The Heir Apparent: A Fantasy RP (Interest/Sign-up Thread -- APPLICATIONS CLOSED)

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MortifiedPenguin said:
hiei82 said:
MortifiedPenguin said:
CJ1145 said:
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Thoughts CJ? I'll get on to editing the sheet if this fits.

And thanks Hiei
You know, yeah, I think something like that could work. Go ahead and do it. I can't speak for my co-GM, but something like that could work.

hiei82 said:
You misunderstand, I'm not mad about it or anything. I'm just a codger who's stuck in his ways and doesn't like to change what he's already committed to paper. But it's fine, and thanks for the offer, I may end up using them for NPCs at some point.

DarkRawen said:
Described like that I think I can see how it works.
 

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CJ1145 said:
hiei82 said:
You misunderstand, I'm not mad about it or anything. I'm just a codger who's stuck in his ways and doesn't like to change what he's already committed to paper. But it's fine, and thanks for the offer, I may end up using them for NPCs at some point.
I figured you weren't mad - your language didn't suggest it. I was just offering to make some changes if needed to better fit how you planned to make the story; for your convenience.
 

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Name: Alastor Rambert

Sex: Male

Age: 32

Order: The Sheriffs

Appearance: Alastor's stature is hardly imposing, being an average height and weight, with tanned skin as a result of his residence in the sun-filled capital of Advent. Mid-length, swept back auburn hair frames what has been frequently described as a handsome face, only punctuated by a pair of piercing emerald eyes.

Despite previously wearing the rather grandiose outfits befit of his wealth, his transition into becoming a Sheriff has led him to forego elaborate justacorps, instead simply wearing a jerkin and cravat that are his family's colours, green and white. He also always seems to have a pistol on hand, with a mechanism concealed in his sleeve that can feed him a gun in a time of need.
When going into battle, Alastor supplement's his outfit with a cuirass and greaves to provide added protection, as well as gauntlets to channel his magic better whilst inside his armour.

Armour: Dubbed Joachim, Alastor's armour stands at around 15-feet tall, a veritable golem of might. It reflects both his former status in the nobility, as well as his newfound place as a in the order of Sheriffs, a defender of the innocent against the indignant. Originally a glistening gold, over time it's shine has dulled, becoming more reminiscent of being copper. Joachim is made up of large pieces of blockish, yet ornate pieces of plate, with the pauldrons having gear-like edges, and the helm having a v-shaped protrusion.

As a Sheriff, Alastor's armour makes use of the applications of gunpowder. Each of Joachim's fingers functions as a concealed cannon, able to be fired off individually or clustered together as a barrage. Also incorporated into the armour are two arm mounted ballistas that fire heavy metal bolts-highly effective as siege weapons.

However, Joachim's main weapon is a large spiked flail with a variable length chain, which is able to be retracted to function as a morningstar mace, or extended to reach distant targets. It's chain can be used to entangle enemies, an is able to restrain even the mightiest of foes. The spiked mace is of course also filled with explosives, with a switch on the handle that can be used to detach it. Finally, the v-shaped protrusion on the helm of Joachim's armour is a bladed boomerang, it's blade and returnability helped via the application of magic.

Apart from the manipulation of his armour, Alastor's magic is mainly Earth focused, and is used to extract minerals from the nearby surroundings, usually for crafting into explosives and projectiles to refill his munitions.

Personality: Alastor is known for his incredible stoicism, being a fierce adherent to his own personal philosophy that extols the virtues of wisdom, courage, justice, and temperance. All of these he sees as the means to achieve true peace of mind, essential for clear judgement. Alastor believes that unhappiness and evil are the direct results of human ignorance and greed, and he therefore lives his life according to reason and virtue, and trying his hardest to ensure the safety and security of other by extolling the benefits of education.

Around others, he is generally as talkative as the he perceives the mood allows, preferring to not be outspoken except in cases that he feels particularly strongly about. Whilst perceived as an ascetic, Alastor allows himself to indulge in the odd vice here and there, with ale being a known favourite of his, and has been known to have many a time loosened his tongue.

Bio: Born into an influential family, Alastor was raised in the exquisite city of Advent, anything he wanted never being more than a stone's throw away. His parents were unusual in that they actually believed in nurturing him and spending quality time encouraging him was extremely beneficial to Alastor's well-being, and was instrumental in allowing him to follow his dream of becoming of Mage.

