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Vkmies

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I recently started writing for a brand new website, and it made me think.

There must be so many aspiring novelists, journalists and writers on The Escapist!
The internet is a big place and I am willing to bet that most of you need and most of all, deserve a little attention and a few readers!

So share your work here!
Articles, books, blogs, whatevers!
I want to see what kind of text The Escapist can produce. Finally a thread for you to shamelessly self-plug in!
Take advantage of it!
 

Leemaster777

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Uh... I'm not sure if this thread is okay by the Escapist's rules.

Eh, screw it, I'll play along. I actually wrote a couple of reviews on this site, in fact. Both pony-related, but I think I did a good job of it.

My review of Equestria Girls:
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.818967-My-Little-Pony-Equestria-Girls-Review-None-of-the-hooves-all-of-the-charm

And the review I wrote yesterday about My Little Pony Comic #9:
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.823799-Comic-Review-My-Little-Pony-Friendship-is-Magic-9-Big-Mac-with-a-side-of-fun

Think I might keep up on the pony reviews. Especially when the new season starts, and I'll have something more consistent to review.
 

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Ooh, a writing thread.I am intrigued. I've actually started freelancing as a writer myself. I've written quite a few articles on my own site as well, and even shared a couple in the forums:

http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/9.823287-3rd-Party-Exclusives-The-Declining-Relevancy-of-Console-Gaming#19932194

http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/18.823414-The-Navy-and-Kinect-Stopping-Sexual-Assault#19936457

Writing is both painful and addicting for some reason.
 

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http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.823837-Dangit2019s-Long-Winded-Rants-Double-Rainboom

http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.820374-Dangit2019s-Actual-Review-My-Little-Pony-Equestria-Girls

That's all I got.
 

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http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2280340/

Nope. Before you say anything. No. I don't care. Yes, I've been trying. Yes, it's all gay fanfiction.

No, I probably don't have/support your pairing.

http://archiveofourown.org/users/Angelblaze

Me on Ao3 as well.

And no. I don't do self-plug ins into my stories. Maybe OC's when needed but no self-plug ins...
 

Johnny Novgorod

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Here you go, if you can read Spanish.

http://www.escribiendocine.com/critica/0001918-el-sr-wolverine-va-a-japon/
 

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....What the hell? I've been wanting to share a bit more lately and work on my ability to take criticism.

Here, this is two links to the first...60 some odd pages of a book I was working on through Camp NaNoWriMo. I haven't finished yet at only 70,000 words so far, but if anyone wants to see what it's all about, go right on ahead.

http://remassi.tumblr.com/post/55231502931/the-first-29-pages-of-my-new-novel-sky-arch -Part 1
http://remassi.tumblr.com/post/55837956545/well-heres-the-next-35-pages-or-so-of-my-novel-sky -Part 2

I warn though that it's probably full of misspellings and missing words and even some plot holes and the like. It is, after all, NaNoWriMo, I'm not allowed to revise and whenever you're trying to get it all done in a month you end up saying "I'll figure that out later" A LOT.
 

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Well, I am an aspiring writer and am working on two projects at the moment. Both of which are fantasy. The first, and the more ambitious of the two, is going to take a long time to even get off the ground because I'm creating an entire new world for it to be set in. That includes the lands, races, histories, all the lore - everything. That takes a lot of time, and a lot of refining, so nothing will come out of that for several years at least.

The second project is more short-term, as it's set in our own world, just two thousand years ago. So I've already got a world and history to work with there and don't have to make my own from scratch. The basic premise of this project is a Greek hero akin to Achilles or Hercules (set in the 3rd century BCE), who travels around the world and its many different cultures and embarks on adventures. Oftentimes mythology will come into play (thus bringing in the fantasy elements).

Now, I'm very bare in the way I've written so far. I've just used wordpad, and save it all on my hard drive. So there's nothing I can link, there aren't any websites I know that allows you to write on the fly, save it and store it, and can edit it whenever. So this has had to make do. Because of this, the best I can do here is copy-paste a few paragraphs into a spoiler tag. Hopefully that will suffice.

