Sorry guys, I just felt the pace in this was painful. There is too much dead space leading to the punch, which is just a quick "you guys are wasting money and therefore idiots" reference. If I want a quick "you dumbass" chuckle, I can go to http://www.latfh.com/ I just don't think this was a good topic/combination.
You guys are capable of much better. I can't tell you how many times I've watched through the original CH videos laughing my ass off. Don't get me wrong, much love, keep doing what you do.
-BT
EDIT: I didn't realize Tally wrote this one. I remember her talking about "The Trouble with Scribbles" (which kicks ass) in a podcast and being used to pacing short stories more. It did seem rather dependent on Halo for jokes.