Poll: Let's Play feedback

[evo455]

Hey guys, after lurking on the escapist for a long time( i kind of prefer lurking to posting) I've deduced this place to be the place i am least likely to get flamed for this kind of thing. anyway, I've decided i enjoy commentating over gameplay and after getting all the necessary materials i have been creating videos on youtube. Please give me feedback on how to improve my commentating, i want to become the best commentator i can. http://youtu.be/qbpMfed00G4
(How do i Embed Video btw?)

 

[dessertmonkeyjk]

First, you probably need to record your commentary seperately so you can adjust it indepentently from the game audio. Dxtory is one of them that records video and multiple audio tracks seperately.

Second, use this (youtube=***********) (replace () with [] and * with the numbers after watch?v= like these RzsQ4F-lJ98)

 

[Smooth Operator]

Well I really can't find any greater faults in execution.

Only thing that really bothers me is the sound, you need to record/encode it at a lower volume, it's hitting the ceiling and cutting off so it creates that incredibly irritating buzz.
And you might consider playing something more current, something more then 30 people want to see.

[ youtube=qbpMfed00G4 ] <----imbedding code

 

[Skops]

And you might consider playing something more current, something more then 30 people want to see.

This.

But, maybe for you first LP, it's not such a bad thing because you wanna iron out some tweaks and try to find your own style. I just started doing my first LP last week with a little known and underrated PS1 game called Dragon Valor. Until you get into your groove, it's best to stay in niche views where less picky people are going to give you support and suggestions to improve.

 

[evo455]

Thanks for the advice guys, its very much appreciated.