Order And Chaos: A Superpower RP (Started, Closed)

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PrinceOfShapeir

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avouleance2nd said:
I'd also like a word
However if you can't give one I'll assume the lack of immidate rejection means it's ok for now
Silence only implies consent in court, Avouleance. And even then it's a pretty huge gray area.
 

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Added in the bio, just re-posting so you can see.

Name: Robin Goodfellow

Alias: Skrow

Gender: Male

Age: Unknown

Appearance: His body consists of rags and hay, with bits and pieces of other things stuck inside either by accident or as weights. Skrow wears a tattered, crooked, wide brimmed hat, complete with a crow's feather stuck in it, on top of straw hair, and a filled burlap sack face stitched with a malevolent grin. When it's dark and when he opens his mouth, an eerie light filters out of the gaps. A noose hangs around his neck and is pulled tight to keep things secure. The rest of his body is covered in poorly stitched together rags that provide an almost cape-like quality. A crow or raven is always seen perched on his shoulder.

Personality: Skrow has grown to delight in the suffering and fear in others, and has developed a fondness for torture. Whilst his life necessitates that he must kill with his pestilent aura, he is not above dismembering with his scythe, or recently, stringing people up as sacrificial effigies, leaving them as nought but a feast for crows.
He sees himself as a necessary evil, sent to the world to reap the seeds of evil that people sow in their own hearts. Robin thinks this as ample justification for what he does, and that he is doing the world a favour by culling the herd.
When he is not terrorising the townsfolk, Robin wanders the countryside, having recently took up playing the harmonica.

Alignment: Supervillain

Superpowers:

Scarecrow Physiology - Being a Golem composed of mainly straw and rags, he is practically impervious from physical harm, as well as being immortal to the point as long as a significant part of him is still intact.

Corvid Manipulation - Skrow can command the aforementioned legions of birds to do his bidding, usually to blind his foes, although also to retrieve body parts, or even as a means of transportation or limited flight.

Pestilent Aura - Robin has become a walking blight, everything he touches or walks upon withers and dies, including both vegetation and animal life (including humans). The effects are far more instantaneous on vegetation however.

Enhanced Scythemanship - Capable of throwing forth blades of wind.

Biography: Robin was a simple farmer in a remote puritan town. He was content with his life, having moderate wealth and security. He was not a God fearing man, but he still was brought up with belief in the Almighty, although he had never really seen how He affected him.

One particular Season, there was a particularly sparse harvest, the whole town was affected, and the lack of crops lead to rationing of the remaining food and grain. Nevertheless, the townsfolk prayed to their Lord for a better harvest to come, and Robin resowed the field.
Along came the next year, and the harvest was no different, and the people of the town went hungry once more, and renewed their prays for a bountiful harvest, for the Lord must have a plan.

This carried on for two more years, and the earth still bore little crops, and the people of the town were starving, their reserves having nearly run dry, that they began to panic, having no nearby settlements to rely on. In his desperation, Richard turned away from the people's God, and chose to seek out a far more earthly and pagan source for their harvest. He sought out a young witch who lived in the outlying forest. He reach out to her in desperation, and begged her for a means to renew their bounty, otherwise they would surely starve.
The witch told him that for their harvest, a sacrifice must be made, for only life can give life. If he did this she said, then the crops would surely grow again.
To save his town and it's people, along with his livelihood, Robin took a passing traveller, and sacrifice the poor girl in the name of the witch's deities, before hiding the body in a bog not far away.

The following harvest came, and this time the crops did grow, but they grew stunted and sickly, and withered as soon as they were reaped. Outraged with what he had done, and with what the witch had promised him, he went back to her in a fury. She confronted him, and stated that she only said that the crops would grow, not that they would grow well.

Returning to the village, Robin rallied the townsfolk behind him, and convinced them that the witch was the cause of their ill fortune. Upon her capture, the trialled her in front of every person, and found her guilty of black magic, with Robin providing ample testimony on her crimes against God. They bound her to a stake, and surrounded her with kindling, before setting her on light. The witch did not writhe in agony, she merely stared at Rob as her flesh charred, casting an evil glare that sunk into his very soul. With her last breath, she spoke words that were carried on the hot air, they resonated within him, causing him to fall to the ground in agony, his very insides burning from within, until he lay there lifeless.

