The Shri- God damn it he's just such a bloody Mary Sue, this isn't even fun to write, he wins, there is no villain to cut him down, or at least set him back.... Hmmm. He needs more flaws, problems... Like I have problems a boat load of them... Wait... Curing this Mary Shrike would take a long time or a really sudden sway... But I got problems and flaws like a son of a *****!.... Yess it's perfect!
Justin ran to his room grabbing his video game glasses, touqe, and his 360's controller. A confident grin spread across his face as he stared at his computer screen.
"Its time!" Running full tilt towards his computer desk, running across the room he jumped, fell short and smashed his head on the desk blacking out. Hours later he came to with one hell of a bump on his head. "Right... That shit doesn't happen.... Okay.... Let's use the keyboard this time instead." Justin got to work.
In AA
The Shrike stood arcing lightening out of his body, sending a shockwave from his body frying all the nearby Zerg. He looked around him with his red eyes filled with fury; they then fell upon a boy standing across from him, a video game controller in his hand.
"Well, well, well. Mr. Shrike we finally meet, your life has come full circle!" The boy said impersonating Agent Smith's voice.
"You're talking nonsense, who are you?" The Shrike's voice echoed around the suddenly silent battlefield.
"You were fun while you lasted but it's time you disappear, maybe when you come back you'll be more funny less, you" the boy held the video game controller in a pistol like grip pointing on end at the Shrike. "IT JUST GOT REVOKED!" with that the boy wiggled his finger on the controller like pulling a trigger.
There was no audible gunshot but yet the Shrike felt something pierce through him, it was more than just a shot in the physical world; it was as if his entire character was being attacked. The Shrike's body fell over, his red eye's dimmed, his body turning to silver dust carried off on a random breath of wind.
The boy dusted off his hands, looking at his wrist to check his watching, noticing he didn't actually have a watch, or any chronometer on his person. So the boy waited, kicking the dead bodies, and poking some with sticks.
Then the boy heard what he was waiting for the sounds of steam powered jet turbines. Looking up he saw Steam Ryan above him. Steam Ryan landed looking around.
"You! Have you seen a eight foot tall piece of metal and murder walking around? He's kinda hard to miss!" Said Ryan looking around at all the dead bodies
"Nope but I'm your new hero to replace him" said the boy looking at Ryan.
"So you..." said looking at the boy, he was just under 6 feet tall, didn't seem to musclar, or exceptionally nimble. "And you're going to replace the Shrike?" Ryan scoffed this guy couldn't replace England let alone the fighting machine that the Shrike was.
"Yep" the boy grinned "The name's Justin, and I'm here to chew gum and kick ass" Justin took a strip of spearmint gum from his pocket chewing it.
"Uhh... Whatever just get on the bike" Said Ryan, Justin hopped on behind him awkwardly grabbing onto Ryan.
"Soo... Riding ***** huh... Yeah that's cool with me..." Justin and Ryan took off into the sky heading off to meet the other heroes.
Justin ran to his room grabbing his video game glasses, touqe, and his 360's controller. A confident grin spread across his face as he stared at his computer screen.
"Its time!" Running full tilt towards his computer desk, running across the room he jumped, fell short and smashed his head on the desk blacking out. Hours later he came to with one hell of a bump on his head. "Right... That shit doesn't happen.... Okay.... Let's use the keyboard this time instead." Justin got to work.
In AA
The Shrike stood arcing lightening out of his body, sending a shockwave from his body frying all the nearby Zerg. He looked around him with his red eyes filled with fury; they then fell upon a boy standing across from him, a video game controller in his hand.
"Well, well, well. Mr. Shrike we finally meet, your life has come full circle!" The boy said impersonating Agent Smith's voice.
"You're talking nonsense, who are you?" The Shrike's voice echoed around the suddenly silent battlefield.
"You were fun while you lasted but it's time you disappear, maybe when you come back you'll be more funny less, you" the boy held the video game controller in a pistol like grip pointing on end at the Shrike. "IT JUST GOT REVOKED!" with that the boy wiggled his finger on the controller like pulling a trigger.
There was no audible gunshot but yet the Shrike felt something pierce through him, it was more than just a shot in the physical world; it was as if his entire character was being attacked. The Shrike's body fell over, his red eye's dimmed, his body turning to silver dust carried off on a random breath of wind.
The boy dusted off his hands, looking at his wrist to check his watching, noticing he didn't actually have a watch, or any chronometer on his person. So the boy waited, kicking the dead bodies, and poking some with sticks.
Then the boy heard what he was waiting for the sounds of steam powered jet turbines. Looking up he saw Steam Ryan above him. Steam Ryan landed looking around.
"You! Have you seen a eight foot tall piece of metal and murder walking around? He's kinda hard to miss!" Said Ryan looking around at all the dead bodies
"Nope but I'm your new hero to replace him" said the boy looking at Ryan.
"So you..." said looking at the boy, he was just under 6 feet tall, didn't seem to musclar, or exceptionally nimble. "And you're going to replace the Shrike?" Ryan scoffed this guy couldn't replace England let alone the fighting machine that the Shrike was.
"Yep" the boy grinned "The name's Justin, and I'm here to chew gum and kick ass" Justin took a strip of spearmint gum from his pocket chewing it.
"Uhh... Whatever just get on the bike" Said Ryan, Justin hopped on behind him awkwardly grabbing onto Ryan.
"Soo... Riding ***** huh... Yeah that's cool with me..." Justin and Ryan took off into the sky heading off to meet the other heroes.
So I decided the Shrike is a miserble marry Sue, and not even a fun mary sue so fuck it I'm not the best so why not throw me in here? till I come up with a non mary sue, come on let's get this thread rolling!