My world of warcraft story
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And even then, people on that website say that person stole the story.Mrsnugglesworth said:
Perhaps this is a story that has been stolen from since the beginning of time, originally written by God himself.
THIS is the one we have prayed to.
The one from who was foretold that HE would rid of world
Of SINS and the impurities of the world.
He has ARRIVED!
to enlighten us upon our path.
Aye, this path is a long one, a one that will last life times.
After mere hours of his arival the collective of human kind beg the man to be their ruler
The man agrees.
Time pass'
Our god, our benevolent ruler offers us a deal
The deal being that all sins of the flesh shall be released, but only if humanity prays for forgiveness.
Aye humans, still dazzelled by the shear awsomeness that is this entity agree instantly.
But there were 2 catches, to be released of the sins of the flesh you cannot be human.
You would have to be a machine, something that does not have the needs of the flesh
You would always suffer, the human mind in a form it was never meant to be.
The first person stepped up asking of thist gift to be bestowed, unware of what would cost him
So the god-like figure transmogrified the person into a machine.
The machine screamed at first, in pain begging for death, to be released from this prison.
Then the god among men with a quick look silenced the machine eternally
Humanity stared in awe at the machine, then at the ruler they worshipped oh so dearly.
Humanities baser instincts kicked in, and a fear came forth.
Humanity as we knew it perished, in 10 minutes, trying to run away, to resist the god.
But the god would not have anything of that osrt, humanity asked for, and they shall receive.
What was once a great race of creatures are now machines begging to be free of their cages.
The man proud of his work, proud that humanity is free of their sins leaves the planet.
Years pass...
Machines begin to fail, to rust...
to decay.
The first machines to finally perish were greated by the man who caused them their pain, in another world.
They people asked "Why?"
The man with a laugh simple responded "To purify"
The moral of this story is that when a person is shown a purely awsome thread, they must try to one up it with a different story, but then fail miserably. X_X
The one from who was foretold that HE would rid of world
Of SINS and the impurities of the world.
He has ARRIVED!
to enlighten us upon our path.
Aye, this path is a long one, a one that will last life times.
After mere hours of his arival the collective of human kind beg the man to be their ruler
The man agrees.
Time pass'
Our god, our benevolent ruler offers us a deal
The deal being that all sins of the flesh shall be released, but only if humanity prays for forgiveness.
Aye humans, still dazzelled by the shear awsomeness that is this entity agree instantly.
But there were 2 catches, to be released of the sins of the flesh you cannot be human.
You would have to be a machine, something that does not have the needs of the flesh
You would always suffer, the human mind in a form it was never meant to be.
The first person stepped up asking of thist gift to be bestowed, unware of what would cost him
So the god-like figure transmogrified the person into a machine.
The machine screamed at first, in pain begging for death, to be released from this prison.
Then the god among men with a quick look silenced the machine eternally
Humanity stared in awe at the machine, then at the ruler they worshipped oh so dearly.
Humanities baser instincts kicked in, and a fear came forth.
Humanity as we knew it perished, in 10 minutes, trying to run away, to resist the god.
But the god would not have anything of that osrt, humanity asked for, and they shall receive.
What was once a great race of creatures are now machines begging to be free of their cages.
The man proud of his work, proud that humanity is free of their sins leaves the planet.
Years pass...
Machines begin to fail, to rust...
to decay.
The first machines to finally perish were greated by the man who caused them their pain, in another world.
They people asked "Why?"
The man with a laugh simple responded "To purify"
The moral of this story is that when a person is shown a purely awsome thread, they must try to one up it with a different story, but then fail miserably. X_X
This post had no purpose, promoted no discussion, and has nothing to do with anything...but God damn it I don't care! Thank you....thank you so very much. /bow
I wouldn't call that a fail but rather the second best 32nd post in the history of the Escapist.dududf said:
Ot: I will simply say that is one major story but there is only one major flaw! The Sword of Existence does not appear when fighting Spirit Bears but rather when fighting Spirit Crocidiles!
And you just decided to remove your grammar for this forum?hellshot88 said:
People like you actually make me angry. Well, not angry but you know what I mean. Someone wrote that and you got all the credit.
Edit: I just realised that this wasn't active when I posted this... sorry!