His earthly form gone, his spirited still was lost, the witch's curse fell on him, and he was bound to the very Scarecrow that stood watch amongst his decaying fields. He was given the ultimatum to stay stuck in the middle of the field, unable to ever leave, and watch everything he knew slowly wither and die, or exact the witch's vengeance against the townsfolk by slaughtering them, and by doing so he would be able to wander the lands having some sense of life. Robin chose freedom at any cost, and saw the town as slowly dying anyway, he took his scythe from his home, and descended upon them like a plague, discovery his other gifts during the act..
After the town was destroyed, Robin began to wander the countryside, although it was only then that he realised his own life came at the expense of others, and only by sapping the life of others was he able to sustain himself. Over time, his mind grew more wild, and soon all he knew was the killing of others, doing it more for enjoyment than for simple survival.
 

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Korten12 said:
May I aks if I can be a person who uses meele weapons and guns without any powers? Just want to get an idea if I can before making a sheet.
I imagine so, I did after all.
 

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Given Name: Talen
Superhero Name: Blood Caste

Gender: Male
Age: 30 but looks 17

Appearance: About 6 feet tall, slightly thin build with white blonde hair. Scar on his back from the left shoulder down to the right side of his pelvis. Red Eyes. Pale skin.
Clothing: Has regular clothes for looking like an average lower-class person. Nothing too flashy, mostly second hand. His set of "work" clothes are fine enough for a prince, these consist of the outfits his foster mother had stored in her castle (see bio).

Personality: Kinda shy around people until he gets to know them. Tries to help innocents and those who are kind to him as much as he can. Looking for a new home to go to (Which is one of the reasons why he's so interested in Seraphim). Dislikes violence. Was in love with his foster mother until she died. Loves Apples.


Alignment: Superhero


Superpowers:
Manipulates his blood. The way he does this is the cells act almost like a Hive-mind, relaying back to him. He can also do many remarkable things with it. These things include turning it into a melee weapon harder than steel. When he forms a weapon out of it the blood simply breaks through his skin where he chooses and takes up the form he desires.

He can also use this power to heal the sick, regenerating cells at a rapid rate, removing germs, bacteria or diseases (such as cancer cells). This power also prevents his ageing process leaving him at the age of 17. This unique buff from his power only kicked in at that age as he became more skilled in it's use.

He can also insert his blood into the bodies of others, not just for healing purposes, but also to harm enemies. He also mix his blood with theirs and control it just as he would his own blood, essentially increasing the amount of blood at his disposal for a short duration (in fights etc.) He can retract any of his own blood back into his body when he doesn't need to use it anymore. If his blood is mixed with another's, it just breaks away from it and dispossesses it.

Weaknesses: If Talen loses too much blood he will pass out just like any human. In order for his superpower to work he must remain in contact with the blood he uses at all times. It is for this reason that he cannot use it to form ranged weapons.

Cannot use massive amounts of his own blood, he still needs it to live. The only way he can increase his effectiveness is to temporarily possess other people's blood. If the link with his blood is severed it simply liquefies and falls to the ground. He has a limited time to re-establish the link this blood, using either some more of his own blood or himself to physically touch it. If he fails to re-establish a link in time, then the blood becomes nothing more than regular blood.

Talen's foster mother was a vampire, so he will utterly refuse to kill them. He is also very weak against them, when his blood come into contact with either a vampire's blood or saliva in turns into it's liquid form and he becomes unable to resist them.


Bio:

I'm not going to do the Bio tonight. I already have a great one formed in my head but I currently have the flu and I'm tired. Will pick this up tommorow.

P.S. I've never done an RP before so please be VERY detailed about what I've done well and bad.
I'm not the GM but I admit, your character sheet is pretty solid. I also think the blood thing is pretty neat.
 

CJ1145

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If we're all asking for opinions, I suppose I'll make a request as well.
 

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Dr. wonderful said:
I'm not the GM but I admit, your character sheet is pretty solid. I also think the blood thing is pretty neat.
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It's familiar from a tv show/manga from Japan, same powers. Lets see what's the bio is gonna look like.
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PrinceOfShapeir said:
avouleance2nd said:
I'd also like a word
However if you can't give one I'll assume the lack of immidate rejection means it's ok for now
Silence only implies consent in court, Avouleance. And even then it's a pretty huge gray area.
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I only wish God has a hidden commandment that moses forgot, "Don't be a dick", whenever I see some of your replies.

And to stop you from your snarky answer - I don't care.
PrinceOfShapeir said:
I also really, really do not care.
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To the GM - Same here. I'm eager to hear your opinion.
 

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Hello everyone, I'm not new to the escapist but I am new to the forums. I kind of stumbled on the role playing forum and being someone who enjoys a good story I thought it'd be fun to get into. And this was more of the interesting ones that I found.

Lambi There's already a lot going on in this thread I was wondering if you could give a condensation of everyone who is currently playing, or rather, who actually has characters ready to go. Also maybe How many more people you have open slots vs how many people are showing interest at the time? There seems to be a bit of chaos. Or maybe I'm just having a hard time following whats going on.

