The Asylum Game: An Open-Ended Adventure
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And here is your link [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/18.110578-The-Short-Story-Thread?page=11#5757191] Subject Vaudess. As I said I'm not impressed with the ending, but any other critique would be great, from any Subject of course
The course itself is 3 and a half hours and it starts in 2 and a half, thus in about 6 hours you can relax, subject Lambi. What about Tea?
Subject LITV, it was very well-written for a fact. Interesting to read and an good premise. Though the end felt somewhat rushed. Perhaps some more about the therapy she had? More about her declining health?
Subject LITV, it was very well-written for a fact. Interesting to read and an good premise. Though the end felt somewhat rushed. Perhaps some more about the therapy she had? More about her declining health?
That's actually what I was thinking myself Subject Vaudess, I had been discussing it on Twitter with someone, not an hour ago on how it felt rushed. I might end up editing it tonight yet, so that I don't get the same critique over and over again
Don't drink tea, subject Vaude. And I seem to have forgotten to mention that while you Brits may have had to turn your clocks one hour ahead, us Icelanders didn't have to. So it's a bit of a mindfuck that we're still in the same timezone and I'm an hour behind.
Sorry for what Subject Vaudess, I appreciate the critique, I meant after this one, so that I don't hear 10 of the next critiques get blindsided by the ending and have room to hit the rest of the piece so I get an all around critique of it
Every time you look like you're going to fall asleep, subject Lambi, I shall poke you with a stick.
*smiles* Well good luck, subject LITV!
*smiles* Well good luck, subject LITV!
Ah Subject Lambi I've had it for a good long time, I just put it away for a long time, I've had it since...I believe a week after they began circulating. I didn't realize you had one though so good on you.
Thank you for the well wishes Subject always appreciated
Thank you for the well wishes Subject always appreciated
Yes I like to keep the badges I'm proud of on display Subject Lambi, though I have to say my favourite one is the "On a Role," one since I don't believe it'll be in circulation for quite a while, if not ever. On a side note I'm debating starting a RP Digest Up again, just to whip up popularity for RPs again.
Ah Yes subject Lambi you just reminded me of that. Maddawg and myself were talking about how he too was partitioned for such an endeavor. I was a little offended that I wasn't asked, me being one of the first to enter the Digest, but I realized my RPs tend to end rather quickly so I then decided it was better for the Digest that new blood that actually gets hits should be showcased
Aheh...*rubs back of neck* I'll be more careful, subject Lambi.
I think I may need to join another RP. The last long term one I was in went through a lot of pages and I met a lot of great users because of it. Though it's somewhat harder to see one that interests me and I can still join.
I think I may need to join another RP. The last long term one I was in went through a lot of pages and I met a lot of great users because of it. Though it's somewhat harder to see one that interests me and I can still join.