Alrigh Brothas and sistas! Today we start building our colony!" He said as a loud cheer echoed through the camp."First tings first though, We gotta clear a sizeable patch around here, and set up some protection mon. I want bout half a ya on that, While I want five of yah to scout, get a feel for da area, and let me know whats around. Den da rest a ya get to work collectin wood and cleaning up after da clearers, gathering the wood dey leave. Any questions?" He said, and as none came up, he waved them on."Then get to it mah brothas!" He said with a cheer as he threw his arms up in the air and they cheered.
 

XThecommander

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Vecha looked at the current situation, you had a plan to use magic to destroy the trolls easily, but you needed to have those mages taken care of first. Instead, you had another plan come to your mind, you looked above and saw the fact that the mountain had some perfect places you could cause a landslide. The disadvantage was the fact that it would seal you in the cave, but you just needed them to hit the right spots and run in, even if a few got in, they would not be able to take down the automatons easily.

It was decided, you would have the mountain shot into to cause a rockslide, this would atleast kill some of the trolls, and the size of the rock slide would make sure they wouldn't get in, by the looks of it, the big one was strong, but he didn't have the might to lift up any boulder larger than him. Even if it came to the conclusion that they would start to dig through, you would shoot them through the openings they made, making sure none of them would get through, unless the big one decided to have his mages assist in deflecting, but you doubted they would react so quick, since in the current situation they had the element of distance.

I only have a few questions
A: Are the trolls native to this area or are they from another land (native i'm guessing)

B: Are the troll mages able to deflect any sort of projectile, such as an arrow or crossbow bolt?

C: Is this their entire group of trolls? In other words, are they nomads, who get by through robbing other people.

D: Are you going to do this to everyone in the RP?

E: Will I be able to dig out of the cavern after this event. (Dig out of the mountain to another location, or find a cave network.)

F: Alliances, in the RP, which civilizations are allied, and which are enemies (This one is important).
 

Captain Pirate

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Could you please stop writing in the second person? All these 'Yous' get confusing for me and make it annoying to read because I don't know which character you mean. Also, it was mentioned by Bluedemon:
Bluedemon322 said:
I have a few problems with your post.

First, it is written in the second person, please write in third or first person.
I know it's not really my place, as I'm not the GM, to say this, but it just was getting annoying, and it had been brought up before..
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The Elves' boats touched land on a large beach that led into a seemingly endless boreal forest. The trees grew larger and larger farther back in the forest.

The General pointed at the canopy of the deeper area of the forest.

"Those ancient trees, he shouted to the settlers, that where we shall make our village! It will not be an easy journey, miles of travel, beasts, evil natives, they all stand in our way but once we reach there we shall establish our foothold and create a colony unmatched by any of the other kingdoms of this world!"

He turned to Captain Arcanscape, his second in command.

"Haul the ships ashore, we shall turn them into temporary lodgings, have the pirates drag them." Ever since they had been forced to join the elves the pirates had been forced to do the most difficult and tiring work, they were little more than slaves.

The ships were brought ashore and then striped down until they were nothing but a hull, to be flipped upsidedown and used as longhouses. They extra wood was tied up and made ready to be brought along, teams of pirates alongside a few settlers boosted the boats onto their shoulders and with the general at it's head the long train of Elves proceeded into the forest.