Introduction for my game.

[CaesarsSalad]

I'm sending in my game for the european game awards. I have to write a vision document for that but I'm not a native english speaker.
After what feels like an hour I came up with an introduction but I don't know if is sounds right:

"Defy death! Defy gravity! Defy everything but the kitchen sink!"

Do you think this is that any good? Is "Everything but the kitchen sink" applicable to abstract things like video game challenges?

 

[EightGaugeHippo]

Move death and gravity around.
For example:
Defy Gravity, Defy Death, Defy Everthing...

or following on from that:

Defty Life, Defy Death...

[Edit]
I like the kitchen sink part, its cooky. =P

 

[Paksenarrion]

I like the original ordering, actually. It speaks to the alphabetist in me. What is your game about?

 

[Judgement101]

What game are you sending in? It sounds like a mario-style platformer where you play as something that doesn't enjoy sinks.

 

[Bobic]

I'm not sure if it is entirely applicable but still, it sounds catchy. If i were you i'd leave it for a while. If nothing pops into your head before you send it off then go with it. Sometimes sleeping on it really can help.

 

[procyonlotor]

I think the tag line should definitely be "Defy anything but the kitchen sink".

 

[CaesarsSalad]

Here's what I have so far:

"Defy death! Defy gravity! Defy any explanation!
Nature has certainly gifted you with an odd feature. Fling yourself in the air, hover above the ground, stick to the ceiling; all with the power of your mind. And try to come up with an idea of how to reach the level exit? with the power of your mind!"

The game is a sidescrolling platformer where you can use some kind of force to push or attract certain crystals.
If you want you can download it here: http://affenitaet.wordpress.com/
It seems like the newest version is not online anymore. But the rapidshare link still works. I will fix all links later this night.