244 BCE.
Isokrates slowly led his horse at the trot down the dimly lit road, the cold night air sweeping through the street. He sought a tavern, which lay just a short way down from where he was. For the past two weeks he had travelled across potentially hostile territory. Through valleys and among hills, and along the outskirts of dark woods and wide rivers. Every now and again a group of armed warriors from unknown tribes (or perhaps simply brigands) would accost him, but they would usually depart on their own. The few who would offer trouble were easily evaded by the swiftness of his horse, which was from superior Numidian stock he had acquired in Carthago Nova. He had spent the better part of a year in Iberia, revelling in his now famous adventure there. Countless woman of Iberian breed, and even a few of Carthage, he had bedded and enough wine to make the gods merry he had drunk. He loved every moment of this easy going life, and would have been content to remain, but the lust of further adventure and fame eclipsed that of women, and so he left. While his Agrianian companion Lyccion had returned home, he went north, along the coast, and into southern Gaul. He was tempted to go to the Greek colony of Massilia, but for reasons unknown even to him, he continued north and travelled deeper into Gaul. He was beginning to settle into a nomadic lifestyle in which he would journey wherever the road and wind took him, and would not question it. He rode along this land with caution, sleeping under the stars, his falcata sword always ready at hand. He conistently felt a watchful presence, as if some warrior with his spear kept his distance enough to remain hidden amongst dense trees, but close enough to observe him, to wait for an opportune moment. It was with relief that, finally, he emerged from a forested path and beheld the city of Gergovia before him in the distance. How mighty it looked, a wooden city on the top of a large hill, overlooking the surrounding lands. It was ruled by the Arverni, one of the major Gallic tribes. It contained some semblance of civilisation in a largley uncivilised land, though incomperable to the likes of Athens, Syracuse and even Carthago Nova, of course.

While he stirred his horse slowly down the road he heard the sounds of grunting and clashing iron from a darkened alley to his right. Curious, he dismounted, unstrapped his thureos shield from the horse, drew his sword and entered the darkness of this urban ravine. With no surprise, he came upon a fight. A single torch on a wall gave off a weak light, but it was enough to see what was going on. Four men were hounding upon one. A sixth lay on the ground in a pool of blood. They all looked rather similar from a distance, but when Isokrates looked closer, he noticed immediate differences. The man fighting alone had braided black hair, they had loose brown. He was clean shaven, they had large moustaches. He wore a coat of bronze scaled armour and a felt cap upon his head. Two of them wore simple garments while another two were bare-chested and all wore nothing on their heads. In his right hand he wielded a sword and was swinging wildly at his enemy, in his left clutched a bow, which he was using as a makeshift shield to parry blows. Isokrates knew not why these men were fighting, and he had no stake. But still, he saw one man against four, and he knew not even that armour would save him if he did not intervene. Isokrates launched forward. One of the Gauls noticed his presence and broke off to intercept him. The Greek raised his shield and effortlessly blocked the thrust of his enemies' sword and countered with a quick slash of his own, the powerful cut of the falcata smashed through the Gauls' neck and he fell limp to the ground. A second broke off and launched at him. This one had a shield and spear, which he used overhand. Isokrates blocked the initial thrust and countered with an overhead clash that cut through the top of his foes shield and lodged itself there. He failed to pull it out in time, and thus shield and sword fell to the ground together. The Gaul now wielded his spear with both hands and with an underhand thrust was blocked once more by the Greek. He drew the spear up over his head in an attempt to launch down over Isokrates' shield but the Greek was too fast, too agile. He side stepped the attack as swift as a cat, raised his shield with both hands and brought it crashing down onto the spearman's head. His foe fell groggily to the ground and Isokrates recovered his sword and finished his enemy before he could regain his footing. He then looked over his shoulder and beheld a third man dead on the ground, and the last attempting to flee down the alley. The now victorious warrior dropped his sword, and with lightning quick speed grabbed an arrow from his lower-back mounted quiver, notched, drew up his bow, aimed and let that death fly. It sore through the alley and hit home in the rear of the fleeing Gaul's skull. Isokrates was impressed. He knew of expert marksmanship, of the famous archers of the Isle of Crete, but this was spectacular. In such a swift moment he had drawn an arrow and loosed it, if you blinked you would have miss. And to hit with such accuracy against an enemy, which at that time had disappeared into the near-total darkness of the alley, was remarkable.

