If you could rewrite a game script?

[mrhappyface]

I've noticed that more and more games are becoming more and more like movies in the sense that it's becoming more and more recognized as a serious and a potentially high budget medium. But like high budget movies, more money does not always equal good quality.
One prevalent problem is poor dialogue and script. For example, the dialogue of Gears of War would be more understandable if the COGS were middle schoolers who just discovered the wonder of swear words. If I could rewrite it, then I would like to make the COGS into gung ho soldiers, but human and relatable. The massive testosterone filled man children with more armor than a Abram Tank aren't relatable.
What game's script would you like to rewrite?

 

[Riobux]

I wouldn't, mainly because I'd probably mess it up more.

However, if I could, I'd want to edit the game script of Jericho. I'd want to edit everything about Jericho.

 

[Vrex360]

I would rewrite the script of Halo 3 to feature the elites a lot more, their perspective and their backstory up until now was the more interesting part of the Halo games and it was a shame to be so greatly reduced.

 

[mrhappyface]

I'd definitely rewrite the last half of Fahrenheit (Indigo Prophecy). So far that was the storyline that annoyed me the most, because it had potential.

Heavy Rain did improve though from Quantic Dream's previous games.

 

[Jack and Calumon]

I would edit the start of Kingdom Hearts II so it sucked less at the start.

Calumon: Who says Lamers? Really?

 

[mrhappyface]

I would edit the start of Kingdom Hearts II so it sucked less at the start.

Calumon: Who says Lamers? Really?

"Is that a Joke? Cause I'm not Laughing!" I hate Roxas and his one liners so much.

 

[mrhappyface]

I also wish that I would rewrite Dead Space's script. Issac's reaction to the sudden turn of events seemed more appropriate for a guy that left his umbrella on the bus than someone who found out that the love of his life is dead.

 

[Metalchair]

probably splinter cell conviction and make it way longer... or any new hype filled game these days, theyre all so short lately.

 

[c0lefalk]

Modern Warfare 2

 

[Tripodicus]

I'd Rewrite Dead Rising,
Carlito Is An Ass.

 

[Soulgaunt]

Borderlands, so that it'd have comedy that's, you know, funny.

 

[DarthVanitas]

Pokemon. It's badly in need of a decent narrative.

 

[Melion]

Heavy Rain, so I can fill in the plotholes.

 

[Cody211282]

I would finish writing KOTOR 2 and Neverwinter Nights 2 and give them a proper ending and would also tie up some of the plot holes and lose ends.

 

[wildwind1290]

Even though it's a major plot point, I would definitely re-write the script of Valkyria Chronicles so that Isara doesn't get shot. Or at least survives.

 

[Shirokurou]

I'd rewrite FFXII and have Ashe take the Occuria's offer and become the game's antagonist...