Dear Sir\Madam
I'm astounded. This entry was just good.
But, just one complaint. Kinda minor. but it must be said.
As few have mentioned already, the video could be spruced up a bit. Why not have a video slideshow of the events happening as the Radiogame Theatre is being played? Something in the style of, say, Max Payne(bes example I could think up of right now)? If that was't what you were gunning for, at the very least add some more animations to the static room besides the flaming campfire. How about a person sitting in the chair for instance? That moves his\her legs once in a while or even reacts to the radio play as it unfolds?
I really enjoy the Radio Play concept. It reminds me of the old BBC Radio Theatre Plays that I listened to long long ago. To add to the praise, I love the very Outer Limits kind of feel you added to the story. It certainly has piqued my interest on what you will cover next!
You have my vote and best of luck to you!
Regards
Migs