With the help of his family's wealth and connections, Alastor applied himself religiously to the studies of magic and it's applications for good, determined to use it as a tool to spread his ideology of stability through knowledge. During his years of study, he saw the Duke's usurping of the throne from the rightful monarchy, and saw the potential politically instability it could bring. Despite being among the privileged few, his views of universal education and suffrage had proved unwelcome with the upper classes, and therefore he always felt he was more related to the people, seeing them as being able to accomplish great things but only if the government gave the necessary tools.

At the age of 22, Alastor answered Renault Arche's call to arms, seeing his proposition of a Parliament as just what the nation needed, in order to elevate the downtrodden and narrow the divide between those with money, and those without. Living in Hasthfold's capital, Alastor saw the emergence of gunpowder as a powerful force in the upcoming warfare, a view that was shared by Renault Arche himself; and so it was only natural that Alastor joined his Order of Sheriffs both to keep order and protect the public, as well as forge a bright new future for the nation under the notion of a fair Parliament, using his newly constructed armour as the means to do so.

For seven long years, he fought in the name of Parliament and Renault Arche, determined that his cause was good and just. But they were losing. Alastor was no fool, he knew that it was only a matter of time before the Parliamentarian's began to falter; they were not prepared for a war this arduous. Assigned to patrol a small mountain town, Alastor felt his talent was being mismanaged which only added to his growing disillusionment with the Parliamentarian regime, and he began thinking over what he could do.
And then it happened. Slow at first, but increasing everyday, rumours began to spread amongst the town. He heard that Lisbeth, the rightful heir to the throne, was gathering an army north of the mountains, and that they were in need of talented Mages and their Armours to help her claim her birthright.

Inspired by the girl's resurgence of support, Alastor saw the burgeoning Queen as the new light of hope to the nation, a regime unburdened with the politics that had engulfed his once great nation. Although the monarchy had not been the government that had traditionally promoted equality, perhaps he could find a way to change that from the inside, by becoming one of her trusted advisors that she would surely need as a new regent. It was then that Alastor marched with Joachim to meet Lisbeth's army, swearing his allegiance to her cause.


I've finally added a bio, so feel free to critique as necessary :)
 

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All applications are now CLOSED. I think you all know what that means!

The accepted sheets are:
Wenseph said:
Mary "Noose" Derleth
Rogue Trooper said:
Lysander Kantor
DarkRawen said:
Arthur Sol
Terratina. said:
Caspian von Brandt
HellsingerAngel said:
Ambrose Ausoman
Pappytech said:
Marcus Leitner
hiei82 said:
Lady Alexis Leveque d'Aur, Knight of her Majesty, Rightful-Queen Lisbeth Solari
JokerboyJordan said:
Alastor Rambert
Pandalisk said:
Rickard of Langenberg
Congrats!

My sincerest apologies to those that didn't make the cut. We had a really strong crop of applicants! CJ and I will be in touch about information concerning the RP very soon.
 

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MortifiedPenguin said:
I thought CJ said it would be closed in 2 days, the 23rd, isn't it a bit early?
DarkRawen said:
Arcanist said:
You told Penguin you would let her rewrite her sheet, but you didn't give her the time to do it. :/
These points are a bit related - there was a bit of a miscommunication between CJ and myself. We'll give her until tomorrow, as promised.

Until then, consider the list above the sheets to beat.
 

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Name: Miranda Thrussell

Sex: Female

Age: 27

Order: The Diviners

Appearance: Miranda?s hair is a bright strawberry blonde, with all the brown she surrounds herself in it is her most striking feature, accompanied with green eyes and a smattering of faint freckles that stretch across the bridge of her nose. She halfs damns her pale skin for the frequency that is burns from too much exposure from the sun. Miranda tends to wear her hair in a unkempt bun with, strands of hair findings new way to escape every time she rearranges it. She stands at 5?7 at the average weight of her slim physique.

More not wanting for the stains to show than be fashionable, she has some sense of coordination when it comes to what she wears, but only as much to match a few colours together. Miranda?s attire usually consists of of an mostly brown outfit with a white blouse. Her boots, brown, are knee high and have small but flat heels. Arching from the ankle is what keeps them on, a row of sullied brass buttons with a zip hidden underneath; her slightly baggy, brown, trousers are tucked into them.

Around her waist lies an holster with a small firearm tucked into into, the belt it is attached to has a (one of the few things she will take care off) brightly polished brass belt. Miranda wears a loose fitting leather jacket (again with brass buttons), on top of a white blouse that has a pattern that is slightly frilly embroidered into the top of it. Lastly, around her neck she wear a neckerchief obscuring a locket that holds a picture of her family that is tied on a tight leather thong.