The liberated warrior turned to face Isokrates and hailed him in a language unknown. Isokrates replied in Greek that he knew not his tongue. To his surpise, the fellow responded in fluent Attic: "Ah, Greek? Many thanks to you, my unexpected friend. May Ares look favourably upon you, as he does not for me. But nevermind that. I am Silakus, a Scythian."
"I am Isokrates, originally from Corinth, but recently from Iberia, in the south. Greetings"
"Greetings"
"Scythian? You're a long way from home here."
"I could say the same thing about you. Though Massilia isn't too far away, neither is Iberia, so perhaps you have more stake in this corner of the world than I. But come, these shadowy streets and alleys are no place for conversation. We shall talk more admist ale in a tavern somewhere." With that, the Scythian retrieved his sword, sheathed it and walked past Isokrates and back onto the street. The Greek followed.
"Interesting. I see you have no desire to claim your foes scalps?" he asked.
"This surprises you?"
"I had heard from tales that Scyths, Sarmations and Amazons take the scalps of their fallen enemies as battle trophies."
"Bah, that practice is mostly dead, as dead as the Amazons are at least. Rare it is for my people to claim scalps anymore, except against the most hated of foes. I do not know the men who attacked me this night, thus I cannot bring myself to hate them. So their scalps shall remain upon their heads."
"But they attacked you, seeking your death."
"Aye, so much is true. But they were only being guided by another, one whom I do intend to scalp. They were simple men leading simple lives, they may have been promised something to increase that stance into something admirable or enviable. They may have been swayed by honeyed words and excited promises. Perhaps. They may have seen fortune in this task, or the chance to earn fame and respect. I cannot hate them for that."
"That is not the mentality I expected from a fierce warrior of the northern lands. I have heard tales of savagery unmatched. From brutality that turned away even the Persian Empire in times gone. Of men and women whose fearlessness was unequalled."
"These traits can return, I assure you. If I catch the man I seek, then I shall prove you correct in your assumptions. But now is not the time for savagery, my friend."
"Who is it you seek?"
"I may tell you, once we find the shelter of a tavern. By Tabiti, is this horse yours?" the Scyth started with enthuism as they emerged from the alley.
"Yes, I purchased it in Carthago Nova. It is Numidian. A country famed for their horsemanship, much like yours."
"I have heard a tale of Numidian horses. This certainly is a fine one." he complimented, petting the horses' head softly. He smiled. "It is long since I've had a good horse beneath my legs. My original Scythian companion soon died when I left my home. Ever since I've relied on inferior horses stolen from people who do not appreciate them. I understand that you care for him?"
"He has only been with me for two weeks, and I cannot say I'm a horseman. I fight on foot, and only use them to move around swiftly from place to place. I admit, I am probably not worthy of such a speciman as this."
"Hmm" Silakus contemplated and stood for a moment. "Shall we find this tavern?" Isokrates nodded and they both walked, leading the horse by its bridle, down the road until at last they came upon a well lit building with loud laughter beckoning from inside. Several intoxicated figures lay out front, but the two new companions did not heed them as they stepped inside.

There are some mistakes, and some sentences that need to be re-written. It is but a draft, after all. But any who is interested will get the basic idea of it, I'm sure.

As for my main writing influence, that would be Robert E. Howard. Not sure if it reflects at all in the writing, but there you go.
 

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I wrote this a couple years ago, and then posted it on fictionpress a bit later. I also have other stuff I was experimenting with on there if you want to check it out as well

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2937577/1/Checkmate
 

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While I do not want to seem overly proud, here are my links:
A fantasy original:
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3123430/1/The-Hunter
And some shameless self promotion of my 40k fiction:
A eulogy for an Imperial Hero:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9326409/1/Warhammer-40-000-His-Name-was-Oreg-Twynsson
My attempt at writing a short story. It's okay, but lengthy:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8553676/1/Warhammer-40-000-Knights-of-Steel

I might plan on writing more later, maybe, if I can find the time.
I can just never be satisfied with my beginning :<
 

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My overlong, Band of Brothers inspired Dawn of War 2 compendium piece starring Merrick the unkillable Guardsman and friends.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7951905/1/Daredevils-A-Dawn-of-War-Collection
 

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Not sure if against the CoC... then again, I suppose there is plenty of discussion that could occur in this topic, given the chance. Fuck it, I'll just link my most recent user review considering it's on this site anyway: http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.823975-Shin-Megami-Tensei-IV-Review

First review I've done in a few months and the seventh I've done on this site. I used to do game reviews all the time for the school paper in college, but I don't really have the time these days. I am in the early stages of planning a webcomic with my sister, however, and we might be able to share some concept art sometime in the future. She's on this site too, but I'll need to run the idea by her to see if she'd be willing to share at this stage.
 

