Tales from the Table: Chapter 11: A Tale of a Lunch Break

[giantgemclips]

Or she could have told him that her boss was controlling and she had to stop coming down until she found another job OR she could have told him that she just had to stop coming down as it was affecting her work but that they could still pursue the relationship outside of work.

It just doesn't ring true. I enjoy the series but this bit of writing didn't work for me.

 

[GrizzlerBorno]

I loled at the water being poured over the screen for flashbacks. Also was Thordin sitting "pants off" in the toilet really necessary? Great show btw. Always excited for these.

 

[DyeDoe]

Or she could have told him that her boss was controlling and she had to stop coming down until she found another job OR she could have told him that she just had to stop coming down as it was affecting her work but that they could still pursue the relationship outside of work.

It just doesn't ring true. I enjoy the series but this bit of writing didn't work for me.

I see your point, but it kinda make sense. Considering how easily she overlooks Thordin's very obvious flaws, she doesn't seems very assertive which makes her pretty easy prey to dominant personality types...if you really want to read into it I liked it, a little "too much information" toilet scene, but nice twist and nice cat earrings (was that on purpose?).

Exactly, HOW does one get PDFs on one's desk? lol

 

[Scarblade]

Yes! I love this!
Will the breakup affect Thoradin's performance in the quest? is Rufus a vault? Will our team keep the watch on the wall? Oh the suspense!

 

[Aureliano]

Great stuff. I really enjoyed the pair's several lunches, each one more ridiculous than the last. And the Harold & Kumar-style resolution to having several lunches. The real versions of the first bunch of mis-remembered flashbacks also matched up really well. Keep up the great work!

 

[thelastone]

Or she could have told him that her boss was controlling and she had to stop coming down until she found another job OR she could have told him that she just had to stop coming down as it was affecting her work but that they could still pursue the relationship outside of work.

Would you go to that much effort to pursue a guy who treats you badly?

OT, there was just so much in this episode that I liked! Thordin's reaction to his first gf not liking Star Wars was great! And did anyone else notice the 20-sided fluffy dice?

Thordin must have enjoyed filming this episode, he just gets to kiss girls and eat food. Niccce.....

 

[MetalMonkey74]

Some brilliant background story guys. this is really fleshing out nicely.

great job!

 

[WeAreJimbo]

Damn, I'm hungry after watching that and still another hour and a half until lunch time. I liked the way they showed the two sides of the story and how you can be deceived into thinking something good happened when you are looking at things through rose tinted glasses.