Armour: Unusually, Miranda?s armour does not take the form of a bipedal humanoid, but instead it is shaped in the form of a bird. It lacks the impressive height of other armours standing at a mere 6ft, however what it lacks in imposing size it makes up for in length, at about 16ft long, the same size of it?s wingspan. Shaped like the eagles that flock to the peak of Heavensview, its facade it lined with intricately carved faux feathers and inside the beak of the armour hides one of its more impressive armaments.

stationed in the ?beak? of the armour, there is a large cannon, the most powerful weapon this armour has to offer, a ?miniature? siege weapon that takes a minute or so to charge up to its full might. When that magical energy is released, a beam of unprecedented power is unleashed upon whoever is unfortunate enough to be its target. This she calls the ?Aether Strike?. And that?s all either, the beady eyes of the armour can perform a quick scan of other armours, giving her basic information of the weapons that armour possesses.

The unfortunate side effect is that the metal plating of the armour is thinner and brittler than most; after a few hits from enemy fire and it will come crashing down like a lead brick. However to Miranda the cost was worth it, as its lightness ensured extra maneuverability and the ability for it fly - just like the creatures it was modelled after.

For it to fly, or more accurately glide Miranda uses wind magic to keep it aloft; whenever the armour starts descending she will use a short burst of magic to create a gust of wind and propel it upwards. With this, she has a bird?s eye view of the battlefield, however she also has to take care and avoid the projectiles of those that would wish to break her wings.

Personality: A free spirit. Miranda values her freedom above all else, she hates those who would try and take that away from her, and pities those who let their freedom be taken without a fight. Kind to a fault, and a bit naive, she won?t just stand by, she will go out of her way to help them regain it. Nevertheless, when not fighting for others freedom, she is playful in a regard, often joking, making light of bad situations and often tries to turn more serious conversations into playful banter.She will unthinkingly take risks, diving in her armour lowing then is really needed, ?playing chicken? as it were and getting high of the adrenaline of battle.

Bio: Growing up in Heavensview, the supposed center of the world and a crossroads of sorts for the many people who would visit it; Miranda felt stuck. Her potential for magic was detected at an early age, and although her parents made sure that she wouldn?t be joining an order until they felt she was at the right age to leave home, it meant that her life was preordained before she could say anything about it. She did what many placed in the same situation would do; she rebelled.

Going against her parents wishes, and possibly common sense; she would spend the time when not studying magic to scale the mountain which their home duchy was named after. There she would look over the world, mesmerised at small it looked compared to how big it sounded. Miranda would also study the birds that flocked around the peak, one of her favourite presents was a sketch book with charcoals, which she would take with her on the climb. In it numerous sketches of birds in flight.

She grew to admire the birds she studied, adoring their free spiritedness, however this only made her feel more trapped within the world, her world. She had never asked for the talent of magic that she possessed, without it she wouldn?t have to join an order once she came of age, she would be free to explore the world and do what she wished. Instead she was stuck here, tied the wills of others and not her own.

Towards the date that her parents had chosen her to leave for the diviners, Miranda had become increasingly restless and stressed that the small amount of freedom she had might be taken away from her. Miranda decided that the only course of action that would finally give her the freedom she wanted was to run away. However that notion was short lived. She had succeeded in quietly slipping away, but what she had not been prepared for was the outside world, the world she had so longingly yearned for, she was overrun by the reality outside of her quaint home and mountain.

She only lasted a few days before the cold, the hunger and the loneliness got to her; it was on her return when her elder brother Joshua whom she had never been close to because of his lengthy trips away from home found and took her back home where she received a lengthy scolding and was sent to her room. The day after, once her parents had time to calm down and no longer had to fret about the safety of their daughter, they called a family meeting of sorts. Miranda told them why she had run away, her parents tried be understanding, but they were frustrated that she hadn?t spoken to them about this earlier, that if she had just talked to them the situation wouldn?t have gotten as dire as it had. Reassuring that the diviners wouldn?t be as bad as she thought, they helped her pack her things and gave her a locket with a picture of them and her family to remind her of home.

They were right, it wasn?t as bad as she thought, however the locket has the inverse effect that her parents had intended; it reminded her of home, but it also made her more homesick. Longing for the high peaks of Heavensview and not the verdant flatlands of Faeborough. Instead of running away she spent years studying magic and creating a new, unconventional armour. Formed after one of her longest passions; one shaped like a bird, not a man.