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I haven't written anything worth while in a long time, but I still write a poem or two every once in a while. Here's a few of 'em.

I think I found a friend today.
His hair is wild,
And skin is dark.

He says he lives not far away
Maybe the woods
Next to the park?

His clothes are crazy, fierce, and free.
How he is warm
I cannot see.

He laughs no matter what the mood,
And rarely is he
Mean or rude.

He's always kind when I'm alone
And sets such
Wonderful a tone

I haven't seen him lately though
Where he is now I do not know.
I hope he will come back some day,
I miss him more than I can say.

Useless animal, down on life.
Useless animal, crying loud.
The murky image stains his fur.

The coming moonlight brings him tears
And rolling clouds surround him.

The policy that kept him madly grinning
He tore it up and left it
And felt his heart beat warmly.

Musical therapy soothes the heart,
While a loser's outfit scrapes the mind.

Electric monsters crowd the eyes,
But friendly memories greet the soul.

The sun comforts the tired skin,
Though shadows feed on feeling.

A fenced-in kiddie sees the sky,
And dreams of distant freedom.

The first one is kinda crap, and the second two are revisions of older poems I wrote. Feedback is welcome.
 

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This thread has honestly inspired me to start working on a book. Only its just for me and I will never read it after I write it lol. Just wan't to see if my mind can be creative enough to actually put together a decent story which I'm highly doubtful that it can but who knows.
 

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Fappy said:
Not sure if against the CoC... then again, I suppose there is plenty of discussion that could occur in this topic, given the chance.
Yeah, it occured to me while making the thread that it might be a pile of links. But I'm hoping there will be talks about the writing process and criticism and feedback for the writings of people.

Trying to keep a positive mind here ;)
 

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I am stuck at work so the only thing I could find is a small blurb I did for a class I took. I have gotten different reactions from it as to what the reader interprets the story to be. It is an opening paragraph to a story I am writing.

The zombie apocalypse is upon us already, everyday and everywhere I see them. Lifeless people who shuffle by, moving to the beat of an invisible masters drum. Neither knowing nor caring that they have lost the battle . Dead within yet trying to maintain the façade of life without. Dead faces, dead places. Dead eyes, dead lives. Dead souls, dead goals.

I must hide my life spark to avoid drawing their hunger towards me. I struggle against the tide of darkness that threatens to crash over me and mine, to fight the undertow of defeatism and sorrow this world sows within us all. I must stand for what I believe in and cast down the doubt and fear that hovers over the city like a miasma. For if I do not one day I will look upon myself and see the reflection of just another dead man walking
 

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I'd link to my stuff on Amazon.com if I didn't think it was probably a breach of something, not to mention shameless. Actually, screw the shameless thing, I have no shame. Maybe PM me if you want to read it. I would literally kill for constructive feedback... well, okay, not literally, but I would definitely murder some Heartless in Kingdom Hearts or some ancient Chinese guys in Dynasty Warriors 8 for constructive feedback (these happen to be the games I'm playing at the moment).

Anyway, here's something else I've written recently for a project my University is working on. It's a collaborative novel: every two weeks people submit a chapter (2000 words at most), and a judging panel decides which one is best. That submission becomes the official chapter, and then everyone submits their version of the next chapter. The first round of submissions closed last week, and today I discovered that my chapter was judged to be the best. I have no idea how many other people bothered submitting something; possibly the answer is none. Regardless, here is my 'winning' chapter. Once again, I will murder the fictitious gaming related character of your choice for constructive feedback.

The water glittered in the darkness like spilled jewels under the erratic, cloud-touched moonlight as Quinn peered out over the ocean, looking towards the shadowy mass of rounded shapes that made up the coastline. She knew that if it had been daylight she would have been able to see tree-covered hills, golden sands and dozens of scattered holiday homes. But now, at whatever dead hour of night it happened to be, the only sign of civilisation was the occasional distant gleam of streetlights and the lonely, rhythmic blinking of a red beacon atop the highest of the hills. While her mind worked furiously, Quinn kept her eyes affixed to that beacon as steadily as she could manage. She had never cared much for boats or the ocean, but she remembered reading that seasickness could potentially be averted by keeping one?s eyes focused on some distant, stable object. In the absence of anything else that matched this description, the beacon would have to do.

