Poem for a girl

[SnowCold]

Not the best poem ever, though its very nice, And I think she will be happy to get it.

and fell bad if she doesn't want to go out with you cuase the effort you put into it, so she will anyways...

 

[Ranooth]

Be cautious, i wrote a peom for a freind last year (really liked her). I didnt say it was aimed at her but she was tge noly person i sent it too. She said it was very nice and that i had some skill, however she was very, very silent for the next couple of days. She may say she likes it but deep down she may be concerned.

Im not saying this girl will, just be absolute sure you wanna do it.

 

[wewontdie11]

This man speaks the truth.
Indeed.... forsooth!
As various posters have already said
And their warnings do not let get over your head
Do not profess your love with a poem
Instead, ask the girl out, and get to know 'em

This girl with whom you are smitten
And you find adorable as a kitten
Would be delighted to hear a sonnet
I tell you, I'd stake my life on it

But only after your relationship has begun
And you are convinced that she is the one
Should you put a poem of love to use
Otherwise, you'll be tightening your own noose

*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
You win.
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Indeed, that's pretty god damn impressive and true.

Also rossatdi, I'm well thieving your revised "cheesed up" poem for future use. I'll be sure to give you credit though.

 

[Xpwn3ntial]

Yeah, if you give her one of your poems, at least give her something little in case that doesn't work out.

EDIT: It's good, though.

 

[chronobreak]

You should save it for when you get married and get in trouble, because then you'll REALLY need it.

 

[The_Anomaly]

This is one of my own poems that I made while I was bored...

"Every time the sky is blue,
The only thing I see is you,
I remember your face,
And go back to the place
Under the blue sky I first saw you."

Now that is cheesy.

 

[DethFan666]

You wrote a poem for me? You shouldn't have.

 

[samsprinkle]

I'd avoid the "I love you" line for a while. I've found that most girls take that as a hint that you are a freak who obsesses over them...*coughs*

 

[Docta J]

As beautiful as a rose
As sweet as a sucker
When people ask me about you
I tell them I'd like to...

Wish her a Merry Christmas!

 

[vede]

*Agrees with everyone before him, especially Duck Sandwich.*

You might just do what I do when there's a girl I really like, but have no chance to ever really get involved with (woohoo neuroses).

I write a few pages of essay, then throw it away. Really lets me release any pent up 'emotion' thingies. Should work for you, if you like writing, at least.

Emotions suck...

 

[DethFan666]

I'd avoid the "I love you" line for a while. I've found that most girls take that as a hint that you are a freak who obsesses over them...*coughs*

The love word always frightens them away.

 

[Ace of Spades]

A bit cheesy but good. By the way, you spelled "you'll" incorrectly. I look for that kind of stuff without really meaning to.

 

[SovietSecrets]

This man speaks the truth.
Indeed.... forsooth!
As various posters have already said
And their warnings do not let get over your head
Do not profess your love with a poem
Instead, ask the girl out, and get to know 'em

This girl with whom you are smitten
And you find adorable as a kitten
Would be delighted to hear a sonnet
I tell you, I'd stake my life on it

But only after your relationship has begun
And you are convinced that she is the one
Should you put a poem of love to use
Otherwise, you'll be tightening your own noose

*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
You win.
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I think ill be following all of your advice and just ask her out without a poem, but least i got them down now and might be using those revised editions one day. Thanks for all the comments/advice!

 

[Berethond]

This is what got me my current wife)

I wouldn't listen to him.