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steeple

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which brings me to my next question... [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8P6g8y1gpo]
 

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chuck norris is the past! [http://www.cracked.com/article_15895_the-5-most-badass-presidents-all-time_p5.html]
 

Thundero13

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Hey I know, lets all read that poem Thunder posted a while back >.> And then lets all try to figure out what it's about and then we can tell him what we think of it!
<spoiler=Rock Bottom>I?m lying at the bottom of the ocean
I fell into a puddle a few years ago and ended up here
On the way down I thought I saw a few lights
But then they turned out to be anglerfish
I suppose now that I?m here I can?t sink further
Of course, I?ve thought that before
Right before the ground opened up and pulled me deeper
The moment I fell in, a mermaid appeared
She offered to carry me away to another land
I don?t understand myself why I didn?t agree
But now, I see no other option
I?ve flirted with this mermaid more then usual lately
And I talked to the piranha more before it bit me
So it is now that I worry
I don?t know why I hate her so
But I do, and I want desperately to face impossible odds and swim back up
Rather then to let her carry me away
This is definitely rock bottom, the anglerfish are gnawing at my limp body
There is no way out, I must call the mermaid now
The anglerfish shall be sad that they shan?t have a body to eat
But this is my only chance
I?m sorry anglerfish, goodbye
 

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@Thundero13: Wow, I certainly agree with this guy, also i'd like to add that he's the sexiest thing alive!
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And he has a post count that probably makes people with OCD orgasm, not that i'd know, he would though
>.>
<.<
 

mParadox

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Thundero13 said:
<spoiler=Rock Bottom>I?m lying at the bottom of the ocean
I fell into a puddle a few years ago and ended up here
On the way down I thought I saw a few lights
But then they turned out to be anglerfish
I suppose now that I?m here I can?t sink further
Of course, I?ve thought that before
Right before the ground opened up and pulled me deeper
The moment I fell in, a mermaid appeared
She offered to carry me away to another land
I don?t understand myself why I didn?t agree
But now, I see no other option
I?ve flirted with this mermaid more then usual lately
And I talked to the piranha more before it bit me
So it is now that I worry
I don?t know why I hate her so
But I do, and I want desperately to face impossible odds and swim back up
Rather then to let her carry me away
This is definitely rock bottom, the anglerfish are gnawing at my limp body
There is no way out, I must call the mermaid now
The anglerfish shall be sad that they shan?t have a body to eat
But this is my only chance
I?m sorry anglerfish, goodbye
That's one evil anglerfish I have to say. Nice read. Not beautiful mind you. Good prose but improvement required. At times, lines seem out of place. But that depends on the manner of reading rather than the words used in the lines itself. So, good show mate.
 

Thundero13

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@mParadox:
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YOU ARE THE ANGLERFISH! YOU'RE ALL ANGLERFISH! WHY MUST YOU ALL BE ANGLERFISH?! AAAAAAAAAAH!
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But yes, I didn't even bother to structure that one so I guess it wouldn't be as nice to read, glad you liked it a bit anyway =)