Of course, at this precise moment seasickness was not at the top of her list of priorities. True, she could feel the first queasy fingers of nausea kneading her stomach, but right now her number one concern was the pair of handcuffs that stretched from her wrist to the boat?s iron railing. She had contemplated the gleaming silver chain for a good few minutes, searching for any sign of weakness, hoping for a literal weak link, but there was none. There wasn?t even a hint of rust, no sign that the sea air had started its work of corrosion; clearly the cuffs were not standard equipment on this boat, but rather something that her captors had brought with them.

That made sense, she thought despondently. These were men who came prepared.

The railing itself, however, was a different matter. Years of service had covered it with a heavy patina of grime and rust, and in the flickering light cast by the boat?s single inadequate globe, Quinn could see several places where the iron had started to flake. Slowly, surreptitiously, she reached out a hand (not the one currently adorned by the handcuff?s heavy bracelet, she didn?t want an errant jangle to remind the men of her presence) and firmly grasped the railing. She gave an experimental tug. There was quite a lot of give in it, and she thought she could feel the decrepit metal creaking against the ancient bolts that held it in place. This was something worth considering.

Quinn turned her gaze back to the beacon and watched as it drifted past slowly, inexorably. She thought she should at least try to conjure up some worry for Malcolm, but she couldn?t quite manage it. There was something about the young man that deflected worry and made concern for his welfare seem faintly ridiculous. Partially it was his easy-going nature and blatant refusal to acknowledge fear and doubt as things that had any relevance in his world, but mostly it was the simple fact that he had survived so much already. Quinn supposed that he wasn?t actually invincible, but in the time she?d known him he had made her wonder about that on quite a few occasions.

Okay, so he?d been thrown from the boat into a pitch-black sea. And okay, the boat had been at least a few kilometres offshore at the time. For Malcolm, that was probably not much more than a brisk pre-dawn swim, just enough to get his blood pumping. By now he had most likely made it to shore and was already formulating some sort of cunning plan to rescue her. Maybe it would come to that, but she suspected not. Malcolm had something of a knight-in-shining-armour complex, but she had never really been the damsel-in-distress type. When crunch time came, Quinn preferred to rescue herself.

She glanced eastward, hoping for a sign that the sun might not be too far off, but she knew that this was desperately optimistic. The night already seemed impossibly long, but the rational part of her brain told her that sunrise was still hours away. Quinn tended to trust the rational part of her brain. After all, it was her oldest and most reliable friend.

She looked towards the front of the small craft, where the three men huddled around the steering wheel (or is it called a rudder in a boat? Or the helm? she wondered distractedly). They were dressed in dark clothes, and in the dim light they were little more than shadows. They were big men, and if the casual way in which they had deflected Malcolm?s struggles was any indication, they were strong. Also, she couldn?t discard the possibility that they carried guns. In fact, she was tempted to call it a certainty.

So, she thought, assess the situation: It?s dark and will remain so for a while yet. Malcolm is - almost certainly - on shore by now and running around in his haphazard, thoughtless way, and I?m on a boat headed to who-knows-where, escorted by men who carry handcuffs as a matter of course and aren?t averse to throwing people into the ocean. In my favour I have a rusty railing and maybe, just maybe, the strength to break it free. And? that?s about it, really.

It wasn?t much, but it might be enough. In any case, she wasn?t inclined to calculate odds at this stage. Instead she sketched out a vague plan in her head (the less concrete the plan the more room for improvisation, as her father had often said) and then, without hesitation, she put it into action.

She started by closing her eyes.

Two minutes later, eyes still closed, she vomited noisily over the side of the boat and began groaning. She collapsed to her knees, one hand grasping the corroded railing for support. She heard a sigh and a muttered expletive from the front of the boat and then, almost inaudible over the sound of water slapping at the hull, footsteps approaching. Then a voice very near her head exclaimed sarcastically, ?Hey! You okay? Not gonna die on us, are you??

Time for the commencement of stage two.

Bracing herself with her right hand on the deck, Quinn pulled on the railing in her other hand, sending all her strength into one mighty effort. It was almost too easy. One end of the railing snapped, and at the other end the bolts, really little more than flaking mounds of rust, pulled free with barely a protest. Quinn came within a heartbeat of losing her balance, but instead she converted the sudden momentum into an upward swing of her left arm.

Now, finally, she opened her eyes.

