Caramel Frappe said:
Agreed, I can see how overlapping one tragedy to another can break people especially if they're as young as this. However, the case of the little boy dying with the car hitting him makes me question something... was no one around to stop them from running outside the school? Usually schools least in America have fences all around and quite a bit of supervision.
Well, it's supposed to be set in Japan, which has notoriously unsafe road traffic.
Caramel Frappe said:
Another thing, was there no one to comfort or help Hanako? Not the boy's parents, none of the school's teachers, no friends? What about those who are looking after Hanako? Also what of Lilly? Why does her friendship not toll or matter to Hanako as time progresses when Hisao is around? Yeah he had the heart attack and she freaked but to send her to the insane institution[...]
Well, no one stopped her bullying before. If the adults somehow thought she was responsible for a 'normal' boy's death, they might well encourage bullying her.
That has happened. Not in that exact way, mind.
Caramel Frappe said:
[...]thus Hanako wanting to kill people along with other crazy matters? This just seems like it need more depth or reasoning before I accept it to be possible.
Whoa Woah, hang on. Beta!Hanako does not want to kill people, she just feels responsible for killing them.
Caramel Frappe said:
As true as that is... I dislike the concept. Personally, this should only be for the bad ending or least an alternative manner. I don't want to play a KS game I get so deeply attached to or towards a character for that matter just so I (if not Hisao too) gets screwed. Realism can have something like that happen, but to make it so dramatic where there's not even one good thing coming out of the ending for Hanako, you might as well call both her endings bad and crappy.
You could make a case that the Good Ending is only good because one person dies, not two. Because Hanako would
totally commit suicide if she directly killed Hisao.
Caramel Frappe said:
Other issue I see with this factor is Lilly's importance. She is a great deal to Hanako, I assume. Why does Hisao's heart attack cause her to go down this road and doesn't ever recover? How come Hisao allows this to harm his personality so badly he is dead inside? What does Lilly do to help anyone out at this point in both parties? To me, it seems like the message is, "Hanako is a girl you just can't save, and though you love her... she's going to die thanks to your dumb mistake." ... Jeez ..
To answer those in order; She deems herself responable for the death of two potental lovers and her family. One friend will do zilch.
Two: Hisao isn't ever portrayed as dead inside, i'm farely sure.
Three: "What could she do?" is a better question at that point, honestly.
Four: Well, maybe my theme was more right than I joked. "No matter what you do, bad things happen."
Caramel Frappe said:
Must say, I have to disagree on this. A lot of animes including some Dating Sim games go for the psychotic road for a character. I could name and link you to three of them if you'd like, which deals with a girl having a troubled past and snaps into insanity only for things to fall flat. Here are the links.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/School_Days_%28visual_novel%29
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yume_Miru_Kusuri:_A_Drug_That_Makes_You_Dream
Also, I disagree because she won't be likable at all to those who've adored and loved her character in the original.
Well, there's also the Shrinking Violet Wallflower character too. I imagine a hypothetical Finished!Beta!KS would deconstruct that particular trope too.
And yeah, the whole unlikeable thing is probably a given.
Caramel Frappe said:
.. Oh, I just realized that too lol. But least Hanako in the original just subsided into sadness instead of killing herself. It's more of a 'no one understands me, please leave' then the 'time to kill myself because screw life!' moment.
That's a little subversive of her motivations. Screwing the life that killed two potential lovers and her family, plus put her on the path on constant bullying is kinda reasonable.
Caramel Frappe said:
I'm at least glad they gave you the option to not make love to Hanako, because sadly in the original Hisao does her no matter what when she was opening up to him in an emotional manner *facepalm*. Still, Hanako to me is nothing of insane. She's just misunderstood and everything in the original is fine as it is. Not against this demo, nor will get on people for liking it but I don't approve of the demo's methods in trying to shock us especially with the endings especially how in the good you lose Hanako anyways.
I don't "Approve" of it ether, but I at least understand why it could exist.