So, I made a Portal Picture

[Soviet Heavy]

After getting Portal, I decided to draw a picture. It isn't coloured, but I like how it turned out, and I would like some feedback.

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What do you guys think? Please offer some constructive criticism if you can. Suggest things I could improve and whatnot.

 

[Heathrow]

Very noice.

 

[Sindre1]

Cool, I like it.

 

[GWarface]

Not bad at all..

 

[voetballeeuw]

Damn. That's really well done. The shading looks great, and the details are nice as well. Granted, I'm not knowledgeable in anything related to art.

 

[Demitri Kamoraz]

that deserves a smirk.

 

[Ima842]

"Spaaaaaace" it was very good you have talent.

 

[Dorian]

Pretty good for just a pencil sketch.

You forgot his scuffed up casing and the cracked lens though.

 

[Radoh]

So, you'd like a critique then?

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Since I assume that's supposed to be Wheatley floating in space, I think you should make him a bit more damaged than his current state.

Beyond that, it is very excellent work, well done!

 

[Dr. Harvey C. Clay]

Vary good.

 

[Soviet Heavy]

So, you'd like a critique then?

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Since I assume that's supposed to be Wheatley floating in space, I think you should make him a bit more damaged than his current state.

Beyond that, it is very excellent work, well done!

Yeah, I haven't quite got the amount of detail on Wheatley as I'd like just yet, but thank you for the critique.

 

[TimeLord]

"Spaaaaaaaaace! We'reinspace!"

Pretty awesome!

 

[Erana]

It shows potential; you're able to commit to your lines and make them work compositionally, even if they're technically inaccurate. Still, you need more pencils. I suggest an HB, 4B and (if you can find them) 8B. I'd love to see what you'd do with the means to create a great range of value.

 

[Gottesstrafe]

Is it just me, or does Wheatley remind you of Guilty Spark?

 

[Kaltazraza]

Awesome picture, though I think the space one is a bit oval.