Her vision, now adjusted for darkness, saw everything with a relatively dazzling clarity. She saw the man?s face above her, she saw his contemptuous smile start to shift towards alarm, and then she saw the rusty iron bar make sudden, brutal contact with his cheek.
As he fell, Quinn rushed forwards and smashed the iron bar through the boat?s solitary globe. Now, she knew, she had a momentary advantage. Her eyes had already adjusted, but it would take the two remaining men a number of seconds to accustom themselves to whatever scant moonlight their eyes could discern.

The boat was small, and it took her no more than three strides to reach the place where the two men were still standing by the wheel. She could just barely make out one of them reaching into his jacket. That, she decided, probably meant he had a gun, which made him the priority target. With a deft one-two she lashed out at his elbow, then the side of his head. The man sank to his knees and then a quick knee to the head laid him out.

The third man seemed to be a little slower on the uptake. He had one hand on the wheel, peering blindly into the darkness, trying and failing to understand the source of this sudden confusion. Quinn almost felt a moment?s reluctance as she swung a final glancing blow at his temple. The iron bar rebounded off his skull with a hollow clang and the man crumpled to the ground.

Less than five seconds had elapsed since Quinn had opened her eyes.

Now she took a moment to survey the scene around her, and to spit the bitter taste of bile from her mouth. The vomiting had not been pleasant, but it had been a valuable part of the deception, and as a bonus her burgeoning seasickness was now gone. A minor silver lining, perhaps, but she?d take it.

Two of the men were now silent, unconscious shadows on the ground. The third, the one who had been her first victim and had been so sarcastically solicitous of her health, was moaning softly. She supposed he would have to be dealt with first. She walked towards him, wondering if perhaps he had another pair of handcuffs on him, or at least the key to the pair that still shackled the iron railing to her wrist. Hopefully she?d have time to give them a taste of their own medicine, and she?d be a damn sight more careful than they had about choosing a suitable item to cuff them to.

She was kneeling over the man when the voice, cold and hauntingly familiar, came from behind her.

?That?s enough,? said the voice. It sounded amused. ?Turn around, slowly, if you please. I don?t want to kill you, but I imagine a bullet in the foot would prove to be both non-lethal and a rather effective deterrent to further trouble. I don?t think either of us wants to find out just how right I am about that.?

Quinn turned slowly, as directed. I guess, she thought bitterly, even a small boat like this might have a cabin or a below-deck space or some other sort of hiding place. I probably should have checked, huh?

She looked at the shadowy figure before her, and she saw the gun in the figure?s hand, gleaming with lethal beauty. And then Quinn saw something else: impossibly, bathed in moonlight, gliding just ahead of the boat, was a large, silent bird. It was a swan.

Now, Quinn thought, things get interesting.
 

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I wrote a full length novel and am working on more. It's a 5 book series with a 3 book prequel series, I've been working on it with my sister @IndomitableSam for about 10 years now.

It's a whole fantasy world setting.

Here's my blog about how writing can be difficult, it also has links to buy the book. Which if anyone does I will love you forever and I'm already naming a character after Carlsberg who's read and reviewed and helped me with the book. http://theguidinghandseries.blogspot.ca/

Trying to think of a good excerpt from the book to pull too... Hm. Here.

He raised his head when he sensed he was being watched. He smiled warily at her; she could see his white teeth shining. But then his expression changed, and as if time had slowed she watched his mouth fall open in a yell she didn?t hear. Instead only the whooshing of a blade falling to her shoulder registered in her ear.

Only years of training and quick reflexes saved her. She dived forwards into a roll and screamed as she felt the tip of the sword carve down her back, a strike so strong she would have been split open collar to hip. She came to a sprawl against the fireplace and sound rushed back into being.

Men were yelling all throughout the house now, the one who had attacked her first had overbalanced and was regaining his stance when Eraph shot him in the chest. He stood upright for a moment, shock painted over his face until his knees gave out and he flopped to the floor.

As she regained her senses and pulled herself back upright another man burst into the room only to be plucked from his feet by an arrow fired at close range. Eraph spared a glance down to her and a look of intense relief flashed across his brow. But that quick look cost him.

Mica called out and he raised his bow just in time to turn the blade from him. He fell back with the impact, shoulder slamming into the mantle behind him. This was no longer his fight, he wasn?t trained for this.