Unfortunately war erupted within the duchies and with her completed armour she knew she would be forced to pick a side. Neither agreeing or wanting what each side fought for, she decided to fight to keep her family out of the conflict. After all, all she had wanted since the war had begun was to return to her family home intact, with both her family and (knowing the destructive power of the armours) her homeland untouched by the conflict. She knew it would be risky, both sides had taken heavy casualties, but it was only fair way Miranda could think of to pick the side she would fight for. She flipped a coin to decide her allegiance. Heads for the Queen, tails for the parliamentarians and the duke.

Heads it was.

Here's the edited version.
 

DarkRawen

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Has this been abandoned? Or are you working on it? I'm just asking, since we haven't heard anything for a few days. :/
 

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Yes, we are working on it. We've spent some time debating the decision, and have decided that we will be sticking with the accepted roster that Arcanist previously posted.

We are now in the process of setting up the in-game thread, an will be working on an Escapist group as well as a Skype group in the immediate future.
 

MortifiedPenguin

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CJ1145 said:
Yes, we are working on it. We've spent some time debating the decision, and have decided that we will be sticking with the accepted roster that Arcanist previously posted.

We are now in the process of setting up the in-game thread, an will be working on an Escapist group as well as a Skype group in the immediate future.
Thanks. No feedback or anything, I may as well have not bothered.
 

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I hope to Christ that this RP will be the dogs bollocks, I've never waited this long to start an RP in my life.
 

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MortifiedPenguin said:
Thanks. No feedback or anything, I may as well have not bothered.
The feedback was that you weren't accepted, unless you're that bothered about hearing every reason why not, than I'd probably leave it.

Looking forward to this RP when it gets started.

Rogue Trooper said:
I hope to Christ that this RP will be the dogs bollocks, I've never waited this long to start an RP in my life.
Be thankful for the RPs that do get off the ground, as I've applied for many that simply haven't
 

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JokerboyJordan said:
MortifiedPenguin said:
Thanks. No feedback or anything, I may as well have not bothered.
The feedback was that you weren't accepted, unless you're that bothered about hearing every reason why not, than I'd probably leave it.
Let's say you weren't accepted. Now, would you just leave, or would you like to hear why you weren't accepted? Not because you wish to nitpick, or argue, but simply because you can use it for other sheets, or because you wish to have the whole thing dealt with in your mind. Even if you're the kind of person that would just prefer to leave it, that doesn't mean everyone else is. So there's no need to be rude about it.

Also, she is not requesting feedback. She is showing disappointment in that she did not receive the feedback she had hoped she would get, from what I can see.
 

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DarkRawen said:
JokerboyJordan said:
MortifiedPenguin said:
Thanks. No feedback or anything, I may as well have not bothered.
The feedback was that you weren't accepted, unless you're that bothered about hearing every reason why not, than I'd probably leave it.
Let's say you weren't accepted. Now, would you just leave, or would you like to hear why you weren't accepted? Not because you wish to nitpick, or argue, but simply because you can use it for other sheets, or because you wish to have the whole thing dealt with in your mind. Even if you're the kind of person that would just prefer to leave it, that doesn't mean everyone else is. So there's no need to be rude about it.

Also, she is not requesting feedback. She is showing disappointment in that she did not receive the feedback she had hoped she would get, from what I can see.
My annoyance is that I changed/expanded the parts of my sheet they were unhappy with so I'm curious why it was not accepted. If they just wanted to have the people they had already chosen they should have said so instead of giving me time to edit my sheet and raise my hopes of being accepted.
 

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MortifiedPenguin said:
DarkRawen said:
JokerboyJordan said:
MortifiedPenguin said:
Thanks. No feedback or anything, I may as well have not bothered.
The feedback was that you weren't accepted, unless you're that bothered about hearing every reason why not, than I'd probably leave it.
Let's say you weren't accepted. Now, would you just leave, or would you like to hear why you weren't accepted? Not because you wish to nitpick, or argue, but simply because you can use it for other sheets, or because you wish to have the whole thing dealt with in your mind. Even if you're the kind of person that would just prefer to leave it, that doesn't mean everyone else is. So there's no need to be rude about it.

Also, she is not requesting feedback. She is showing disappointment in that she did not receive the feedback she had hoped she would get, from what I can see.
My annoyance is that I changed/expanded the parts of my sheet they were unhappy with so I'm curious why it was not accepted. If they just wanted to have the people they had already chosen they should have said so instead of giving me time to edit my sheet and raise my hopes of being accepted.
Agreed

I completely forgot about this RP for a while there till I saw it on the front page, still nothing happening?
 

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Pandalisk said:
I completely forgot about this RP for a while there till I saw it on the front page, still nothing happening?
From what I've heard, they are still working on it. Will probably be a lot of text in the OP, considering.