Manga Mashup #2: Prepare to be Schooled.

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[HEADING=1]Manga Mashup #2: Prepare to be Schooled.[/HEADING]

Oh gods, I should SHOOT MYSELF IN THE FOOT for staying away from writing for this long. In fact, I apologize. I went and made myself a schedule, but various [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.96204] odd [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/362.63498] matters [http://twitter.com/] had distracted me. I also have encountered two things that will mess with my schedule of reviews: my 360 finally succumbed to the dreaded RROD, and it turns out that I WILL have a PS2 to mess with regardless of my location later this year.

But enough rambling for the moment: There will be room for that later. For now: reviews!

[HEADING=2]Love Hin-Wait, I mean Mahou Sensei Negima![/HEADING]

I came into this one feeling very wary, as the man behind Negima is Ken Akumatsu. You might remember him as the same guy who did Love Hina. For those of you who've never read Love Hina, it was a harem manga: a type of manga which contains one central character with several surrounding love interests that the main character has to choose from. In the case of Love Hina, the protagonist was a moronic and perverted college dropout (albeit one with good intentions), and he was surrounded by a variety of manipulative, sadistic, and generally PSYCHOTIC women. The reason I bring Akamatsu's previous work up so much is that at the beginning, Negima feels exactly like LH: with a few small differences.


You see, Negima's main character, Negi Springfield, is all of 10 years old. He's a wizard who's gradated from the Magic Academy (with full honors), and has been sent to Japan to teach a bunch of high school girls English. Normally this would seem to be an innocent, cutesy story about growing up and the teacher-student relationship, right?

Not with Akamatsu at the helm. The manga quickly strides into Love Hina territory: the first girl that Negi meets (Asuna) is the same exact psycho that LH's protagonist met at the start of his adventures. Things don't get much better in the first volume of the manga: it strives to be nothing more than fan service. In the very first chapter, Negi lets out a mighty sneeze, and since he's a amateur wind mage, this sneeze blows off all of Asuna's clothes (except the undergarments). The rest of the first volume more of the same: setting the backstory and making Asuna get naked due to Negi's magical mess-ups, which is a pity, because most readers not looking for Love Hina harem zaniness will likely be driven away fairly quickly by the manga's start.


Thankfully, Negima manages to actually develop some personality of its own in the second volume, and things get far better as time progresses. The whole thing feels much more like an interesting combination of a magic-based battle manga and a good harem manga thrown in a mixer once the latter volumes are reached. Granted, the first two are completely alienating to non-fans of fan service, but if you struggle through that, interesting relationships are formed. One "negative" thing to note is that Negima has a habit of following harem tropes religiously (the fascination with bath scenes is irksome at times). The plot also has some generic elements to it (Negi wants to find his missing dad, BIG SUPRISE), but it still manages to be interesting by revealing neat backstory info as time goes on, mainly through his father's associates.


Something that I must praise is that regardless of the insane number of characters, most of them seem to have unique personalities and quirks. Sure, some of their basics are copies of LH characters, but somehow they've been adapted in such a way that they still fit into Negima's world without too much trouble. Another good thing is character development: the starting crew is a bit shallow at first, but thankfully the entire cast is made a whole lot more interesting after time goes on (especially Asuna, who thankfully manages to break out of the psycho mold that her character was cast from). I didn't give a crap about most of the people early on, and was relatively bored with the by-the-numbers plot that Negima started out with, but once things got more into Battle-Manga mode, and the people in it started acting less like carboard cutouts and more like human beings, I found myself becoming very interested.

All in all, I'd recommend you check Mahou Sensei Negima out a little to see if it suits your tastes. Regardless of the occasional bit of fan service stupidity, the manga forges itself a deep story and a interesting set of inter-character relationships. If nothing else, the manga is really long... so it'll kill a few afternoons worth of time.

[HEADING=2]And now... Kodomo no Jikan. Loli ahoy![/HEADING]

...I'm gonna give this to ya straight: LOLI STUFF CREEPS ME OUT AT TIMES.

For the uneducated, loli refers to a lolita complex, which occurs when two people of drastically different ages form a romantic relationship. How different is drastically different? Well, in this manga it's the difference between a freshly graduated teacher from college, and a 3rd grade girl who seems to know a awful lot about stuff she really shouldn't.

I'm going to explain my dislike of this manga right off the bat: it REVELS in being over the top. This kid (and her two accomplices) do all sorts of insanely sexualized things... for instance, they openly mock the teacher's virginity. Honestly, I had a harder time reading this than I did Aki-Sora: that should give you a general idea of how perverted this manga gets sometimes.