Gritting her teeth against the pain Mica leapt at the man, clearing the chair tumbled to the floor and landing on the man?s back, driving him to the floor with two daggers planted in his kidneys. She yanked one free and slashed it across his throat; he was dead before they thumped to the carpet.

Eraph was clearly horrified at her ease of killing, but he had sense enough to not let it distract him. Freed from close combat he knocked another arrow and fired over her shoulder as more men surged into the room. They?d clearly been misinformed about the house being practically empty, the sounds of battle all over the house was surely loud enough that the neighbours would hear.

The mercenaries in the room with them shouted and fell back into the closet and bath room, dragging the man who?d taken Eraph?s arrow through the shoulder.

Mica rolled back over the desk and landed against Eraph, dragging him down to the floor as the twang and then thud above their heads of a crossbow bolt was fired to where Eraph had just been standing.

"Now!" she urged, hoping that was the only crossbow and it would take a moment to reload.

She was correct. Eraph took the chance and took careful aim, catching another man who dared peek out in the throat. She saw him cringe at the gurgle the mercenary made but he kept on firing and he brought down one more man as the hopefully last two flowed into the room, the lead man holding his dead companion up as a human shield. Eraph was running out of arrows.

Eraph growled in frustration, trying to find a shot. Mica slid from behind the desk and threw herself shoulder first against the dead man being held aloft. The man behind grunted in surprise and was pushed back with the impact, causing the last mercenary hiding behind his companion to spill off to the side. Eraph fired two more arrows rapidly, but they found no mark as she rolled around the body and came to face the man she?d knocked back. He roared and swung his sword vertically.

She couldn?t dodge so she met the blade with her daggers, sliding them to their hilts along the blade, and using his momentum steered the blow aside. Before he finished the turn she extracted one blade and planted it in his chin. His final breath rattled out, spitting blood over her face as his body trembled. She paid it no mind, sweeping his sword from his failing grip and leaving her dagger wedged into his skull.

Eraph was hard pressed against the last man who had cornered him. He was cowering behind his bow, using it to block the blows from the man?s sword. She could see the pain in his face, not from the numerous shallow cuts he?d received but from the chips flying off of the crumbling memento of his father.

Eraph stilled and stared, confused, when the man suddenly dropped his arm and gave him a very queer look. A second later the blade Mica had borrowed from the last man punched out through the mercenary?s chest and Eraph cried out in surprise and revulsion as he was sprayed with blood.

They could still hear shouting and the clash of steel outside the room echoing all over the house. The guards who?d been searching the office burst into the hallway; one man was bleeding badly from many wounds and being supported by another.

"Hurry!" the man Eraph recognized as the Queensguard from the day in the garden emerged from the hallway, a bloody sword clutched in his hand. This was the Captain that everyone kept deferring to. The fighting below had quieted with his entrance. He turned to the men trickling into the room and issued a few orders, cursing when one reported that two of the men hadn?t made it. Most of the men he then sent off to retrieve the bodies and get them out of the house as soon as possible, before any of the law enforcement came. Even though they were Queensguard they weren?t above the law and they didn?t want any of this being made public.

Ignoring the guards, Mica went to retrieve her dagger from the dead mercenary and had to brace her foot against his chest, pulling with both hands until the blade worked loose. She made a face at the gore and wiped it clean on his shirt before she returned it to its sheath. When she turned she found Eraph testing the draw of his bow. Even she could tell it was ruined by the creaking and splintering sound the wood made. The strangled noise he made in his throat had her heart going out to him.

But she didn?t have time for pity. Her back was itching terribly. Stepping over the bodies she began to dig through the files in the drawers. Finding one locked and knowing the time for subtlety was past she yanked the sword out of the mercenary?s back she?d killed last and used it to pry the drawer open, ignoring the blood. She tossed the sword aside and held the papers from the drawer up to read them in the moonlight.

Eraph was still standing behind her, uselessly staring at the bow as if he could fix it with his eyes.

Mica turned her back to him, giving him as private a moment as she could to grieve and digest what had just happened. Right now he was heartbroken about the bow, but soon enough it would hit him that he?d killed several men.

She found a sheet of transactions. There were names she didn?t recognize, except for one. Her stomach dropped to her toes and she must have made a sound as Eraph was there, gripping her shoulder. She craned her neck to look up at him, her hands actually trembling. She caught the gaze of all the men left in the room.

"He has a wizard."
 

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