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Awesome huh, subject BT? XD
Also, I know you hate FF XIII but can you read this and tell me what you think of it, writing wise? [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/326.224344-my-time-with-final-fantasy-13]

Am not, subject Vee! *Punches a bear in the crotch* XD
...*Pounces again* RARW! XD
 

BloodyThoughts

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So awesome, I think I may explode of the awesomeness subject Sass. XD
Also, instead of a review, it was more a rant of the whole game. I mean, I hate FF to, but I would still give it a fair chance instead of going into it expecting not to like it. As the first poster said, the paragraph structure is not so good. I also spotted many grammatical and spellings errors in the review. He is very, very nitpicky, as proven with the first paragraph. Also, if your not going to try very hard to write a review, don't do it at all. We are here to read a good review, not a mess.
 

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Hell yeah, subject BT!
And that's what I think as well. Also, he played for 5 hours. Seem familiar much? [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/zero-punctuation/1569-Final-Fantasy-XIII] ...But I do love that video. XD
Bah, I'm trying to think off how to say to him politely "You're an idiot."
 

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Fuck yeah subject Sass! *Heart explodes from awesomeness* It's okay, ill bandage my self up with my own skin! XD
I was going to put that in the comment I just posted, but I decided against it.
 

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How about "That is more like a rant, than a review. And are you really so lazy that you can't learn Roman numerals? They're like, five symbols."

Bonus points if you use V instead of five, subject Sas.
 

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Hell yeah, hardcore subject BT!
I'm instigating he's a bit of a fool but not stating it.

...Dammit, subject Ren! XD
 

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I missed out on that idea, subject Ren and now I feel stupid! XD
 

Ren3004

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Don't worry, subject Sas.

And what about "It's hare to care about your thought on the game when you obviously didn't care enough to proof-read your review and make it coherent."

And how does he say he loves the game when he apparently hates the combat, the reading, and the cutscenes? What does he like? Walking around?
 

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Ok, subject Ren.

And that is more or less what I just told him.