The whole thing is destroyed even further by the fact that while some of the base concepts show some promise, or even actual depth, the way that the author executes them leads this manga to a tragic failure. I was really intruiged in the ideas that Kodomo no Jikan tries vigorously to point towards (sibling love, the relationships between teachers and students, et cetera), but the woman (yes, a woman wrote this) in charge just keeps walking all over his own attempts to be deep or compelling. Instead, the whole thing is devoted almost solely to being perverted, ridiculous revelations (the teacher THINKS that he's actually fallen for one of the girls, and then takes a few comics to realize: Hey! This is how a father feels for his kids!), and writing that makes you feel meh at best, and filthy at its worst.


It just feels so unnecessary when you consider that the point of the manga could also have been made with a more mature cast of characters. 3rd-graders were not really needed for this, and it only serves to be generally disturbing and distracts the reader from the message of the manga.

My verdict? Don't read it. If you don't live in Japan, and prefer to buy manga, this isn't an issue. Why? Well, the author decided that it wouldn't sell to a non-Japanese audience. For once, I actually agree with this sentiment: especially since the author wanted to rename the manga Nymphet for the English release. That just sounds like a train wreck set up and ready to go... someone call Jack Thompson!
[HEADING=3]Editor's Notes![/HEADING]

Once again, sorry that it's taken me so long to get around to this. Also, sorry that this isn't the next Mashup that I claimed that I'd do... I had a severe case of writer's block for the first one on the list :D

My next review will likely be the first Dynasty Warriors: Gundam, seeing as I FINALLY got around to beating it just before my 360 bricked.

There are also several other things I've been working on besides reviews though: I just haven't posted them as of yet. There is a special project that I basically spent a week on (no details for you yet, hehehe), but I will tell you that I have another project I've been messing with: I want to write a piece about how horror movies have become abyssal in terms of quality lately...

Also interesting is a board game that I was recently exposed to: ZOMBIES! I'll be writing a review on that ASAP, as it's some really good stuff.

I'll likely post a review of Deja Vu (for the NES!) that I made once the current Review Wars is over... till then though, it stays locked in Microsoft Word. I'm compelled to release the things that I type in order, which is another reason why this took so long for me to get around to doing.

And for some reason, the images hate me. Why? You worked before... this has led me to substitute others that aren't as funny. Grrr.

And as a final note, I wrote this all at three in morning, and edited it until now! Whoo for no sleep I suppose...

Manga Mashup #1: Attack of the A's [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.111313]
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Max Payne [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.110027#1897580]
Indigo Prophecy [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.108202#1817369]
WarCraft 3 [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.107685]
Fallout 3 [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.105151#1683250]
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Hourou Musuko and After School Nightmare
Sekirei and Kanokon
Hellsing and Gantz
Alive-The Final Evolution and Alive!
Biomeat: Nectar and Parasyte
The Breaker and History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi
ID and Reborn!

And after that? Who the hell knows? Tell me, ya jerks!
 

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It's 5:30 in the morning here, and I'm waaaay too scatter-brained and tired to read all of this right now, but I'm going to bookmark this and get back to it after I've had some sleep, 'kay?

EDIT: Back! And now for my two cents!

I've heard good things about Negima, and other than The Tenchi series, I've never really experienced any harem anime/manga. That said, I was one the fence about this one, but now that I know how the story starts and builds, I'll definitely give it a look.

As for the loli?

...Eh, no.

No, no, no.

Even if I were straight, it wouldn't interest me in the slightest. I tend to lose interest when something is seriously trying to be overly sexual. Throw kids into the mix, and you've lost me completely.

All in all, I've gotta say I enjoyed this review, it was very nicely written and explained just enough to be interesting without spoiling. Good show!
 

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Wait wait...the main character from the first manga you reviewed is a 10 year old?

A 10 year old that is a wizard...that teaches english in a high school in Japan and the girls of that same School want to ride his "Staff of Penatration +69"?

Ish...told you not to review 360 games. Now you pay the price for not hearing me! ^^
 

scotth266

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oliveira8 said:
Wait wait...the main character from the first manga you reviewed is a 10 year old?

A 10 year old that is a wizard...that teaches english in a high school in Japan and the girls of that same School want to ride his "Staff of Penatration +69"?

Ish...told you not to review 360 games. Now you pay the price for not hearing me! ^^
Hey now... not fair :D

Though I love that Staff comment...
 

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scotth266 said:
oliveira8 said:
Wait wait...the main character from the first manga you reviewed is a 10 year old?

A 10 year old that is a wizard...that teaches english in a high school in Japan and the girls of that same School want to ride his "Staff of Penatration +69"?

Ish...told you not to review 360 games. Now you pay the price for not hearing me! ^^
Hey now... not fair :D

Though I love that Staff comment...
Thats what you get for not hearing me...and not do Jade Empire.
 

scotth266

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oliveira8 said:
scotth266 said:
oliveira8 said:
Wait wait...the main character from the first manga you reviewed is a 10 year old?

A 10 year old that is a wizard...that teaches english in a high school in Japan and the girls of that same School want to ride his "Staff of Penatration +69"?