I'm going to go work on my character right meow :)
 

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TheIronRuler said:
Dr. wonderful said:
I'm not the GM but I admit, your character sheet is pretty solid. I also think the blood thing is pretty neat.
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It's familiar from a tv show/manga from Japan, same powers. Lets see what's the bio is gonna look like.
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PrinceOfShapeir said:
avouleance2nd said:
I'd also like a word
However if you can't give one I'll assume the lack of immidate rejection means it's ok for now
Silence only implies consent in court, Avouleance. And even then it's a pretty huge gray area.
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I only wish God has a hidden commandment that moses forgot, "Don't be a dick", whenever I see some of your replies.

And to stop you from your snarky answer - I don't care.
PrinceOfShapeir said:
I also really, really do not care.
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To the GM - Same here. I'm eager to hear your opinion.
You do know it's against the rules to insult people, right? Just making sure. Anyway, my point was that Avouleance really should not assume that Thor is okay just because Thor hasn't said anything yet.
 

Lambi

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I'm going to start on telling my opinions on some sheets right now. Be patient, I'll get to your sheet if you don't see it here.

Lunar Templar said:
For starters, you need to use capital letters more. It looks much better if you'd do that.

Secondly, I have problems with her alignment. If she doesn't care about humans and their affairs, why even be involved?

I don't really see a problem with dragons, but her cursed flame I have a problem with. I'm not sure I want to have someone who has the power of flames that can't be extinguished by natural means.

avouleance2nd said:
Your sheet just looks awful. It hurts to read due to lack of any kind of grammar. If you do not brush up on your grammar, I cannot allow you to join. And I know that I mentioned that you and Vuvzelaman could make your characters with shared backstory, but while your sheet has such terrible grammar, I can't allow you to join.

Withmir said:
I'll say it right away that I don't want any kind of light manipulation. I probably should have mentioned that in the OP, but ah well. A bit late to mention that now.

Redryhno said:
Same goes for darkness manipulation, whether it's just minor or major.

Souplex said:
Your sheet is way too short to even consider allowing, plus time manipulation is not something I want to see.

TheIronRuler said:
Same to you regarding the time manipulation, plus I have some problem with your other two powers being something your character's had since birth.

Shadowstar38 said:
Your character's possession power irks me. I can understand that you might only use it on NPCs, but I still don't like it. I'd rather it not be there.

drmigit2 said:
Your character doesn't sit well with me. How can someone multitask so well with little problem? And I can't say I like that mech suit.
 

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Lambi said:
Alright. I'll go ahead and remove that power. Should I also get rid of the reduced ageing effects? I only ask because you had a problem with someone who was totally immortal, and I dont want to risk it.
 

Lambi

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Shadowstar38 said:
Lambi said:
Alright. I'll go ahead and remove that power. Should I also get rid of the reduced ageing effects? I only ask because you had a problem with someone who was totally immortal, and I dont want to risk it.
Maybe if you change it to just being able to take more damage than a normal human. Otherwise, it should look good.
 

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Lambi said:
Lunar Templar said:
For starters, you need to use capital letters more. It looks much better if you'd do that.

Secondly, I have problems with her alignment. If she doesn't care about humans and their affairs, why even be involved?

I don't really see a problem with dragons, but her cursed flame I have a problem with. I'm not sure I want to have someone who has the power of flames that can't be extinguished by natural means.
yeah, i know, weird habit i have while typing

i can lose the the cursed flame, it was just a neat sounding ability anyway, but I'll probably fill that gap with more control over her 'blue napalm'

cept the actual 'cannon version' of Rozalin. she'd care, but you'd hate her, as i wouldn't really be flexible with that version in terms of strengths/weaknesses and so on. she like the oldest character i have, so I'm not really willing to change that version for anyone
 

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Arcanist said:
Lambi said:
Just noticed that there was another electric hero with a lot of similarities to Ohm (my hero 2.0); a hero who was posted well before Ohm was - to prevent overlap, I'm withdrawing her and will implement a different Hero (if I can think of another one)

Sorry for not noticing Arcanist; I promise I wasn't trying to steal your thunder

Sorry for the pun, I just couldn't... resist!

I'll just shut up now ^_^
 

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hiei82 said:
Arcanist said:
Lambi said:
Just noticed that there was another electric hero with a lot of similarities to Ohm (my hero 2.0); a hero who was posted well before Ohm was - to prevent overlap, I'm withdrawing her and will implement a different Hero (if I can think of another one)

Sorry for not noticing Arcanist; I promise I wasn't trying to steal your thunder

Sorry for the pun, I just couldn't... resist!

I'll just shut up now ^_^
Don't worry, I think I can find the capacity to forgive.