MGG=REVIEWS-HITMAN:BLOOD MONEY (XBOX360)

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Gigantor

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I've always wanted to meet Keats: I think yours is the more feasible ambition. Just take some time and think about what you write, no-one's asking you to be too prolific. And I mean this very nicely, but try and study some grammar in the meantime. People will forgive a lot of bad things in a review if the grammar's good and it's well written, but it's a lot harder to get people to take notice of a review full of typos and badly placed apostrophes, even if there's some good ideas in there.
 

swift tongued

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better? yes, but still the spelling hurts my soul! Also, I disagree that Hitman is the only game that lets you customize how you kill a target, take Oblivion for example, your charecter can be customized in so many ways and each new trick can be utilized in deadly effeective ways, if you join the dark brother hood even getting in the same room as your target is a plethora of options, just kill everyone, or be one with the shadows, taking only the target, I always just played mages guild though, summon a skeleton into my target's room and lock the doors ^.^
 

PurpleRain

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Complements to 'Someone.' You can see that 'Someone' has really improved on your reviews. But we still have no idea how much this 'Someone' did. How much he/she wrote; or did he just proof read it and make it undestandable? Did you tell him/her what to write or what? I can tell the difference between the article and your normal posts. Your spelling is like finger nails to the blackboard. Sorry, but no kudos for you. You should start to write reviews at least when you get to highschool. For a grade 7 review this is probably amazing, but not in the 'internet world.' Learn the english language. I failed terribly in high school but still know how to write because of what I was taught. Write the next review once you found out what discourses are.
 

Larenxis

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I don't get why everyone is complimenting this review. Even with another editor it has flaws of grammar and spelling, and the writing is stale. Yeah, it's more informative and less gobsmackingly presented than previous efforts, but it's only reached 'average', definitely not 'good'. I'd like something to have commas in the right places, an understanding of 'their' vs. 'there', and some adjectives before it wins my praise.
 

PurpleRain

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Larenxis said:
I don't get why everyone is complimenting this review. Even with another editor it has flaws of grammar and spelling, and the writing is stale. Yeah, it's more informative and less gobsmackingly presented than previous efforts, but it's only reached 'average', definitely not 'good'. I'd like something to have commas in the right places, an understanding of 'their' vs. 'there', and some adjectives before it wins my praise.
Exactly. This review is still crap by any standards. Comap this to an actual review and it smacks you in the face.
 

alexhayter86

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Relax, the kids only 12.

Seriously, check out his profile.

The real issue is this: what is a 12 year old doing on internet forums when he should be out playing rugby in the park with sweaters for goalposts, drinking koolaid, drawing his own comics, playing with toy guns or watching WWE on the couch with his poppa.
 

PurpleRain

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MGG=REVIEWS said:
if you want to watch one of my vids go to
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=Yevh0DluzBU
I watched two minutes and gave up. At least talk about everything you're doing. I feel sorry for flaming a kid but come on. At least practise or edit what you're doing. Also I hate people who say 'Random' alot.
 

JimboG

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"The url contained a malformed video id."

Oh dear, how very fitting...

I Don't have much to say about the review, as I found Hitman to be very boring. However, I can, at the very least, understand the review. It's as though someone has taken a machete to an overgrown bush*. You can get to the core of the review without wading through too many mistakes.

* I'm not sure how, use your imagination.
 

MGG=REVIEWS

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remember how terrible my reviews were, or still are in whatever way you look at it,
well that was my first vid i ever made and at east i have prooved i am a kid and now you know what i sound like, WHICH IS NOT THAT!!!,
 

PurpleRain

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MGG=REVIEWS said:
remember how terrible my reviews were, or still are in whatever way you look at it,
well that was my first vid i ever made and at east i have prooved i am a kid and now you know what i sound like, WHICH IS NOT THAT!!!,
???

Is not what? Your voice?

Are we going to start all this again?! How many times have you tried to be someone else only to have failed miserably?


Also, nice work with the metaphor, JimboG.