D_987 said:
SavingPrincess said:
From zero to hero in seven days; I recently went from having no consoles as of this time last week, to now being the proud owner of an Xbox 360 and a PlayStation 3 (with a possible [color=sky blue]Nintendo Wii on the way). Now I am totally inundated with top-tier 'AAA' titles:
- Final Fantasy XIII
Heavy Rain
Metal Gear Solid 4: Guns of the Patriots
Fable II
Blue Dragon
Lost Odyssey
Now let me pause for a second... if you even remotely noticed that I placed all the
PlayStation 3 titles before the [color=sky blue]
Xbox 360[/color] titles, then you might suffer from what some would call a case of "Fanboy-ism."[/color]
Um...what?
So according to you if you're interested in games enough, and perceptive enough, to notice the way you placed the games you may be a fanboy? That's a pretty idiotic comment to make - it's how you
feel about that list, not that you noticed the list - it's a pretty patronizing start to the article, not helped by the line "let me pause for a second".
Perhaps my tongue-in-cheek-ness was a bit too subtle. My apologies. I was really referring ot the "OMG U put the PS3 titles first! U Hate Xbox" type of mentality and poking on that, I hope the majority of people got it and didn't see it as a personal attack, I'm sorry that you did. Sorry if you felt I was patronizing you; it's the internet, you'll get over it I'm sure.
You said:
This is a horrible affliction to have in this day and age of videogaming, but has been around for quite a long time. Brand Loyalty has been around for ages...
I'm pretty sure everyone knows what brand loyalty and fanboy-ism are, there's no need to spell it out for the reader.
Again, I'm sorry I made you read too much. I generally do not like to assume, and I realize that some people that read what I write might be of a younger age (hence why I try not to swear) so while they may understand what a fanboy is, they might not be of a purchasing age, so they may not understand the concept of brand-loyalty in that sense. Again, I'm sorry for stuffing your eyes with useless words.
You said:
When I told some internet peoples about my upcoming purchase of a [color=sky blue]Playstation 3 (before I knew the Xbox 360 would be coming into my possession), I was remorselessly blasted for choosing that particular console. [/color]
Is this a real conversation or something you made up - I assume by the "them" it indicates a group of people and therefore this conversation is made up - but I've never seen anyone ever say anything like that - if they did they were probably trolling, sure fanboys are idiots, but this really gives a poor idea to the reader o exactly the kind of fanboy you are talking about - it's idiotic to the point of useless.
It's real, but I decided to leave name and gender out of the equation, which rules out him or her, and leaves... well... them. "They" just didn't look right. I'm sure there are a lot of people that have said things you've never
seen before. It wasn't "trolling" as it was a conversation that was had in person without the use of keyboard or microphone. I'm sorry you feel I'm an idiot as it's the second time you've called something I brought up idiotic, and if you feel personal offense to something I write, please send me a PM so I can speak to it.
you said:
I've come to the conclusion, as a lot have already, that this type of mentality is a result of justification of the acquisition of a product or service that is financially beyond their means, forcing them to choose only one particular product or service rather than have the entire gambit available to them.
Again, this is true, but it's something that a large group of forum-goers will have known for some time; this whole paragraph, whilst obviously designed to set up the next point, is far to long for what it actually is - you go off on a mini-tangent a number of times and fill the reader with information they probably don't care to read (the line about the Dreamcast being an example)
I'm flattered, if my school teachers back in the day gave this much constructive criticism then maybe I wouldn't tangentalize as much as I do and would have saved you the inundation of useless information!
You said:
People do need to realize however that these are the major (read: only) differences between systems and bring themselves to a point where they can start judging the games based off the games and not the system it's on.
That point being this, but it's something that could have been said in less words, and a point that's ot going to get through to it's target audience - you think the fanboy in your conversation earlier is going to read this and suddenly change their ways?
Who knows? Maybe? Maybe this will be read by the people who are susceptible to this kind of behavior and cause them to be more conscious of it? I don't know... I promise I wrote this up for everyone but you, I'm sorry you had to read it!
You said:
After reading articles like...
Two more paragraphs that ultimately serve to give the reader nothing bar context, after all it just rehashes earlier points and reads more like filler, especially the whole "how to choose a console" section.
If you're looking for succinct, effective, targeted, concise and lean writing, maybe the internet isn't for you. I appreciate the criticism, but at this point the criticism is becoming very meta in that it's falling victim to the same problems it's criticizing (as in, becoming nothing more than filler).
You said:
Hopefully this one post on this one single message board can put an end to "Fanboy-ism" in the world once and for all.
... yes I am that powerful.
A nice joke at the end, but I'm still at a loss as to what this article was actually about and who you were trying to engage with it. Fanboys? Well as stated earlier they aren't going to read this, everyone else? Well they aren't apart of this and will no doubt agree with what you're saying anyway. It just seems a bit unnecessary.
Perhaps it is totally unnecessary? All it does is kill time at work for me and really isn't "targeted" at anyone; it falls more under than landmine thoery than the laser-guided ballistic missile one. Maybe the article (flattered for calling it that by the way, I usually just say "post" or "write up" as no one is paying me to write) is there for the sake of it's own existence. Why are any of us here? Why do we write if not for some sense of immortalization of our own ramblings by having them housed on the cloud servers of the world to be discovered by alien races long after the apocalpyse reigns down it's unforgiving fires on the land? Why do we learn languages or own recording devices if not for some sense of justification of our own state of being?
As much as I appreciate the critique, as I can tell you genuinely care, it IS just an internet forum. I'd be interested in reading anything you've done that you're proud of if you want to link it up or PM me.
Cheers!