@CaptainAnon While I appreciate the opportunity to have a unique interaction between a dishonorably discharged soldier and the current military on the ship, I'm not sure why a mercenary would be out this far away from any profitable conflicts. The Batarians aren't powerful enough to have any wars, which is why the Alliance and some Council races are lending cruisers and frigates to patrol the area. I'm not saying it's implausible, just want something about it said. Accepted
@TheDoctor455 Try to round out the overall amount of ability both personalities have-there's more to being a good soldier than just shooting straight, it involves complicated protocols, codes, and command decisions. And Telekinesis in the Mass Effect universe, which is among the basic Biotic powers, is said to be fairly taxing. I'm delighted at having a two-faced psychopath to set loose on generic aliens, but I feel like the abilities should be defined more sharply. Otherwise, I like the idea, it's entirely unique. Accepted
@TheDoctor455 Try to round out the overall amount of ability both personalities have-there's more to being a good soldier than just shooting straight, it involves complicated protocols, codes, and command decisions. And Telekinesis in the Mass Effect universe, which is among the basic Biotic powers, is said to be fairly taxing. I'm delighted at having a two-faced psychopath to set loose on generic aliens, but I feel like the abilities should be defined more sharply. Otherwise, I like the idea, it's entirely unique. Accepted