holy_secret said:
viranimus said:
Reworded Shakespeare for context said:
Methinks thine doth protest too much
Why can't anyone get the second person singular conjugation right?
I don't mean to be rude. This just catches my attention in a bad way just like hearing a knife scratching porcelain or a child cry.
Really? Knife on porcelain or children crying huh. How much worse can the grating get? Then what if I point out that that the quote is
The lady doth protest too much, methinks.
And using your "thou" indicates direction to a specific individual whereas while mine may been better served by using they, using thou is not correct because It was not directed in response to anyone in specific or the speaker. Sort of like using You instead of they. But are we really going to go all grammar nazi-ish over middle English/early modern English influenced dialect?
So.. what is the analogous level for that? The point here is, the overall message was conveyed, or else you wouldn't have responded. So perhaps nitpicking about someones accuracy when similar mistakes are made is not such a good idea and looses some of its weight when it is absent accuracy.
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Anyway, back on topic. I mean if your determined to do it, You might be able to make it work. I mean Nabokov managed to pull it off and his work is tolerated. But the problem is like trying to push a boulder up a hill. Do you really expect people who cannot distinguish between pedophilia, Hebephilia, ephebophilia, Gerontophilia or any other sort of chronophilia to be willing to tolerate references that might inadvertently paint pedophilia in a less than evil light?
If this is in the context of a game, you need to be prepared for it to have vehement backlash on the level of Zogs nightmare or Ethnic Cleansing. The general populous will not consider it no matter how well it is written, no matter how much thought it might provoke, because the populous is afraid of what considering that could even mean. Regardless if you crafted the most human and realistic char seen in any form of literature since Shakespeare, at best it will be dismissed, and at worse it could get you killed.