Ish...told you not to review 360 games. Now you pay the price for not hearing me! ^^
Hey now... not fair :D

Though I love that Staff comment...
Thats what you get for not hearing me...and not do Jade Empire.
I'm honestly suprised that you weren't more puzzled by the second choice to review, but whatever :D

I know, I'm GUILTY AS SIN for not doing JE. You know what? I'm gonna get that started today or tommorow, or it'll never get done...
 

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scotth266 said:
Go read the OP if you want to know what this says
I've actually been meaning to get around to Negima! and such. I might have to put it higher on the list so I get to it sooner.

Now, Kodomo no Jikan I actually enjoyed (with severe reservations). It's ecchi to the extreme, and can get really funny, but, yeah, it does get really, really, REALLY, creepy at times. Especially the anime, which I have only gotton through 1 episode because I can't bring myself to watch this without feeling really dirty.

Also, the author and artist is Kaworu Watashiya. She (yes, the creator of Kodomo no Jikan is a woman, surprisingly enough), actually had deals to have it translated into english, but then it was cancled at the last minute after most of the translation had taken place because someone relaized that this wouldn't fly anywhere but Japan.
 

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Mstrswrd said:
I've actually been meaning to get around to Negima! and such. I might have to put it higher on the list so I get to it sooner.

Now, Kodomo no Jikan I actually enjoyed (with severe reservations). It's ecchi to the extreme, and can get really funny, but, yeah, it does get really, really, REALLY, creepy at times. Especially the anime, which I have only gotton through 1 episodes because I can't bring myself to watch this without feeling really dirty.

Also, the author and artist is Kaworu Watashiya. She (yes, the creator of Kodomo no Jikan is a woman, surprisingly enough), actually had deals to have it translated into english, but then it was cancled at the last minute after most of the translation had taken place because someone relaized that this wouldn't fly anywhere but Japan.
I goofed on the gender of the manga-ka: my bad. I'll fix it up where I can see it.

Glad to know that you thought I was right about Jikan showing good ideas that get buried by the creepy factor.
 

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SharPhoe said:
All in all, I've gotta say I enjoyed this review, it was very nicely written and explained just enough to be interesting without spoiling. Good show!
Thanks! I'll keep posting more of these. I was worried that I didn't put enough details on the story in, but you've appeased me.

I have a question for everyone though: do you like the format I've used? I tried to seperate the two reviews and my editor's notes via h2 and h3 tags.
 

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Right, this is a bit of a late response to this, but I have to comment about Negima!. Yeah, it started out as just another harem manga, and I was honestly expecting another twelve volumes of "Love Hina with magic", but the later chapters have gotten to the point where the fanservice is near gone, and it instead has a very complex plot with a unique setting. It's quite different from what I was expecting, although Ken Akamatsu's style has noticeably matured and evolved over his different series' (AI Love You, Love Hina, and Negima!). So I would say, if you don't like the beginning because of the basic plot and fanservice focus, stick with it a bit more. At least up til the School Festival arc. That's when it REALLY gets good.
 

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We've already talked about Negima elsewhere, so I don't have much to add (and since this was apparently four months ago, that might not be too bad), but...Negima?!

I've actually been kinda curious about Kodomo no Jikan for a while. Loli stuff usually leaves me pretty cold, too, but that's less due to the aesthetic than the typical accompanying vapidness. Sad to say, your short blurb on it kinda increased my interest, since it sounds disturbingly funny...
 

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I do love negima, just because it's from the POV of a twelve year old that doesn't constantly think about being surrounded by women/girls/crazy witches with demon puppets

but yeah I enjoyed reading the manga a lot
I also liked an AMV on youtube with the show and "kiss the girl" from the Little Mermaid
funny and relevant
 

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The Aussie Gamer said:
Well, you gotta point. Audiences rarely want feel disturbed, something these lads forgot in Nymphet...
How do you explain horror movie franchises, then?
 

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NeutralDrow said:
The Aussie Gamer said:
Well, you gotta point. Audiences rarely want feel disturbed, something these lads forgot in Nymphet...
How do you explain horror movie franchises, then?
I thought those were the audience that wanted to be scared shite-less for the thrill of it. Not those who want to feel dirty the rest of their lives... Oh
 

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Do Blade of the Immortal and/or Gantz (Last review I wrote was for Berserk, and I can't be arsed to do them....yet) and you get free cookies from me for as long as I can remember you did a review of either one of those.
 

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if u find this series interesting, i would recommend u follow the manga, rather than the anime
 

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Ala Alba said:
if u find this series interesting, i would recommend u follow the manga, rather than the anime
He does. That's why the thread title is "manga mashup," and why he talks about the manga (with one irrelevant picture from Negima?!). Not that I disagree.

Nice avatar, by the way. That was an awesome moment...