That doesn't seem to realistic. This is a realistic RP. I guess it's not mine to say, but might want to make him a little more, believable?Y2K Man said:Name: John Sacks
Occupation: Engineer
Date of Birth: June 2nd, 1989
Hobbies: Fixing up old cars and going to the shooting range to test my homemade weapons.
Personality: Keeps to himself because people think he is crazy when in reality he is not. Wants to prove he is only good with his hands not crazy.
Appearance: 6', blonde hair, blue eyes, and buff.
Family: Mother shunned him when he got out of collage due his hobbies, she died 1 month later of a drive by shooting. Ever since then, he has had to take care of his suicidal father.
Bio: He has atychiphobia and often fails, due to this he is often on edge. He tries until he succeeds so he can get conscience aligned. His first accomplishment was repairing my fathers '57 Chevy at age 5. He likes to feel loved.
Alpha Centauri said:Limit; like the other thread is 10 people; 1st come 1st serve
Is it too late to join? If not, here's my character sheet.
Name: Sam McMarkle
Ocupation: Advanced Architectual Designer
DOB (Date of Birth): February 14, 1989
Hobbies: Video games, construction, art
Personality: Outgoing, funny, polite, and educated. Very social person, yet personal as well
Looks: 5'11, shaggy brown hair, turqoise eyes, muscular
Family: No wife or children, would like to start his own family
Bio: Born in Zephyrhills, Florida, at age nine moved to Klamath Falls, Oregon. Abusive mom and father in military, Sam knew how to take care of himself and his two other siblings. Went to University of Oregon, first in his family to graduate college. Executive designer at a major Architecture Association.
Brian, you can do what you want, but the GM will probably refuse this. I don't want to do it for you, but just make him less of a genius and more relateable.Y2K Man said:OK, fine, change what you want. I trust you, I did it in a hurry during lunch.
Sam, who just recently moved into Room 4 earlier today, shows up in his black Ford F-150 and notices James walking down the pathway. Sam calls out to him from his truck, "Hey you!" (he didn't know anyone there for he just moved to Ontario), and quickly steps out to talk to the man. "Hey, I'm fairly new to Toronto and I am still trying to figure my way around here. Can you tell me how to get to W. Phillips Street? I have to deliver a blueprint plot of a new shopping center by 4:30 this afternoon, so could ya please help me out?"Alpha Centauri said:Narrator: It is a warm sunny day, the brids are out and the children are playing in the street; it is Wednesday April 21st 2010
James Pulls up in a truck, parks, and heads to his apartment number. 13.
James turns, and smiles.sunset_savage1393 said:Sam, who just recently moved into Room 4 earlier today, shows up in his black Ford F-150 and notices James walking down the pathway. Sam calls out to him from his truck, "Hey you!" (he didn't know anyone there for he just moved to Ontario), and quickly steps out to talk to the man. "Hey, I'm fairly new to Toronto and I am still trying to figure my way around here. Can you tell me how to get to W. Phillips Street? I have to deliver a blueprint plot of a new shopping center by 4:30 this afternoon, so could ya please help me out?
This going to end badly.... I can just tell.... Your grammar is all the proof I needY2K Man said:There was only two posts, I think.
Hypocritical much? You're always leaving the full stop off the end of sentences.Rainboq said:This going to end badly.... I can just tell.... Your grammar is all the proof I need